User contributions for ManuelKomnenos
A user with 1,973 edits. Account created on 1 August 2018.
24 May 2024
- 02:1702:17, 24 May 2024 diff hist −21 Theodora (wife of Theophilos) →Selection and marriage: More straightforward construction current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:5801:58, 24 May 2024 diff hist +3 Constantine VIII →Adulthood: Rewording, to stop “devoted” from appearing twice in the same passage current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1001:10, 24 May 2024 diff hist +77 Constantine VIII →Family: Put back some of passage about Theophano’s reputation— upon reflection, her personality *is* relevant to this article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0601:06, 24 May 2024 diff hist −522 Constantine VIII →Family: Drastically paired down a paragraph— details about Romanos’ first marriage, Theophano’s antecedents and reputation, and the conversion of Vladimir I are all peripheral to the biography of Constantine, and the whole was floridly worded and short on sources Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:3700:37, 24 May 2024 diff hist −8 Zeno (emperor) More straightforward way of putting it current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 May 2024
- 18:0618:06, 23 May 2024 diff hist −2 Origo gentis Romanae Merged two sentences current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5817:58, 23 May 2024 diff hist −2 Itinerarium Removed stray pipe, space, and capital letter from piped link current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5117:51, 23 May 2024 diff hist −4 Metapontum →Early history: Removed wikilink, which goes to a philosopher dated centuries after the Leucippus discussed here (unless there’s a lot more information preserved about the relevant Leucippus than appears here, I don’t see much potential for a standalone article and have not made his name a red link) current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4617:46, 23 May 2024 diff hist −52 Metapontum →Foundation: Simplified a sentence (the precise geography of Crisa isn’t needed in this context); restructured a subsequent sentence for flow, and added a wikilink to the specifically Ancient Greek meaning of hero Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:4402:44, 23 May 2024 diff hist +116 Bride-show Added wikilinks to the people shown in an illustration current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:3902:39, 23 May 2024 diff hist −60 Belthandros and Chrysantza →Contents and style: Simplified opening to a paragraph (which was phrased as though multiple topics were to be covered, although it dealt only with the beauty contest); removed description of a custom and substituted a link to its Wikipedia page current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 May 2024
- 12:4712:47, 22 May 2024 diff hist −88 Palaeologan Renaissance →Icons: Rearranged a section, for flow current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:3612:36, 22 May 2024 diff hist −5 Count Theodosius →Legacy: Bifurcated and otherwise reworded an unwieldy sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:3212:32, 22 May 2024 diff hist +48 Count Theodosius →Magister Equitum Praesentalis: Variance of diction; explained what, specifically, was common practice at the time Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:2912:29, 22 May 2024 diff hist −16 Count Theodosius →The Great Conspiracy: Moved Theodosius’ landing site from the sentence dealing with the crossing to the sentence dealing with his arrival in Britannia Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:5601:56, 22 May 2024 diff hist +21 Bagaudae Revolt →Commencement: Minor rewrite, for flow current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:5401:54, 22 May 2024 diff hist −15 Bagaudae Revolt →Background: Rearranged an unwieldy sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:5201:52, 22 May 2024 diff hist +8 Bagaudae Revolt Piped wikilink— “Salvianus”, unpiped, goes to something other than the priest Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 May 2024
- 14:2214:22, 21 May 2024 diff hist −37 Palaeologan Renaissance →The Palaeologan style: Rearranged parts Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1714:17, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0 Palaeologan Renaissance →History: Fixed order of author’s first and last names in a citation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1514:15, 21 May 2024 diff hist −42 Palaeologan Renaissance →Architecture: Rearranged some bits and pieces of a paragraph, for flow Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:1114:11, 21 May 2024 diff hist −10 Palaeologan Renaissance →Architecture: Removed a superfluous word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:0914:09, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0 Battle of Mardia →Aftermath: A couple of more conventional word choices current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 May 2024
