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A user with 204 edits. Account created on 5 August 2009.
16 November 2011
- 21:2621:26, 16 November 2011 diff hist +41 Jerusalem Reword more concisely ~~~~
- 21:1321:13, 16 November 2011 diff hist −25 Jerusalem remove subjective terms and reword more concisely ~~~~
29 October 2011
- 12:0812:08, 29 October 2011 diff hist +3 Tel Aviv →Under the British Mandate: replaced unreferenced account with more detailed, referenced material ~~~~
- 12:0212:02, 29 October 2011 diff hist +315 Tel Aviv →Under the British Mandate
20 October 2011
- 09:4709:47, 20 October 2011 diff hist −1 Jostein Gaarder →Environmental and human rights activism: change modality of final sentence
1 October 2011
- 11:1711:17, 1 October 2011 diff hist −25 Darwin rebellion →Vesteys meatworks: replace subjective POV with neutral language "workers were able to obtain higher wages" rather than "take advantage of the situation"
20 September 2011
- 13:5113:51, 20 September 2011 diff hist −385 Ahava →Controversy: update info about London store, now closed
- 13:3313:33, 20 September 2011 diff hist −1 Ahava →Controversy: update with latest from South Africa ~~~~
- 13:3213:32, 20 September 2011 diff hist +910 Ahava →Controversy
- 13:1913:19, 20 September 2011 diff hist −9 Ahava Delete England from list of flagship stores as that outlet closed today
- 13:1813:18, 20 September 2011 diff hist +35 Ahava Replace text to disambiguate - West Bank in other locations so not redundant.
14 September 2011
- 11:1111:11, 14 September 2011 diff hist +75 Max Brenner →History: add detail
- 11:0211:02, 14 September 2011 diff hist +660 Max Brenner →Support for IDF: update entry re Max Brenner in Australia
10 August 2011
- 13:2113:21, 10 August 2011 diff hist −61 User talk:Floccinauci No edit summary
- 13:1413:14, 10 August 2011 diff hist +344 User talk:Floccinauci No edit summary
- 13:0013:00, 10 August 2011 diff hist +517 User talk:ElComandanteChe →AHAVA
- 12:4712:47, 10 August 2011 diff hist −96 Max Brenner →History: Delete sentence unsupported by any citation ~~~~
- 12:4612:46, 10 August 2011 diff hist +40 Max Brenner add detail to caption of photo explaining that Parramatta is a suburb of Sydney ~~~~
- 12:4412:44, 10 August 2011 diff hist +293 Max Brenner Add detail and cite source in first paragraph. ~~~~
- 11:4311:43, 10 August 2011 diff hist +795 User talk:Soosim Generalising about blogs or newspapers not a good idea ~~~~
- 11:2011:20, 10 August 2011 diff hist +1,094 Talk:Ahava →Dead sea cosmetics and scientific proof (I can't believe I'm writing this), but...: ~~~~
- 10:4310:43, 10 August 2011 diff hist +842 User talk:Floccinauci →August 2011: reply to Marokwitz ~~~~
- 10:4010:40, 10 August 2011 diff hist +892 User talk:Marokwitz No edit summary
- 10:2810:28, 10 August 2011 diff hist +215 User talk:Marokwitz No edit summary
- 10:2510:25, 10 August 2011 diff hist +584 User talk:ElComandanteChe →AHAVA
9 August 2011
- 12:4712:47, 9 August 2011 diff hist +176 Ahava →Products: replaced rider, see discussion, Products, 9 May 2011~~~~
8 August 2011
- 22:1722:17, 8 August 2011 diff hist +605 User talk:EdJohnston →your comment on my page: new section
- 21:5121:51, 8 August 2011 diff hist +292 Talk:Tourism in Israel →Question to all?: new section
- 14:0814:08, 8 August 2011 diff hist +655 User talk:Anna Roy →Question re talk: new section
- 13:5213:52, 8 August 2011 diff hist +2,084 Ahava →Controversy: campaigning websites vary as do newspapers, both Who Profits in Israel and the Centre for Law and Social Justice in South Africa are respected NGOs ~~~~
- 13:4613:46, 8 August 2011 diff hist +1,044 Talk:Ahava →Dead sea cosmetics and scientific proof (I can't believe I'm writing this), but...: comment on first article referenced ~~~~
- 13:4313:43, 8 August 2011 diff hist −919 Talk:Ahava →Dead sea cosmetics and scientific proof (I can't believe I'm writing this), but...: delete unsigned comment ~~~~
4 August 2011
- 12:2412:24, 4 August 2011 diff hist 0 m Palestinian territories Consistent capitilisation of Palestinian Territories ~~~~
- 12:0812:08, 4 August 2011 diff hist +1,539 Ahava →Controversy: Update on South African legal action against ahava importers ~~~~
- 11:3811:38, 4 August 2011 diff hist +738 Talk:Ahava →Controversy section: if paragraph about Who Profits is deleted we need reason to disbelieve CodePink~~~~
- 11:3011:30, 4 August 2011 diff hist +546 Ahava →Controversy: replaced information again deleted by Soosim - please see discussion Code Pink reliable on facts like this ~~~~
- 00:2900:29, 4 August 2011 diff hist +546 Ahava →Controversy: replaced information regarding excavation by Ahava as this is fact not opinion - Code Pink is reliable regarding facts, ~~~~
26 July 2011
- 13:0913:09, 26 July 2011 diff hist +700 Wikimania →{{Flag icon|Israel}} Wikimania 2011: add information about controversy surrounding decision to hold Wikimania in Israel ~~~~
21 July 2011
- 10:4310:43, 21 July 2011 diff hist +935 Talk:Ahava →Controversy section: added to discussion supporting use of says and said in this context. ~~~~
- 10:2810:28, 21 July 2011 diff hist +8 Ahava →Controversy: replaced "however" to improve cohesion by providing link back to previous paragraph
- 10:2710:27, 21 July 2011 diff hist −4 Ahava →Controversy: replace "claims" with "says", more neutral language avoiding derogoratary overtones, and rather than "alleges: as Wikipedia advice is "you can avoid plagiarism by summarizing source material in your own words,"
19 July 2011
- 13:3613:36, 19 July 2011 diff hist +566 Silwan →Illegal Arab construction: additional information ~~~~
- 13:0113:01, 19 July 2011 diff hist +16 Tourism in Israel →Jerusalem: change mood of verbs in last clause of second sentence to reflect that this is a conditional statement rather than a statement of fact ~~~~
- 12:1112:11, 19 July 2011 diff hist +357 Talk:Ahava →Controversy section: discussion of CodePink as a reliable source or not ~~~~
- 12:0712:07, 19 July 2011 diff hist +1,175 Talk:Ahava →Controversy section: responding to ElComandanteChe ~~~~
- 11:4511:45, 19 July 2011 diff hist +1,027 Ahava →Controversy: see discussion/talk page
- 11:1511:15, 19 July 2011 diff hist −76 Ahava →Scientific research: deleted words copied directly from source - plagiarism ~~~~
- 11:1211:12, 19 July 2011 diff hist −557 Ahava →Scientific research: deleted paragraph because link to reference gave error message "Error! The page is not configured! [type= 98][]"
11 July 2011
- 09:1009:10, 11 July 2011 diff hist +325 Talk:Ahava explanation for my edit of Controversy section
- 09:0409:04, 11 July 2011 diff hist +403 Ahava →Controversy: replaced first sentence with primary reference - see discussion ~~~~