User contributions for Kilyle
A user with 346 edits. Account created on 2 January 2006.
30 December 2023
- 21:1621:16, 30 December 2023 diff hist +69 Ghosts (Person of Interest) →Ghosts: Fixed a sentence whose pronouns indicated the wrong people for a very mixed-up view of what was happening
- 21:1021:10, 30 December 2023 diff hist +366 Pilot (Person of Interest) →Plot: Corrected some bits that were outright misleading, gave paragraph breaks and attempted to improve the depiction a bit
3 December 2023
- 22:1822:18, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0 Popping boba Bold on "popping pearls" did not include first letter Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
25 October 2023
- 21:3221:32, 25 October 2023 diff hist +1,452 Talk:Cajun English →pronunciation chart: Gave possible rationale for "pecorn" spelling, and called attention to conflicting pronunciation info on the main page
29 August 2023
- 09:4309:43, 29 August 2023 diff hist +547 Talk:Pulp magazine →Is this page plagiarism, or has it been plagiarized?: new section Tag: New topic
- 09:3909:39, 29 August 2023 diff hist +520 Talk:Digest size →Could benefit from a photo: new section Tag: New topic
- 09:3509:35, 29 August 2023 diff hist +680 Talk:Blue Book (magazine) →Opening Paragraphs Problem: Please explain the contents, not the many variations on the name
10 August 2023
- 00:0400:04, 10 August 2023 diff hist +952 Talk:SCP Foundation →Phrasing question: Should this be rephrased from "frequently written" to "written frequently" for clarity?
27 November 2022
- 03:5103:51, 27 November 2022 diff hist −1 Ottoman Imperial Harem →The Architectural Layout of Topkapi Palace: Typo correction (continusously)
- 03:4003:40, 27 November 2022 diff hist +731 Talk:Bedsit →Shared bathroom?: Article seems to contradict itself and thus provides a questionable definition of the term
- 03:2803:28, 27 November 2022 diff hist +29 Hypergamy →Mating preferences: Moved the shared attractiveness trait to its own part of the sentence to improve the comparison of non-shared traits
26 November 2022
- 22:0722:07, 26 November 2022 diff hist +1,946 Talk:Women-only space →"Acquired" gender?: This phrasing seems biased, and the section it's in could use some expansion
16 December 2021
- 08:3708:37, 16 December 2021 diff hist −2 Talk:Psychology of torture →Can someone check for plagiarism?
- 08:3608:36, 16 December 2021 diff hist +929 Talk:Psychology of torture →Can someone check for plagiarism?: Happened to notice a section that seems almost directly copied but not cited, and also some other spots from same source.
15 October 2021
- 19:2719:27, 15 October 2021 diff hist +733 Talk:Heroic fantasy →Why is there a "sic" in the quote?: I don't see any grammatical error in the quote, so why is the word "combines" marked with a sic?
29 August 2021
- 09:0109:01, 29 August 2021 diff hist −1 Good Will Hunting →Plot: Older phrasing was awkwardly scrambled in time; maybe someone more familiar with the scene could improve my phrasing
26 July 2021
- 20:4420:44, 26 July 2021 diff hist +747 Talk:List of Slayers episodes →Aqua-baachan (Auntie Aqua) isn't male: Almost positive the character is female; could someone confirm and update?
15 February 2021
- 09:4609:46, 15 February 2021 diff hist −6 Talk:List of Diagnosis: Murder characters →Confusion over Carol's Spouse: Minor fixes
- 09:4609:46, 15 February 2021 diff hist −2 Talk:List of Diagnosis: Murder characters →/* Confusion over Carol's Spouse: */
- 09:4509:45, 15 February 2021 diff hist +1,758 Talk:List of Diagnosis: Murder characters →/* Confusion over Carol's Spouse: */ new section
11 February 2021
- 07:1107:11, 11 February 2021 diff hist +1,285 Talk:Electrolyte imbalance →Caused by Lab Error?: The sentence implies that hyperkalemia in the patient is somehow caused by lab error while testing the patient's blood. Something seems off here....
25 January 2021
- 11:0211:02, 25 January 2021 diff hist +14 Baby Blue (Person of Interest) →Plot: Fixed clumsy phrasing over the distinction between Elias and his men
- 10:5910:59, 25 January 2021 diff hist +6 Baby Blue (Person of Interest) →Plot
- 10:5910:59, 25 January 2021 diff hist +158 Baby Blue (Person of Interest) →Plot: While Elias did threaten to kill both Reese and the baby, the scene makes it clear that he didn't actually *plan* to do so. (I also updated a bit of phrasing higher up.)
10 December 2020
- 07:4407:44, 10 December 2020 diff hist +960 Talk:Fable →History, section on Africa: Could definitely use a more encyclopedic tone
22 March 2019
- 09:0009:00, 22 March 2019 diff hist +779 Talk:List of shibboleths →Nevada's First Syllable?: Is it really an unstressed "ih" sound, or is it a schwa?
