User contributions for Lamarr Otems
A user with 40 edits.
17 October 2023
- 20:4820:48, 17 October 2023 diff hist +470 Talk:Universal justice →Universal Justice isn't Universal Jurisdiction: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
11 October 2023
- 20:2420:24, 11 October 2023 diff hist −75 Champurrado →Usage: The usage paragraph just paraphrased the linked article and wasn't the right tone for Wikipedia. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:5219:52, 11 October 2023 diff hist −36 Universal justice Universal justice is not automatically the same thing as universal jurisdiction. Redirecting to social justice makes more sense, or no redirect at all. Tags: Blanking Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:5019:50, 11 October 2023 diff hist +344 N Talk:Universal justice →Universal justice?: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
27 July 2023
- 18:2418:24, 27 July 2023 diff hist +1 m PwC Changed am incorrect tense. "create" was used in the past tense - thus I changed it to "created" so the tense of the word matches the sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 October 2022
- 04:1604:16, 12 October 2022 diff hist +226 Talk:BrainPop →My edit: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1404:14, 12 October 2022 diff hist +75 BrainPop No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 January 2022
- 16:5116:51, 30 January 2022 diff hist −24 m Champurrado Took out a few extra words that made the sentence sound awkward. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 December 2021
- 20:5720:57, 15 December 2021 diff hist +4 Jade Tree (record label) Read the interview at reference 1. He says he started the label as a sophomore in highshool in 1987, then graduated in 1990. He graduated from HIGH SCHOOL in 1990, not college. This also makes the line further in the wiki about after college the label took off - it makes that actually make sense. I noticed that those statements contradicted themselves so did he research and realized that in 1990 he graduated from high school and not college. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 October 2021
- 17:0817:08, 16 October 2021 diff hist +446 Talk:Voice-tracking →Redesign and Refresh: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5616:56, 16 October 2021 diff hist −22 m Voice-tracking No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5516:55, 16 October 2021 diff hist −97 Voice-tracking No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5316:53, 16 October 2021 diff hist +23 Voice-tracking Changed a sentence broken from previous change Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4916:49, 16 October 2021 diff hist −8 Voice-tracking Fixed a broken sentence from my previous change Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4616:46, 16 October 2021 diff hist +20 Voice-tracking Moved the location of a paragraph because it didn't flow at all. Still not good, but better then it was Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4216:42, 16 October 2021 diff hist −56 Voice-tracking Lots of wording, phrasing, and sentence changes but essentially keeping the overall content the same. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:1115:11, 16 October 2021 diff hist −37 m Voice-tracking The list of reasons why a dj could be gone is not relevant, nor was the list complete. One could add earthquake, snowstorm, or injured to the infinite list - so let's leave it short and simple in an already needlessly long and cluttered page Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0615:06, 16 October 2021 diff hist −91 m Voice-tracking Took out one piece of useless information - the page is too cluttered already with non relevant, unsourced info. Is there a source saying pre-recorded digital tracks of DJs are still being sent physically on tapes through the mail? If so please add the source (and why shipping method is needed/relevant). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 April 2021
- 21:3121:31, 10 April 2021 diff hist −11 m The Pedestrian More very minor edits for clarity (removed a few commas, flipped awkward wording, etc). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:2721:27, 10 April 2021 diff hist −4 m The Pedestrian Edited for clarity as a couple sentences didn't not make sense or were written extremely awkwardly. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 December 2020
- 17:4917:49, 20 December 2020 diff hist 0 m Britney Spears Fixed misspelling from healdined to headlined. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 December 2020
- 22:1822:18, 8 December 2020 diff hist −1 m List of United States Army careers Changed the MOS abbreviation to be inside parentheses instead of in the sentence following "or". This puts it in line with every other abbreviation on the page which are all in parenthesis. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:1422:14, 8 December 2020 diff hist +5 m List of United States Army careers Split a single run on sentence into two smaller sentences. The run on sentence was difficult to read (which is how I noticed it in the first place). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 November 2020
- 17:3717:37, 10 November 2020 diff hist +130 User:Lamarr Otems No edit summary current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:3317:33, 10 November 2020 diff hist −6 m Appointment of Catholic bishops Very minor grammar edits for clarity Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:3017:30, 10 November 2020 diff hist +3 m Appointment of Catholic bishops Added the word "of" that was missing from a sentence. Meaning of the sentence not changed at all. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 April 2020
- 16:4916:49, 26 April 2020 diff hist −111 T.O.T.S. Burned to the ground...? Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 January 2020
- 19:3419:34, 4 January 2020 diff hist +89 m Kate Flannery A few small grammar issues and added links to other wiki articles Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 November 2019
- 23:5123:51, 17 November 2019 diff hist +280 Talk:Richard Lewis (journalist) →Poor quality. Needs deletion until fixed.: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:4823:48, 17 November 2019 diff hist −175 Richard Lewis (journalist) Terrible grammar and poor translation it seems. Needs a COMPLETE REHAUL. NOT WIKI STANDARDS Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:3923:39, 17 November 2019 diff hist −4 Richard Lewis (journalist) Sentence didn't make sense and wasn't even proper grammar. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 October 2019
- 21:5621:56, 5 October 2019 diff hist −52 Pete Steinkopf Removed personal information. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 September 2019
- 14:5714:57, 14 September 2019 diff hist +16 N User:Lamarr Otems ←Created page with 'This is my page.' Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:5714:57, 14 September 2019 diff hist 0 m Form (education) Made it much more clear using the example of form 1 and 1st grade (instead of form 1 and 7th grade which didn't bd Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 December 2017
- 18:2218:22, 9 December 2017 diff hist +3 Grams (search) Changed mixer to tumbler in my previous content addition. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2018:20, 9 December 2017 diff hist +430 Grams (search) Added content about forthcoming closure. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 July 2014
- 18:3918:39, 26 July 2014 diff hist +10 Walter Raleigh Raleigh didn't ever visit North America himself - the source is an unsourced page on biography.com. Every other source on the Internet states he didn't visit North America in person - even the linked Wiki article on Roanoke Colony clearly states he nev... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 December 2013
- 19:0119:01, 11 December 2013 diff hist +142 Shaun Greenhalgh Added a source for the first part of the first section
6 October 2007
- 05:2905:29, 6 October 2007 diff hist +9 User talk:ArielGold No edit summary
- 05:2305:23, 6 October 2007 diff hist +288 User talk:ArielGold No edit summary
