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A user with 104 edits. Account created on 3 October 2006.
16 February 2023
- 02:0502:05, 16 February 2023 diff hist −180 Saint-Quentin, Aisne see talk for bias and sourcing of the history section Tag: Reverted
- 01:5601:56, 16 February 2023 diff hist +1,034 Talk:Saint-Quentin, Aisne →Bias and Sources (History): new section Tag: New topic
9 February 2022
- 01:1001:10, 9 February 2022 diff hist +624 Talk:Sean Meenan →Promotional tone: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0001:00, 9 February 2022 diff hist +36 Sean Meenan This article reads like it was written by the subject or someone working on his behalf. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
25 November 2021
- 08:4308:43, 25 November 2021 diff hist +1,038 Talk:Effect of World War I on children in the United States →Reads like an essay & also repetitive: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:2908:29, 25 November 2021 diff hist +91 Effect of World War I on children in the United States Added tag for multiple issues. This reads like an essay, and repeats several points many times. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 March 2021
- 16:3216:32, 31 March 2021 diff hist +10 m Earth Day Linked first instance of John McConnell in the text to the correct wiki article. It was already correct in the info box.
25 March 2021
- 19:1319:13, 25 March 2021 diff hist +4 m Dapsone →Contraindications and precautions: Made "Methemoglobinemia" a wikilink. Currently first appearance on page.
13 March 2021
- 23:2423:24, 13 March 2021 diff hist 0 m Virtual reality therapy Fixed capitalization of "virtual reality" (was inconsistently treated as a proper name) and "social isolation". I only changed the text, not citation titles or tags.
18 October 2020
- 18:2118:21, 18 October 2020 diff hist +28 Richard Roberts (evangelist) Added tag for tone. Frequently sounds like an advertisement, but also switches between present/past tense. And other stylistic issues throughout.
5 September 2020
- 20:1820:18, 5 September 2020 diff hist +31 Calvert School Tag for appearance of advertising
30 June 2018
- 18:3518:35, 30 June 2018 diff hist +8 m Evacuations of children in Germany during World War II →Evacuation from air raids: The tag for Adolf Hitler's name was unfinished.
19 June 2015
- 14:4014:40, 19 June 2015 diff hist −13 Acron Changed link on "jeux de mot" to go to the article on wordplay instead of the non-existent Wiktionary article
12 April 2015
- 20:1220:12, 12 April 2015 diff hist +4 m Teton Dam →External links: The URL for the Teton Dam Museum has changed.
13 March 2015
- 21:3821:38, 13 March 2015 diff hist +232 1986 Cokeville Elementary School hostage crisis Added citation to the New York Times article
22 February 2015
- 19:4019:40, 22 February 2015 diff hist +50 John Newcomen Added links to the articles for John Winthrop and William Hubbard.
20 February 2015
- 00:0000:00, 20 February 2015 diff hist +4 m Jizya →Islamic legal commentary: Made "dinar" a link as this is the first appearance in the article.
19 February 2015
- 23:5823:58, 19 February 2015 diff hist +4 m Jizya →Etymology and meaning: Made "Dar al-Harb" a link to the article as this is the first appearance of it on the page.
- 23:5723:57, 19 February 2015 diff hist −15 Dar al-Harb The redirect isn't working, because of the "(word of war)" parenthetical.
19 October 2014
- 22:2622:26, 19 October 2014 diff hist −24 Sixth nerve palsy →General etiology: Fixing the display problem with the "pathophysiology" header and the preceding reference citation. Deleted "false localizing sign" because I'm not sure what it was meant to be.
15 October 2014
- 19:5919:59, 15 October 2014 diff hist +246 Richard Attenborough →Early life: Added an online citation for Kindertransport reference; also the years the women died.
9 October 2014
- 22:1922:19, 9 October 2014 diff hist +57 Guy Turcotte killings →Court Case: Added two links to other Wikipedia articles.
6 October 2014
- 17:4917:49, 6 October 2014 diff hist −1 m Cerebrovascular disease →Classification: Took out a comma that shouldn't be there.
- 16:5916:59, 6 October 2014 diff hist 0 m Governor's Mansion State Historic Park →External links: Fixed typo - capitalized the start of "Official"
- 16:3116:31, 6 October 2014 diff hist 0 m Aaron Spelling →Career: Corrected typo in "The"
27 September 2014
- 17:5017:50, 27 September 2014 diff hist +18 Varsity letter →History: Added "expand acronym" as I have no idea what VLAS stands for.
