User contributions for Greatsouthbay
A user with 530 edits. Account created on 20 March 2010.
26 December 2010
- 16:5916:59, 26 December 2010 diff hist −2 m User talk:JimWae →Single sentence paragraphs
- 16:5616:56, 26 December 2010 diff hist −2 m Islip (hamlet), New York →Library
- 16:5416:54, 26 December 2010 diff hist +81 m Islip (hamlet), New York Islip Public Library
- 16:5016:50, 26 December 2010 diff hist −81 m Islip (hamlet), New York →Library: The Public Library is not part of the Islip School System or the education system - relocating
- 16:4016:40, 26 December 2010 diff hist +338 m West Islip, New York →Transportation: "Islip Centre Station" was in West Islip, originally known as "West of Islip"
- 16:1416:14, 26 December 2010 diff hist −232 m Islip (hamlet), New York →Train: Islip Centre Station was in the hamlet of West Islip, previously known as "West of Islip", as the cited source indicated. It was not in the hamlet of Islip. Moving info to West Islip artic
- 15:5515:55, 26 December 2010 diff hist −51 m Fire Island Undid revision 403442718 by Kryptonian250 (talk) "Police brutality in the United States" is not a valid category - undid vandalism
- 15:5315:53, 26 December 2010 diff hist −2,044 m Fire Island Undid revision 403445177 by Kryptonian250 (talk) ditto
- 15:5215:52, 26 December 2010 diff hist −2 m Fire Island Undid revision 403445375 by Kryptonian250 (talk) Wiki is not the place for this. Furthermore, this pertains to Ocean Beach only
- 15:5015:50, 26 December 2010 diff hist +2 m Fire Island Undid revision 403445490 by Kryptonian250 (talk)
- 15:4915:49, 26 December 2010 diff hist −47 m Fire Island Undid revision 403466634 by Kryptonian250 (talk)
- 15:2115:21, 26 December 2010 diff hist +571 m User talk:JimWae single sentence paragraphs
- 14:5414:54, 26 December 2010 diff hist −23 m South Farmingdale, New York →Demographics: rearranging racist layout of demographic information to INTEGRATE HISPANIC/LATINO
- 14:4714:47, 26 December 2010 diff hist −92 m South Farmingdale, New York →Public services: these newly designed sections are stupid, confusing and do not match formatting for other articles of this kind on wiki
- 14:4314:43, 26 December 2010 diff hist −330 m South Farmingdale, New York If this obsession with cramming inappropriate material into the leads of articles doesn't stop, I'm going to seek an administrator.
- 14:3314:33, 26 December 2010 diff hist −22 m Central Islip, New York →Demographics: The subject is demographics. Stop imposing your simplistic, naive, notion of what race is on these articles, and in what order they should be listed.
14 December 2010
- 08:0308:03, 14 December 2010 diff hist −5 m Albert Camus put The Stranger in English first, followed by the French. It's normal protocol when an article is written in English.
- 07:4107:41, 14 December 2010 diff hist −1 m Central Islip, New York →Demographics
- 07:4007:40, 14 December 2010 diff hist 0 m Central Islip, New York →Demographics: further ordered statistics by descending percentage
- 07:3707:37, 14 December 2010 diff hist −25 m Central Islip, New York →Demographics: Jim, it's not just a racial list. It's a combined list, derived but not copied from the CB. "8.01% from other races" and "5.01% from two or more races" is no more distinct.