8 March 2019
- 16:0616:06, 8 March 2019 diff hist +180 List of shibboleths →In the United States: Added Tulalip, if only because it's a great shibboleth for telemarketers who pretend to be from local businesses but can't pronounce the town they're supposedly calling from.
13 June 2018
- 11:3211:32, 13 June 2018 diff hist +77 Talk:List of Star Trek: The Next Generation cast members →Mot the Barber is main cast?: (forgot my sig)
- 11:3211:32, 13 June 2018 diff hist +122 Talk:List of Star Trek: The Next Generation cast members →Mot the Barber is main cast?: Someone either confirm or correct this, please.
17 March 2018
27 August 2017
- 05:3205:32, 27 August 2017 diff hist +28 List of Person of Interest episodes →Season 2 (2012–13): I don't think "snobbish" really fits Pierce -- yeah, he disregards Reese for being "boring," but check out the basketball scenes (including taking the subway home), or his desire to run a company in a non-ruthless way.
15 June 2017
- 06:3506:35, 15 June 2017 diff hist +484 Talk:Seat belt →Seat Belt vs. Seatbelt: Please choose one variant and use that throughout the article
7 September 2016
- 08:3608:36, 7 September 2016 diff hist +451 Talk:Small Town Saturday Night (song) No edit summary
24 August 2016
- 08:4608:46, 24 August 2016 diff hist +777 Talk:List of musician and band name etymologies →Alice Cooper's autobiography disagrees: Someone check the explanation for their name, because "grandmother" isn't it.
17 August 2016
- 11:1611:16, 17 August 2016 diff hist +727 Talk:Johnny Got His Gun →Song actually based on story, or coincidence?: Need citation if we're gonna claim it was based on the story. Otherwise fix that part.
- 10:0310:03, 17 August 2016 diff hist +152 Michael Card →Controversies: Using the word "deny" implies that they are refusing to acknowledge a fact. Rephrased to be more neutral. (I assume the linked page covers little things like "Mormons believe humans can become gods" (heresy for a Christian).)
16 May 2016
- 13:0113:01, 16 May 2016 diff hist +506 Talk:Sisu →link to wiktionary tenacity
2 February 2016
- 10:5210:52, 2 February 2016 diff hist −1 The Adventure of the Yellow Face →Synopsis: Spelling error corrected
7 December 2015
- 16:1616:16, 7 December 2015 diff hist +432 Wacky Wednesday (book) The version I just updated was factually incorrect (only the last page, not every page, has twenty wacky things), oddly phrased, and with bits of info that don't seem relevant. I put in a more accurate description and tightened up the opening paragraph.
29 October 2015
- 16:2316:23, 29 October 2015 diff hist +31 Haim The word is still phonetic/phonemic, it's just that we don't expect CH to say KH except in longer Latin/Greek words; it looks too Anglo-Saxon and we want to pronounce it with a TSH.
1 July 2014
- 20:0020:00, 1 July 2014 diff hist +899 Talk:Central nervous system cavernous hemangioma →Seriously? "A fox hunter is a hunter who specializes in hunting foxes"?: If we want to avoid looking like idiots, don't just rearrange the words in the search term as a pointless definitional tautology.
24 June 2014
- 07:3207:32, 24 June 2014 diff hist +25 Elysium (film) →See also
13 April 2014
- 15:4015:40, 13 April 2014 diff hist +313 N Talk:Grazing fee Someone please fix this page to define the base meaning of the term before actually saying who pays what where.
11 April 2014
- 05:3805:38, 11 April 2014 diff hist +507 Talk:Divide, Colorado If "we're small enough to not have a mayor so we elect animals" isn't notable, I question what is.
22 March 2014
- 18:1618:16, 22 March 2014 diff hist −20 Saints Row IV →Plot: "I can't swear anymore!" is not the Boss's fear. Pretty sure. The fear seems to be a dull, predictable world without free will.
11 February 2012
- 13:2113:21, 11 February 2012 diff hist +1,480 Talk:Cleanin' Out My Closet →Dissin': Is the current statement about this line correct?
16 November 2011
- 22:2122:21, 16 November 2011 diff hist +718 Talk:Peat →Introduction Problems: Someone got the intro all backwards; please fix it.
14 June 2011
- 12:2512:25, 14 June 2011 diff hist −35 List of 1000 Ways to Die episodes →Ep33: Coke-straw death said: "Based on the death of Yuri Momma". Doesn't sound like a plausible Asian name; sounds like "Your Momma"; quick Google, nothing useful. Deleted until confirmed.
19 May 2011
- 09:1309:13, 19 May 2011 diff hist −13 The Holocaust Confusing sentence due to verb placement; I clarified by moving elements around.
25 March 2011
- 11:1611:16, 25 March 2011 diff hist +777 Harvest Moon: Back to Nature →Dating: Sky Render's walkthrough details the likes and loves of every villager, so I'm using that as my source. Also, NO GIRL likes weeds.