26 September 2014
- 19:4619:46, 26 September 2014 diff hist +354 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Thefederalist.com Arguing for "keep."
25 September 2014
- 19:4919:49, 25 September 2014 diff hist +20 Oculomotor nerve palsy →Acquired oculomotor palsy: I don't know what references the "<1>" and "<2>" were supposed to link to, so I added the citation formatting message box.
- 19:2519:25, 25 September 2014 diff hist +17 Transverse myelitis →Causes: Added a "create list" note. I think the list really needs to be looked at by someone who understands whether or not the list is actually correct and makes sense, though.
- 18:0418:04, 25 September 2014 diff hist +40 Bill Maher →External links: Added to "anti-vaccination activitists" category as per his views & beliefs section and his public comments.
- 17:4217:42, 25 September 2014 diff hist +40 Rob Schneider →External links: Added to "anti-vaccination activitists" category as per his controversies section and his recent public comments.
22 September 2014
- 22:5922:59, 22 September 2014 diff hist 0 m List of White House security breaches Put the 1983 sentence before the "mid 1990s" sentence.
20 September 2014
- 13:2613:26, 20 September 2014 diff hist 0 m Subsistence agriculture →See also: Alphabetized list.
18 September 2014
- 21:4721:47, 18 September 2014 diff hist +11 McLean Hospital →Facts about the hospital: Marked this as a trivia section. This definitely seems like it can be turned into prose.
- 21:4421:44, 18 September 2014 diff hist +30 McLean Hospital →History: Changed "teens" to "adolescents" and linked it. Added a "citation needed" for that claim.
7 September 2014
- 15:4215:42, 7 September 2014 diff hist +81 Raider Nation Added "contradictory" tag - says the term was created in 1980s when team returned from LA, but team was in LA from 1982-1994.
27 August 2014
- 22:4822:48, 27 August 2014 diff hist −1 m Template:Demyelinating diseases of CNS Fixed a typo
24 August 2014
- 20:2520:25, 24 August 2014 diff hist +1,739 Race (human categorization) →Law enforcement: Rewrote the "British Police" section to conform with sources found while trying to get a good citation to add. Previous section text was actually describing Census, not necessarily police, classifications.
- 19:3119:31, 24 August 2014 diff hist +32 m Racial inequality in the United States Made "race" a link to "race (human classification)". This article needs some help to integrate it more into the rest of Wikipedia IMO.
- 19:2619:26, 24 August 2014 diff hist 0 m Racial inequality in the United States →Inheritance and parental financial assistance: Fixed apostrophe (possession vs. plural) problem and added a comma.
1 August 2014
- 22:0922:09, 1 August 2014 diff hist +14 Death of Anthony Baez →Criminal trials and investigations: Changed "Feds" to "the federal government." Because NPOV.
21 July 2014
- 00:4300:43, 21 July 2014 diff hist −34 Joep Lange Undid revision 617773996 by 31.220.238.96 (talk) It's not OK to say he was "murdered by Vladimir Putin."
4 July 2014
- 17:2117:21, 4 July 2014 diff hist +50 Uncontacted peoples →See also: Added "state of nature," "tribe," and "noble savage" to the links, and alphabetized the list.
13 April 2014
- 01:3601:36, 13 April 2014 diff hist +4 m 10-in-1 food parcel →Development: Made "Halazone" a link - it redirects to the chemical section of the portable water purification article. It seems unlikely that most readers will understand that the term refers to a specific chlorine-based chemical product.
17 March 2014
- 21:3921:39, 17 March 2014 diff hist +5 m Nevada Test Site →NTS today: Added one word to my previous edit.
- 21:3821:38, 17 March 2014 diff hist +21 m Nevada Test Site →NTS today: Cleaned up a confusing serial comma situation.
24 February 2014
- 22:0222:02, 24 February 2014 diff hist +4 m Hoarding disorder →Therapeutic Interventions: Made "harm reduction" a link to the article
23 February 2014
- 22:0622:06, 23 February 2014 diff hist 0 m Scientific misconduct →Individual cases: Moved "Romania" down so that the list would be in alphabetical order by country. Also fixed weird line breaks in "Netherlands" references.
21 December 2013
- 19:1519:15, 21 December 2013 diff hist +12 Wonderbag Text similar to that on company's site & Amazon listing.
16 December 2013
- 00:5600:56, 16 December 2013 diff hist +114 Scofield Mine disaster →Aftermath: Adding reference to the memorial line - site shows a photo of the memorial
