User contributions for Johnsamman
A user with 36 edits. Account created on 11 April 2024.
23 May 2024
- 05:3305:33, 23 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Temptation: Confessions of a Marriage Counselor →Plot: removed "we see" current Tag: Visual edit
22 May 2024
- 03:1603:16, 22 May 2024 diff hist +4 m Knitting →Differences between knitting and crocheting: encyclopedic tone current Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5102:51, 22 May 2024 diff hist +296 Talk:Technical rehearsal →wet tech as separate section: new section current Tag: New topic
- 02:4702:47, 22 May 2024 diff hist −39 m Technical rehearsal →Pick-up tech: removed "Pick-up tech rehearsals are scheduled." current Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4602:46, 22 May 2024 diff hist −8 m Technical rehearsal →Tech: removed ". This is" (unnecessary) Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4402:44, 22 May 2024 diff hist −127 m Technical rehearsal →Tech: removed "This whole process can take many hours, and though it is beneficial for all aspects of production, it can become very tedious." as almost identical idea is restated in next sentence Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4102:41, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Technical rehearsal →Dry tech: Then a sound check -> A sound check is then Tag: Visual edit
15 May 2024
- 02:0502:05, 15 May 2024 diff hist −11 m Guy Raz →Education: removed "at age 33" current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
10 May 2024
- 17:3717:37, 10 May 2024 diff hist +4 m Scurvy →Signs and symptoms: link on bone pain Tag: Visual edit
6 May 2024
- 21:4621:46, 6 May 2024 diff hist −73 m Mr Majeika removed "typical English primary school" : redundant current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:4221:42, 6 May 2024 diff hist −9 m Mr Majeika →Plot: "thereafter astounds" to "entertains" : encyclopedic tone Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:3921:39, 6 May 2024 diff hist −128 m Mr Majeika quote from fictional character not needed in plot description Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:3721:37, 6 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Mr Majeika removed comma after children's books in first section Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
5 May 2024
- 03:0503:05, 5 May 2024 diff hist −78 m Brain Damage (Pink Floyd song) removed "In Sigmund Freud's terms it would be the unconscious." in Themes section - irrelevant/ incorrect info Tag: Visual edit
2 May 2024
- 05:0205:02, 2 May 2024 diff hist +5 m Modernism tone - griffin writes - griffin believe that Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
30 April 2024
- 05:3305:33, 30 April 2024 diff hist −26 m Cinema of Italy encyclopedic tone - removed (the most of any country) - avoid parenthetical statements Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 05:2805:28, 30 April 2024 diff hist −17 m Sea Org removed "on the high seas" - encyclopedic tone Tag: Visual edit
26 April 2024
- 20:0320:03, 26 April 2024 diff hist +9 m Kate Mitchell (EastEnders) added "is shown as" - real world perspective Tags: Reverted Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:5319:53, 26 April 2024 diff hist −12 Bearded (magazine) neutral tone - remove "signature minimal aesthetic" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:5119:51, 26 April 2024 diff hist −178 Bearded (magazine) removed non neutral unnecessary descriptions of logo Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:1619:16, 26 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Miles Vorkosigan removed unnecessary comma after "short stories" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1219:12, 26 April 2024 diff hist +20 m Miles Vorkosigan topic title - biography to fictional character biography (wikipedia tone standard Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:0819:08, 26 April 2024 diff hist +164 Talk:Miles Vorkosigan →template organization: new section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
- 19:0619:06, 26 April 2024 diff hist +10 m Miles Vorkosigan added "seemingly" - clarification Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:0419:04, 26 April 2024 diff hist +12 m Miles Vorkosigan added "depictied as" - describe in nonfictional style Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:0019:00, 26 April 2024 diff hist +19 m The Lighthouse of Houston and to as well as(already an and in the sentence a word before) current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
25 April 2024
- 22:2822:28, 25 April 2024 diff hist 0 Oil wrestling →Rules: fixed grammar mistake (parallel construction) " in young categories wrestling is limited to 30 minutes " changed to "wrestling in limited to 30 minutes in young categories " Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2422:24, 25 April 2024 diff hist +1 Oil wrestling →Rules: Word change (tone) nowadays -> currently Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2122:21, 25 April 2024 diff hist −104 Oil wrestling removed redundant sentence: "One challenge of oil wrestling is the oil make is harder for opponents to grab" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
19 April 2024
- 06:3606:36, 19 April 2024 diff hist −200 m List of Hoshin Engi characters tone current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
18 April 2024
- 06:1806:18, 18 April 2024 diff hist −147 m Magyar Rádió copyedit - tone/ grammar Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
17 April 2024
- 00:3000:30, 17 April 2024 diff hist −521 m Pendaflex removed sentence w/ irrelevant info current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 00:2600:26, 17 April 2024 diff hist −14 m Craft in America tone Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 00:2400:24, 17 April 2024 diff hist −5 m Willy Puchner removed unnecessary indenting / format edit Tags: Visual edit: Switched Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
12 April 2024
- 00:2500:25, 12 April 2024 diff hist +28 N User:Johnsamman ←Created page with 'typos / grammar / tone edits' current Tag: Visual edit
- 00:2200:22, 12 April 2024 diff hist −100 m Henri Regnault neutral tone / wording current