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A user with 325 edits. Account created on 29 December 2011.
29 September 2012
- 05:2105:21, 29 September 2012 diff hist −2,488 Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry →Plot: condensed the summary somewhat
- 05:0505:05, 29 September 2012 diff hist −33 Julie of the Wolves removed nonsense statement/vandalism
- 04:3704:37, 29 September 2012 diff hist +5 David Niven →Personal life: removed biased word "unfortunately," rephrased a little
25 September 2012
- 18:5218:52, 25 September 2012 diff hist −86 Forego rephrased to improve flow
- 18:4818:48, 25 September 2012 diff hist −123 Granville (horse) removed biased wording, corrected punctuation, rephrased slightly
- 14:5714:57, 25 September 2012 diff hist −122 Tom Olliver added commas, corrected grammar, removed biased wording
- 14:4714:47, 25 September 2012 diff hist −334 Comply or Die deleted opinions
- 14:4114:41, 25 September 2012 diff hist −13 Silver Birch (horse) →Racing career: deleted biased wording
- 14:4014:40, 25 September 2012 diff hist −45 Hedgehunter →2006 Grand National: corrected grammar, deleted opinion
- 14:3814:38, 25 September 2012 diff hist −9 Monty's Pass corrected typo and punctuation, deleted opinion
- 14:1314:13, 25 September 2012 diff hist −153 Red Rum rephrased, removed biased wording, corrected punctuation
24 September 2012
- 14:4114:41, 24 September 2012 diff hist −81 Peter Barton (actor) deleted opinions {"great family entertainment"?!) and rephrased a little
- 02:0502:05, 24 September 2012 diff hist −62 Never Bend removed biased wording, corrected punctuation, rephrased slightly
- 02:0302:03, 24 September 2012 diff hist +12 Our Boots corrected grammar, added comma
- 02:0002:00, 24 September 2012 diff hist −12 Devil's Bag removed biased wording, rephrased a little
- 01:5601:56, 24 September 2012 diff hist −28 Nadir (horse) removed biased wording, corrected punctuation, rephrased slightly
- 01:5001:50, 24 September 2012 diff hist −106 Peintre Celebre removed biased wording, corrected punctuation, rephrased slightly
- 01:4201:42, 24 September 2012 diff hist −11 Snow Chief corrected grammar, rephrased
- 01:4001:40, 24 September 2012 diff hist +6 Melvin F. Stute edited to removed redundancies, improve flow
- 01:3701:37, 24 September 2012 diff hist +3 No Class (horse) →Background: corrected grammar, added comma
- 01:3401:34, 24 September 2012 diff hist +12 Double Jay (horse) →A Champion broodmare sire: corrected grammar
- 01:3101:31, 24 September 2012 diff hist −38 Old Hat (horse) removed biased wording, rephrased a little
- 01:2801:28, 24 September 2012 diff hist −29 Ghostzapper minor changes
23 September 2012
- 15:2015:20, 23 September 2012 diff hist −741 Black Beauty (1994 film) →Plot: condensed and clarified summary, corrected grammar errors
18 March 2012
- 18:2318:23, 18 March 2012 diff hist −3 Slip Anchor →Stud career: corrected grammar
- 15:1115:11, 18 March 2012 diff hist −314 Sinndar edited for tone
- 15:0715:07, 18 March 2012 diff hist −415 Lammtarra edited for tone
- 15:0115:01, 18 March 2012 diff hist −239 Hawk Wing edited for tone, rephrased to improve flow
- 14:5814:58, 18 March 2012 diff hist +8 High Chaparral corrected grammar
- 14:5614:56, 18 March 2012 diff hist −90 High Chaparral corrected several misspellings of High Chaparral's name and various typos, edited for tone
- 14:4814:48, 18 March 2012 diff hist −22 Theatrical (horse) corrected punctuation and grammar, rephrased to improve flow
11 March 2012
- 03:2103:21, 11 March 2012 diff hist +18 Distorted Humor →A winning Stud
10 March 2012
- 01:4901:49, 10 March 2012 diff hist −558 Ghostzapper edited substantially for tone
7 March 2012
6 March 2012
- 03:0803:08, 6 March 2012 diff hist −181 Strike a Deal edited for tone, rephrased to improve flow
- 03:0103:01, 6 March 2012 diff hist −1 Sailor II corrected punctuation
5 March 2012
- 06:0906:09, 5 March 2012 diff hist −387 Black Caviar edited for tone, rephrased to improve flow
- 06:0406:04, 5 March 2012 diff hist −440 Gallorette deleted opinions, rephrased to improve flow
- 05:5605:56, 5 March 2012 diff hist −109 Morvich edited for tone, rephrased to improve flow
- 05:5405:54, 5 March 2012 diff hist −113 Star Pilot (horse) removed the word "unfortunate" and an unsubstantiated reference to the horse being a favorite in the stable
- 05:5105:51, 5 March 2012 diff hist −35 High Echelon corrected punctuation and grammar, rephrased to improve flow
- 05:4805:48, 5 March 2012 diff hist 0 Tapit fixed link
- 05:4605:46, 5 March 2012 diff hist −255 Tapit corrected punctuation and grammar, deleted text that made no sense
27 February 2012
- 08:1208:12, 27 February 2012 diff hist −96 Counterpoint (horse) corrected description of "odds-on favorite" to "longshot," improved wording, removed redundancies
- 08:0808:08, 27 February 2012 diff hist −54 Tank's Prospect corrected punctuation and grammar, rephrased to improve flow
- 08:0508:05, 27 February 2012 diff hist −28 Forward Gal Stakes rephrased to improve flow
- 08:0408:04, 27 February 2012 diff hist −233 Wide Country Stakes edited for tone, corrected grammar and punctuation, rephrased to improve flow
- 08:0008:00, 27 February 2012 diff hist −128 Deputed Testamony Stakes capitalized Triple Crown, corrected spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes
- 07:5707:57, 27 February 2012 diff hist −106 Royal Delta removed inaccurate use of the word "literally," corrected punctuation, edited for tone, rephrased to improve flow
- 07:5207:52, 27 February 2012 diff hist −634 Wistful edited to remove biased wording, rephrased