User contributions for FloweringOctopus
A user with 165 edits. Account created on 31 December 2021.
23 May 2024
- 20:5920:59, 23 May 2024 diff hist −12 Human hair color →Hair coloring: Rewritten slightly with the aim of improving clarity and removing the implication that grey hair must automatically be dyed! current
- 20:0520:05, 23 May 2024 diff hist +304 Talk:Aizawa →Surname, but written second?: new section current Tag: New topic
20 May 2024
- 13:4113:41, 20 May 2024 diff hist −6 Russian Mennonites →World War I: Rewritten sentence to avoid implied value judgement (the judgement that something is a military success is important, the judgement that it is a spiritual failure is not!). current
- 07:4007:40, 20 May 2024 diff hist +1,195 Talk:Trap-lining →Reference 20 and males passing over females in preference for foraging?: new section current Tag: New topic
19 May 2024
- 15:0115:01, 19 May 2024 diff hist +3,182 Talk:Snowbelt →Article is still USA-centric: new section current Tag: New topic
13 May 2024
- 18:2318:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist +1,883 Talk:Russian braid →English slightly unclear: new section current Tag: New topic
11 May 2024
- 09:3509:35, 11 May 2024 diff hist +831 Talk:Holland Tunnel fire →Number of deaths inconsistent: new section current Tag: New topic
9 May 2024
- 18:1418:14, 9 May 2024 diff hist +1,795 Talk:2022 United Kingdom heatwaves →Immediate meteorological causes do not seem to be properly covered?: new section current Tag: New topic
7 May 2024
- 21:0721:07, 7 May 2024 diff hist +1,799 Talk:Low-alcohol beer →"Most doctors advise," but only one reference to one doctor?: new section current Tag: New topic
- 20:5920:59, 7 May 2024 diff hist +10 Low-alcohol beer →Pros and cons: changed most doctors to "one paper," (see talk page); added "this type of" for clarity (no one is suggesting avoiding all beverages - I hope!).
- 19:2019:20, 7 May 2024 diff hist +6 m Pomegranate molasses Added missing bracket in first paragraph; added several pairs of brackets to make section consistent. current
23 April 2024
- 11:5111:51, 23 April 2024 diff hist −17 Waterfall →Exploration and naming: removed charged language from comments on waterfall naming current
13 April 2024
- 06:0906:09, 13 April 2024 diff hist +4 Agulhas Current →Rogue waves: altered for grammar ("have sustained" rather than "sustain") and sense ("thirty" in ten years is rather more than "several"!)
11 April 2024
- 11:1411:14, 11 April 2024 diff hist −6 Chapatsu →Style: altered few words for idiomatic English; added plural "s". current
10 April 2024
- 19:0319:03, 10 April 2024 diff hist −1 Diphyllobothrium →Disease: Changed "must also undergo" to "should be offered" for the sake of appropriate respect for medical autonomy. current
10 March 2024
- 11:5311:53, 10 March 2024 diff hist +2,257 Talk:Niqāb →"Discrimination," is not neutral language here, and the contents of that section are rather confusing?: new section current Tag: New topic
27 February 2024
- 20:0620:06, 27 February 2024 diff hist +35 Hypermobility (joints) →Causes: altered phrasing of comments on pregnancy to, among other things, remove, "the pregnant patient" and "are forced to use..." with the hope of improving both clarity and appropriateness!