- 19:1619:16, 20 May 2024 diff hist +80 Philostorgius →Value: Rewrite for clarity current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:0819:08, 20 May 2024 diff hist −45 Temple of Venus and Roma →History: Added wikilink to Ammianus Marcellinus; rewrote section about Eugenius, better explaining his motivations and removing superfluous reference to his opponent Theodosius I; added a couple of commas current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:0219:02, 20 May 2024 diff hist −154 Temple of Venus and Roma →History: Rewrote a paragraph for flow, and removed line about the Colossus of Nero (it was moved long before the temple building commenced, and is consequently tangential to this article) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:5618:56, 20 May 2024 diff hist −13 Temple of Venus and Roma Removed superfluous “in Rome”— temple is identified as being in Ancient Rome in prior sentence, and the landmarks given are all in Rome as well Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:5318:53, 20 May 2024 diff hist −4 Arbogast (magister militum) →Debate about the death of Valentinian II: Punctuation correction current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:5118:51, 20 May 2024 diff hist −34 Philostorgius →Value: Punctuation corrections Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:4618:46, 20 May 2024 diff hist +13 Philostorgius Added wikilink (article had one to the Arian controversy, but not to Arianism itself) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:3818:38, 20 May 2024 diff hist −27 Heraion of Samos Rebuilt an unwieldy sentence— the new version still isn’t ideal, but I think its parts are in better order current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2918:29, 20 May 2024 diff hist +6 Ascalon →Persian, Hellenistic and Roman periods: Specified the culture which commissioned the sarcophagus current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2518:25, 20 May 2024 diff hist −16 Ascalon Bifurcated and otherwise rebuilt an unwieldy sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2018:20, 20 May 2024 diff hist −12 Porta Asinaria Rebuilt a sentence, for clarity and greater independence from the wording of the source text current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:1118:11, 20 May 2024 diff hist +1 Gothic War (535–554) →Background: Moved picture of Theodoric to subsection dealing with his reign current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:0918:09, 20 May 2024 diff hist +22 Gothic War (535–554) →Belisarius: Rewrote a couple of sentences for flow Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:0118:01, 20 May 2024 diff hist +2 A Kiss Before Dying (novel) →Plot: Bifurcated my own unwieldy sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5917:59, 20 May 2024 diff hist +321 Talk:Arcadius →Bust of Arcadius: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 16:2016:20, 20 May 2024 diff hist +84 Rhadamistus →Life: Added wikilink to the contemporary Kingdom of Armenia, rewriting a sentence to accommodate it; elsewhere, removed wikilink to modern Armenia current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1416:14, 20 May 2024 diff hist −353 Rhadamistus →Life: Further removals of flowery language; rewordings, to remove my own repetitive diction from prior edits; removed some bits and pieces that seemed superfluous to an article specifically about Rhadamistus Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
19 May 2024
- 22:5722:57, 19 May 2024 diff hist +134 Rhadamistus →Life: Rephrased a couple of sentences Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:0518:05, 19 May 2024 diff hist −51 Theodosia Ivie →Portrayal in fiction: Condensed description of M.R. James story, and moved it to the end of the section (where it belongs chronologically) current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:4914:49, 19 May 2024 diff hist −4 Galla (wife of Julius Constantius) →Biography: Tried to structure a sentence with the addition of a colon; changed “his cousin” to “her cousin”, since the person referred to in that phrase seemed to be the daughter current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 May 2024
- 22:4122:41, 18 May 2024 diff hist +2 Palaeologan Renaissance →Architecture: Tense fix
- 22:3322:33, 18 May 2024 diff hist +548 Palaeologan Renaissance →Architecture: Added two more facts from Cyril Mango's 1978 monograph
- 21:4321:43, 18 May 2024 diff hist +2 Zeno (emperor) →Son-in-law of Leo I: Rewrote a sentence, which, as constructed, read as though the monks, not Zeno, failed to repress the violence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:4713:47, 18 May 2024 diff hist −1 Constantius III →The war against Heraclianus: Removed extra space current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:4313:43, 18 May 2024 diff hist +309 User talk:StarTrekker →Question about Nigrinian: Reply current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 13:3713:37, 18 May 2024 diff hist −1 Nigrinian →Research: Removed stray word and added some commas current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 13:3513:35, 18 May 2024 diff hist +645 User talk:StarTrekker →Question about Nigrinian: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic