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A user with 704 edits. Account created on 7 November 2003.
9 September 2024
- 05:0305:03, 9 September 2024 diff hist +6 m Talk:Simon, brother of Jesus →More to the Story?: Added emphasis. current
8 September 2024
- 04:4104:41, 8 September 2024 diff hist +384 Talk:Simon, brother of Jesus →More to the Story?: new section Tag: New topic
7 September 2024
- 03:5903:59, 7 September 2024 diff hist −4 m Hallin's spheres →Uses of the terms: Made em dashes consistent with those above. Removing intermediate spaces may be the British convention? And thus arguable here. current
- 03:5603:56, 7 September 2024 diff hist −1 m Hallin's spheres →Sphere of legitimate controversy: Made em dashes consistent. Another earthshaking edit!
4 September 2024
- 04:1804:18, 4 September 2024 diff hist −22 m V-S Day →Plot introduction: Simplified. current
23 August 2024
- 06:2106:21, 23 August 2024 diff hist −9 m Fascist architecture →The evolution of Italian Fascist Architecture: Wrangled run-on sentences, capitalized per usage in corresponding Wikipedia articles, linked to those articles.
12 August 2024
- 07:2607:26, 12 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Germania (city) Moved comma outside text formatting markup.
- 06:2206:22, 12 August 2024 diff hist −8 m Corn smut →Industrial biotechnology: Just trying to come up with somewhat more graceful phrasing.
- 06:1706:17, 12 August 2024 diff hist −11 m Corn smut →Environment: “Of the like” might have been “or the like,” but the sentence lives if it’s removed completely. There are many viable ways to rewrite this.
8 August 2024
- 04:4604:46, 8 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Fascist architecture Capitalized “jewish."
- 04:4504:45, 8 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Fascist architecture Removed hyphens from “National-Socialism” and “National-Socialist.”
- 04:4204:42, 8 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Fascist architecture Changed “german” to “German” and “germany” to “Germany."
7 August 2024
- 22:5222:52, 7 August 2024 diff hist −81 m Fascist architecture Eliminated some run-on sentences, improved syntax. Much, much more is called for, apart from any higher-level argument the previous revision may provoke.
6 August 2024
- 23:0223:02, 6 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Battle of Fredericksburg →Marye's Heights, December 13 {{Anchor|Marye's Heights}}: Capitalized an instance of “Union."
19 July 2024
- 03:1803:18, 19 July 2024 diff hist +4 m Shrapnel shell A definite article seemed called for.
17 July 2024
- 04:2104:21, 17 July 2024 diff hist +2 m Parrott rifle →The 300-pound solution: Changed “in” to “inch” for consistency.
- 03:5103:51, 17 July 2024 diff hist −25 m Battle of Fredericksburg →Battlefield preservation: Simplified.
- 03:4103:41, 17 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Battle of Fredericksburg →Marye's Heights, December 13 {{Anchor|Marye's Heights}}: Assuming we want to keep this melodrama, a hyphen is called for.
- 03:4003:40, 17 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Battle of Fredericksburg →Marye's Heights, December 13 {{Anchor|Marye's Heights}}: Can’t see why “muskets” should be capitalized here.
- 03:3903:39, 17 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Battle of Fredericksburg →Marye's Heights, December 13 {{Anchor|Marye's Heights}}: Guessing that Hancock was not order to support French and himself, added a disambiguating comma.
24 June 2024
- 07:0207:02, 24 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Enchytraeidae Changed “Grindal Worm” to “Grindal worm,” consistent with usage elsewhere in Wikipedia. current
21 June 2024
- 05:1605:16, 21 June 2024 diff hist −10 m Flow Hive →Criticism: Slightly better than my last attempt at simplification.
- 05:1505:15, 21 June 2024 diff hist −3 m Flow Hive →Criticism: Tried to simplify. Still clumsy.
- 05:0805:08, 21 June 2024 diff hist −31 m Flow Hive →Criticism: Simplified.
- 05:0405:04, 21 June 2024 diff hist +10 m Flow Hive →Design: Specified the actor for consistency with resetting the frame, below; and in the process made a passive into an active verb.
- 05:0205:02, 21 June 2024 diff hist +11 m Flow Hive →Design: Resolved ambiguity: The bees don’t reset the frame! “User” might be better than “beekeeper” to leave room for anyone who might turn a crank.
- 04:5904:59, 21 June 2024 diff hist −17 m Flow Hive →Design: Simplifications.
- 04:5804:58, 21 June 2024 diff hist −8 m Flow Hive →Design: Added an article, simplified.
- 04:5504:55, 21 June 2024 diff hist −13 m Flow Hive Various tweaks, beginning with clarifying that it's the hive, not the brand, which has the attributes discussed (e.g. the unique frame).
12 June 2024
- 00:2500:25, 12 June 2024 diff hist +30 m DeepFlight Challenger Rewrote description of implosion/simulation relationship to make it sound less like simulation caused the problem and more like simulation shed light on the incident.
1 June 2024
- 02:5502:55, 1 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Chili pepper →Distribution to Europe: Changed singular verb to plural, consistent with pronoun.
29 May 2024
- 17:1517:15, 29 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Hyperaldosteronism Another extra parenthesis! We’ll nail this yet!
27 May 2024
- 07:2707:27, 27 May 2024 diff hist +4 m Nikon D7500 →Feature reductions: Added definite article. current
21 May 2024
- 18:2518:25, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Manjū →History: Rewrote sentence to consistently treat “manjū” as singular, consistent with usage elsewhere in the article.
7 May 2024
- 08:1208:12, 7 May 2024 diff hist −6 m Vulvoplasty →Women: Grammar fix (by avoiding the issue). current
23 April 2024
- 17:5817:58, 23 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Zeppelin-Staaken R.VI →Variants: Fixed run-on sentence.
18 April 2024
- 03:2003:20, 18 April 2024 diff hist −15 m 1st Minnesota Infantry Regiment →Later service: Tried to fix several instances of squirrelly capitalization, recombined sentences, and syntax.
10 April 2024
- 05:4905:49, 10 April 2024 diff hist +19 m 1st Minnesota Infantry Regiment →Later service: Changed “And” to “and,” “’s” for plural to “s” (inside link).
1 April 2024
- 07:4807:48, 1 April 2024 diff hist −9 m Hookup culture →Adolescents: Simplified sentence, but left its meaning unclear.
- 07:4707:47, 1 April 2024 diff hist −11 m Hookup culture →Adolescents: Syntax tweaks.
- 07:4407:44, 1 April 2024 diff hist −11 m Hookup culture →Homosexuality: Dropped some pointless words, possibly a fragment left from earlier edits. These two sentences might also be combined.
- 07:3407:34, 1 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Kama Sutra Needed an “of” to make sense.
- 05:1705:17, 1 April 2024 diff hist +1 m E number Added disambiguating comma: Are food additives found in vitamin C? Or is vitamin C a food additive found naturally in many foods? (My bet.)
31 March 2024
- 08:1708:17, 31 March 2024 diff hist 0 m Sengoku period →Start and end dates: Capitalized “Hideyoshi."
- 08:1608:16, 31 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Council of Five Elders →Origin of the name "Go-Tairō": Changed “is” to “was” for consistent verb tense in sentence.
- 08:1208:12, 31 March 2024 diff hist −62 m Council of Five Elders →Oath of Allegiance: Syntax tweaks for consistency, simplication.
- 08:0408:04, 31 March 2024 diff hist −34 m Council of Five Elders →Choosing the council: Simplfication.
- 08:0108:01, 31 March 2024 diff hist +18 m Council of Five Elders →Choosing the council: Removed link to physics concept of “force,” tried to better articulate the idea.
- 07:5707:57, 31 March 2024 diff hist −3 m Council of Five Elders →Choosing the council: Broke up run-on sentence.
- 07:5707:57, 31 March 2024 diff hist −2 m Council of Five Elders →Choosing the council: Fixing Wikipedia markup I damaged.
