User contributions for MartinRinehart
A user with 221 edits. Account created on 28 November 2006.
10 May 2024
- 12:3512:35, 10 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Even–odd rule Changed "computer graphics vector standard" to "computer vector graphics standard" current
15 August 2023
- 14:5214:52, 15 August 2023 diff hist −4 Comparison of programming languages Deleted [the] from "programming languages follow [the] rules for" (introductory para). (There is not one set of rules.))
6 August 2023
- 15:4015:40, 6 August 2023 diff hist +351 Talk:Borland →Incomprehensible sentence: new section Tag: New topic
- 15:2815:28, 6 August 2023 diff hist −1 m Ashton-Tate changed 'transduction' to 'transaction' (MultiMate section)
2 May 2023
- 15:3615:36, 2 May 2023 diff hist +16 Page (paper) This is one of a series of edits to the opening paragraph. The short description changed to say 'one side or both sides'...
30 January 2023
- 15:1915:19, 30 January 2023 diff hist +565 Talk:David Crosby →who abetted whom?: new section Tag: New topic
30 July 2022
- 12:2012:20, 30 July 2022 diff hist +10 m Unary operation No edit summary
28 July 2022
- 14:2114:21, 28 July 2022 diff hist +4 m Java (programming language) Original said Java was "developed and released in 1995" Ambiguous. Corrected to "developed. It was released..."
29 April 2022
- 15:4515:45, 29 April 2022 diff hist −1 Java (programming language) →Documentation: incorrect as was. Single-line comments start '//'. They are code before '//' (if any) and comment from the '//'.
22 March 2022
- 17:2117:21, 22 March 2022 diff hist +1 m JavaScript Word "paradigm" made plural: "paradigms" (note: seven paradigms are listed) Tag: Reverted
- 17:1417:14, 22 March 2022 diff hist −1 JavaScript →History: One sentence "... hot new language so Eich considered the JavaScript name a marketing ploy by Netscape." changed in two ways. First, made two sentences: "hot new language. Eich considered..." Additionally, the word 'so' was deleted. The reference shows that Eich thought it was marketing BS, but does not demonstrate causality, which "so" implies. Tag: Reverted
17 January 2022
- 19:1619:16, 17 January 2022 diff hist +165 Talk:Going steady No edit summary
23 December 2021
- 10:2610:26, 23 December 2021 diff hist 0 m JavaScript Oops! fixed the plural possessive from "user's " to "users' "
- 09:4609:46, 23 December 2021 diff hist −1 m JavaScript made plural "code on user's device" to "JavaScript on user's devices" (intro para)
20 December 2021
- 09:3909:39, 20 December 2021 diff hist −1 Imperative programming →Rationale and foundations of imperative programming: "until some condition changes" now "some condition is met." (Program calculating pi loops until value no longer changes.)
5 November 2021
- 16:1216:12, 5 November 2021 diff hist 0 m Apple II (original) →Case design: Printed circuit board now w/lowercase p
6 August 2021
- 17:2817:28, 6 August 2021 diff hist −15 m Orgasm gap →Sexual behaviour and reaching orgasm: changed first 'vaginal-penile intercourse' to 'PIV (penis-in-vagina) intercourse' and changed the next two to simply 'PIV intercourse/PIV penetratiom'
- 17:1817:18, 6 August 2021 diff hist 0 m Orgasm gap →Sexual behaviour and reaching orgasm: changed 'practise' to 'practice' (British to American)
- 17:1117:11, 6 August 2021 diff hist +4 m Orgasm gap →Sex education: type fixed: 'centring preventative' changed to 'centering on preventative'
- 17:0417:04, 6 August 2021 diff hist −1 m Talk:Antisexualism →Arguements against: Now spelled 'Arguments'
22 July 2021
- 13:2113:21, 22 July 2021 diff hist +3 m Frederica (novel) →Plot summary: '... into "the ton" and the subsequent [[Season ...' to '... into "the ton" during the subsequent [[Season ...'
15 July 2021
- 21:2421:24, 15 July 2021 diff hist −3 m Bristlecone pine two repeats of ''Pinus longaeva'' replaced by one ''Pinus longaeva'' and one ''of this species''
14 June 2021
- 17:0617:06, 14 June 2021 diff hist −5 m List of works by Georgette Heyer "[her husband] who made devised the murder method" to "[her husband] who devised the murder method"
10 June 2021
- 13:2813:28, 10 June 2021 diff hist +4 m Typewriter term papers replaced by 'written assignments' (it's not just term papers that are typed).