- 07:0607:06, 14 December 2010 diff hist −58 m Bruno Schulz →Mural controversy: syntax, punctuation
- 06:5806:58, 14 December 2010 diff hist −1 m Bruno Schulz →Literary references and biography: voyage
- 06:4906:49, 14 December 2010 diff hist 0 m Bruno Schulz married and maiden name given
- 06:4406:44, 14 December 2010 diff hist −1 m Bruno Schulz →Literary references and biography: format
- 06:4106:41, 14 December 2010 diff hist +14 m Bruno Schulz reorganizing, added translations section
- 06:2406:24, 14 December 2010 diff hist +1 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: corrected myself (!), according to what I just read
- 06:1306:13, 14 December 2010 diff hist 0 m Bruno Schulz →Theatrical adaptations: lower case
- 06:1206:12, 14 December 2010 diff hist +96 m Bruno Schulz →Literary references and biography: added epigram from The City and The City, pared rest of sentence down for clarity
- 05:5405:54, 14 December 2010 diff hist −1 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: reworded a few things
- 05:4105:41, 14 December 2010 diff hist −2 m Bruno Schulz →Literary references and biography: cleanup, clarified a few things
- 05:2505:25, 14 December 2010 diff hist +4 m Bruno Schulz →Theatrical adaptations: reworded a few things, put Theatrical Adaptations in chronological order
- 05:0805:08, 14 December 2010 diff hist +2 m Bruno Schulz →Film adaptations: grammar, punctuation
- 05:0305:03, 14 December 2010 diff hist +19 m Bruno Schulz →Mural controversy: edited for style and cohesion, spelling, punctuation, clarified what Yad Vashem is
- 04:4104:41, 14 December 2010 diff hist −12 m Bruno Schulz →Writings: grammar, syntax
- 04:2204:22, 14 December 2010 diff hist +242 m Bruno Schulz added that he was walking in Jewish quarter when killed, that the officer was Gestapo, that he was killed on the spot - linked it to Fiumara article on Kinoeye
13 December 2010
- 15:0015:00, 13 December 2010 diff hist 0 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: changed "but" to "yet"
- 14:5814:58, 13 December 2010 diff hist −33 m Bruno Schulz →Mural controversy: reworked sentence, unlinked second Yad Vashem, changed "came" to "went", deleted "entitled" (redundant)
- 14:4614:46, 13 December 2010 diff hist +9 m Bruno Schulz →Mural controversy: internally linked Yad Vashem
- 14:3814:38, 13 December 2010 diff hist 0 m Bruno Schulz →Mural controversy: changed "was begun" to "had begun"
- 14:2914:29, 13 December 2010 diff hist −25 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: removed "In the post-war period", which is vague, redundant and extraneous. The years are already in the same sentence.
- 14:2014:20, 13 December 2010 diff hist −32 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: A gymnasium, in English, is a place to perform gymnastics. Using the German/European term is inappropriate for an English wiki article. It would be confusing to most readers.
12 December 2010
- 14:3514:35, 12 December 2010 diff hist +23 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: added Józefina Szelińska
- 14:3214:32, 12 December 2010 diff hist −10 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: changed "novel-memoir" to actual name of book. CS having been loosely based on the people and places in his life hardly makes it a "memoir" or "novel-memoir"
- 14:1814:18, 12 December 2010 diff hist −7 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: changed "came to teach" to "taught". The more concise, the better.
- 14:1514:15, 12 December 2010 diff hist +4,243 Nm User talk:Johncurrandavis welcome
- 07:5207:52, 12 December 2010 diff hist 0 m Bruno Schulz →Literary references and biography: replaced "excavating" with "uncovering" - "excavating", when used figuratively, means "to hollow out", not to find or uncover
- 07:4607:46, 12 December 2010 diff hist −53 m Bruno Schulz →Theatrical adaptations: the fact that it's "a theater performance based on a novel by Bruno Schulz" is already abundantly clear and need not be repeated here
- 07:4207:42, 12 December 2010 diff hist −2 m Bruno Schulz →Biography: changed "over the years" to "subsequently". We don't know when, exactly, it was painted over, but paintjobs happen in a day or two, not over the years. "Painted over" works better too
- 07:2007:20, 12 December 2010 diff hist −109 m Bruno Schulz →External links: removed advertising for Benjamin Geissler Filmproduktion; commercial dvd outlets are not allowed on Wiki
- 07:1607:16, 12 December 2010 diff hist −110 m Bruno Schulz →External links: removed advertising for double-edged theatre
