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A user with 31 edits. Account created on 15 December 2019.
16 June 2020
- 16:3616:36, 16 June 2020 diff hist −609 Amy Williams Removed claim cited to youtube, not a valid source.
- 16:3516:35, 16 June 2020 diff hist −1 m Thylacine →Rewards
- 16:3416:34, 16 June 2020 diff hist −1 Thylacine →Unconfirmed sightings: Grammar
- 16:3316:33, 16 June 2020 diff hist −28 Thylacine →"Benjamin" and searches: "impressive" is not verifiable.
- 16:3216:32, 16 June 2020 diff hist −91 Óscar Pérez (footballer, born 1973) Removed badly-written, unnecessary, unencyclopaedic sentence.
- 16:3116:31, 16 June 2020 diff hist −30 Dorothy L. Sayers →Poetry, teaching, and advertisements: Removed judgemental language, replaced with simple neutral statement of facts
- 16:3016:30, 16 June 2020 diff hist −172 Dorothy L. Sayers →Translations: Rewrote text which expressed personal opinions
- 16:2516:25, 16 June 2020 diff hist −56 2012 Malaysian Grand Prix Removed ungrammatical nonsense, unnecessary detail for the lead section even if written properly
- 16:2416:24, 16 June 2020 diff hist −47 COVID-19 pandemic in Dominica →May 2020: Grammar, and no need to state the obvious
- 16:2316:23, 16 June 2020 diff hist −27 List of wrongful convictions in the United States There is no need to start by saying what the article title is. We already know that. And one does not need to explain what an asterisk is.
- 16:2116:21, 16 June 2020 diff hist −117 999 (emergency telephone number) →Uganda: Removed pointlessly capitalised and unencyclopaedic list
- 16:2116:21, 16 June 2020 diff hist −1 999 (emergency telephone number) →Eswatini: Grammar
- 16:2016:20, 16 June 2020 diff hist −87 999 (emergency telephone number) →Abandoned and hoax calls: Removed uninformative text
- 16:1816:18, 16 June 2020 diff hist −183 999 (emergency telephone number) →Location: Removed prescriptive text and fixed grammar errors
- 16:1416:14, 16 June 2020 diff hist −31 999 (emergency telephone number) →History: "As it happens" is entirely useless text. Removed.
- 16:1016:10, 16 June 2020 diff hist 0 999 (emergency telephone number) Bold face the article title the first time it appears in the text only.
- 16:0516:05, 16 June 2020 diff hist −48 Fancy rat →Coat types: More
- 16:0516:05, 16 June 2020 diff hist −12 Fancy rat →Body type: Same
- 16:0416:04, 16 June 2020 diff hist −86 Fancy rat →Markings: Removed unnecessary bold face
- 16:0316:03, 16 June 2020 diff hist −124 Fancy rat →Coloring: Removed redundant text and unnecessary bold face
- 16:0216:02, 16 June 2020 diff hist −123 Brown rat Improved lead section. Removed sentence discussing a definition which has not actually been given.
- 15:5615:56, 16 June 2020 diff hist −34 Louis Dominique Bourguignon Removed uninformative text
- 15:5515:55, 16 June 2020 diff hist −175 Highwayman Removed unnecessary dictionary links, readers should not be patronised. Also rewrote poor quality text
- 03:5703:57, 16 June 2020 diff hist 0 Óscar Pérez (footballer, born 1973) →International career: There were three wrong prepositions in just one clause. Fixed.
- 03:5303:53, 16 June 2020 diff hist +16 Óscar Pérez (footballer, born 1973) Clearer
- 03:5203:52, 16 June 2020 diff hist −92 Óscar Pérez (footballer, born 1973) Removed jarring opinion from lead
- 03:5003:50, 16 June 2020 diff hist +26 Óscar Pérez (footballer, born 1973) →Career statistics: Write in proper sentences
- 03:4803:48, 16 June 2020 diff hist −113 Murder of Botham Jean →Trial: Moved text around to form coherent paragraphs, and fixed some weirdly unidiomatic writing
- 03:4003:40, 16 June 2020 diff hist −7 Murder of Botham Jean →Victim: Removed scare quotes
- 03:3803:38, 16 June 2020 diff hist 0 N User:Flm rvn ←Created blank page current
- 03:3703:37, 16 June 2020 diff hist +37 Killing of Emantic Fitzgerald Bradford Jr. Made some style fixes. Moved a reference to end of sentence instead of middle. Defined acronym