23 February 2024
- 09:3809:38, 23 February 2024 diff hist −83 Braemar →Braemar Gathering: rewritten sentences about Highland dancing for more encyclopaedic tone
15 February 2024
- 16:0516:05, 15 February 2024 diff hist +793 Talk:Grayanotoxin →Splitting proposal: Reply Tag: Reply
26 January 2024
- 19:3819:38, 26 January 2024 diff hist +467 Talk:Limu (algae) →Contradiction?: new section current Tag: New topic
16 January 2024
- 08:5608:56, 16 January 2024 diff hist +4,724 Talk:Hemihypertrophy →Change of wording from medical reference was appropriate: new section Tag: New topic
15 January 2024
- 11:4211:42, 15 January 2024 diff hist +745 Talk:Blakiston's fish owl →Taxonomy inconsistent and confusing: new section Tag: New topic
14 January 2024
- 19:2819:28, 14 January 2024 diff hist +2 Beckwith–Wiedemann syndrome →Genetics: ditto added "be offered"
- 19:2619:26, 14 January 2024 diff hist +3 Beckwith–Wiedemann syndrome →Neoplasms: changed "should receive" to "should be offered" ditto concerns about medical autonomy
- 19:2119:21, 14 January 2024 diff hist +8 Hemihypertrophy changed "should be done" to "should be offered" due to concerns about lack of respect for medical autonomy Tag: Reverted
11 January 2024
- 17:5617:56, 11 January 2024 diff hist +12 Reindeer →Relationship with humans: Added British to the Santa Claus tradition
- 17:3517:35, 11 January 2024 diff hist +1,131 Talk:Reindeer →The quote in introduction is problematic - have altered, may need more attention: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:2517:25, 11 January 2024 diff hist −85 Reindeer Tidied paragraph previously altered by removal of quote - see talk
- 12:3112:31, 11 January 2024 diff hist +3 m Hobart's Funnies →Designs: added missing "ing"
- 07:5307:53, 11 January 2024 diff hist +333 Talk:Marozi →Attempt to tidy article up - and a couple of requests for further improvement: Reply Tag: Reply
7 January 2024
- 09:1009:10, 7 January 2024 diff hist +227 Talk:Reindeer →The quote in introduction is problematic - have altered, may need more attention: Reply Tag: Reply
- 09:0909:09, 7 January 2024 diff hist +850 Talk:Reindeer →The quote in introduction is problematic - have altered, may need more attention: new section Tag: New topic
- 09:0809:08, 7 January 2024 diff hist −33 Reindeer Corrected statement so it says what the reference says and not something different - see talk
3 January 2024
- 20:5720:57, 3 January 2024 diff hist −103 Pseudodysphagia →Treatment: Removed the comment about "imagining the symptoms." A conditioned brain response is not in any logical sense imaginary.
- 20:5220:52, 3 January 2024 diff hist +4 Pseudodysphagia →Treatment: changed "real" to "physical".
19 December 2023
- 10:0010:00, 19 December 2023 diff hist +331 Talk:Marozi →Attempt to tidy article up - and a couple of requests for further improvement: Reply Tag: Reply
- 09:5409:54, 19 December 2023 diff hist +123 Marozi Altered introduction for better flow and clarity.
16 December 2023
- 13:4513:45, 16 December 2023 diff hist +489 Talk:Marozi →Attempt to tidy article up - and a couple of requests for further improvement: Reply Tag: Reply
- 13:4413:44, 16 December 2023 diff hist +155 Marozi →Claims: Added a comment about the habitat adding to the question - see talk.
- 13:3613:36, 16 December 2023 diff hist +1,389 Talk:Marozi →Attempt to tidy article up - and a couple of requests for further improvement: Reply Tag: Reply
- 13:3613:36, 16 December 2023 diff hist +278 Marozi →Skepticism: added a few words and extended the quote for clarity - see talk
- 09:4109:41, 16 December 2023 diff hist +2,552 Talk:Marozi →Attempt to tidy article up - and a couple of requests for further improvement: new section Tag: New topic
- 09:4109:41, 16 December 2023 diff hist +266 Marozi Tried to clarify the nature of the confusion surrounding the animal - see talk page
30 November 2023
- 12:3612:36, 30 November 2023 diff hist +547 Talk:Sexual dimorphism →Clearer caption for map turtle image?: new section Tag: New topic
29 November 2023
- 20:2420:24, 29 November 2023 diff hist +8 Meconium →Testing meconium for drugs: changed "eligibility" sentence to speak of "capacity" - "eligibility" sounds as if children are parcelled out by an state-orphanage instead of belonging to a family!
21 November 2023
- 17:3617:36, 21 November 2023 diff hist −14 Holometabolism →Orders: rephrased for clarity
18 November 2023
- 13:2313:23, 18 November 2023 diff hist +21 m 1600–1650 in Western fashion →Puritan dress: Corrected grammar of list.
- 12:4512:45, 18 November 2023 diff hist −2 Breech birth →Twin breech: medical consent, again.
- 12:4412:44, 18 November 2023 diff hist +33 Breech birth →Twin breech: altered phrasing to reflect need for medical consent; requested citation
- 12:3212:32, 18 November 2023 diff hist +47 Breech birth →Complications: changed phrasing of sentence to reflect the importance of medical consent.