7 June 2021
- 14:2014:20, 7 June 2021 diff hist 0 m Football 'competitions' to 'associations' (referring to the first pro league)
27 May 2021
- 16:1616:16, 27 May 2021 diff hist +4 m My Cousin Rachel →Plot summary: cousin Philip since Philip was three (repeated name, 'he' was ambiguous)
21 April 2021
- 12:2912:29, 21 April 2021 diff hist +2 m Chester, Orange County, New York →History: 'ship their prices' changed to 'ship their products'
14 April 2021
- 12:2512:25, 14 April 2021 diff hist 0 m East Indies 'as the name suggests' to 'as the names suggest'
- 12:2312:23, 14 April 2021 diff hist −1 m East Indies 'this or that is..'. changed to 'this and that are...'
23 February 2021
- 16:0316:03, 23 February 2021 diff hist +537 Talk:The Flame and the Flower →Problem in "Publication" section: Seconding the question, is the author getting 4% royalty (niggardly) or 4% of royalties (nothing).
21 February 2021
- 11:1911:19, 21 February 2021 diff hist +761 Talk:Suspension of disbelief →Terrible article
- 09:2309:23, 21 February 2021 diff hist +374 Talk:Beat (filmmaking) →Beats -wrong definition
- 09:1009:10, 21 February 2021 diff hist +319 Talk:Beat →Missing sense: Literary plots are often described with beats. Novelists and other authors often use beat-based plot structures. current
20 February 2021
- 11:3111:31, 20 February 2021 diff hist +698 Talk:Hypnosis →Question re a word: new section
10 February 2021
- 14:3814:38, 10 February 2021 diff hist −6 m Pride and Prejudice →Plot summary: 'soon is clear' (referring to Bingley's feelings re Jane) replaced by 'appears that'
- 14:3514:35, 10 February 2021 diff hist −37 m Pride and Prejudice →Plot summary: phrase re Jane having, she thinks, lost Bingley 'leaving Jane upset, though composed' deleted. Jane's feelings are too complex for a simple phrase.
- 14:3014:30, 10 February 2021 diff hist +9 m Pride and Prejudice →Plot summary: vague 'several Bennet family members' made specific 'Elizabeth's mother and younger sisters'
17 January 2021
- 09:2609:26, 17 January 2021 diff hist +4 m Pride and Prejudice →Plot summary: Changed 'She rejects him' to 'She rejects Collins' (as was, 'him' could be Mr. Bennet)
1 November 2020
- 14:2214:22, 1 November 2020 diff hist −3 m Sybian →Specifications: 'controlled through a remote control' now 'controlled with a remote control'
- 14:1614:16, 1 November 2020 diff hist −3 m Sybian →Specifications: 'cover and the casing has built-in finger grips' made into two sentences: 'cover. The casing has built-in finger grips
- 14:1414:14, 1 November 2020 diff hist 0 m Sybian →Specifications: 'built in finger grips' changed to 'built-in finger grips' (compound adjective)
- 14:1214:12, 1 November 2020 diff hist −12 Sybian →Specifications: 'padded cover made out of naugahyde' reduced to '
- 14:0614:06, 1 November 2020 diff hist −5 m Sybian →Specifications: Word 'both' dropped from 'Both power and vibration/rotation'
- 14:0414:04, 1 November 2020 diff hist +17 m Sybian →Specifications: 'clitoris, vulva and anus' changed to 'clitoral glans, vaginal entrance and anus' (this is a copyedit. These are parts of the clitoral network, front to back.Claim should be fact-checked!)
- 13:5813:58, 1 November 2020 diff hist −7 m Sybian →Specifications: 'entire pelvic floor' reduced to 'pelvic floor'
- 13:5513:55, 1 November 2020 diff hist −9 m Sybian →Specifications: now 'the Sybian distributes vibrations' (was 'the Sybian distributes powerful vibrations')
- 13:5313:53, 1 November 2020 diff hist −13 m Sybian →Specifications: reduced 'has a weight of' to 'weighs' (now reads 'weighs 22 pounds')
- 13:4913:49, 1 November 2020 diff hist −8 m Sybian deleted the word 'powerful' (from 'two powerful electric motors')
27 October 2020
- 16:3616:36, 27 October 2020 diff hist +1 m Reinforcement →Criticisms: Added comma after 'Increasingly' (start of 2nd para)
20 October 2020
- 14:2914:29, 20 October 2020 diff hist 0 Twisted (Annie Ross song) changed semicolon to period: ...New Group In Jazz. Gramophone described...
