User contributions for EEBuchanan
A user with 3,367 edits. Account created on 5 January 2019.
22 May 2024
- 15:0115:01, 22 May 2024 diff hist −90 Watership Down →Rabbits: This article isn't talking about the sequel. This kind of info would go directly on the sequel's article itself. In the original novel, we are not told who mated with Hyzenthlay to produce her first littler of kittens. The book DOES make it clear that rabbits sometimes form monogamous relationships but that it isn't the norm. current
- 14:3514:35, 22 May 2024 diff hist +1 A Christmas Carol →Stave three Tag: Reverted
- 14:3414:34, 22 May 2024 diff hist +3 A Christmas Carol →Stave five: improper grammar. Commas MUST go after phrases/between changes in idea. Tag: Reverted
- 14:3314:33, 22 May 2024 diff hist +31 A Christmas Carol →Stave four: unclear sentences, especially some with too many pronouns. there are at least three subjects in the sentence who the "he" could refer to.
- 14:2914:29, 22 May 2024 diff hist +19 A Christmas Carol →Stave two: It is Belle's HUSBAND who says Scrooge is "Quite Alone in the World", not Belle. I can cite chapter and line if necessary.
- 14:1814:18, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 White Christmas (film) →Plot: Phil is talking to BOTH women in this scene. In fact it's Betty who does a good chunk of the explaining. current
- 14:1614:16, 22 May 2024 diff hist +5 White Christmas (film) →Plot
- 14:1514:15, 22 May 2024 diff hist −16 White Christmas (film) →Plot: choppy and awkward sentences/clarity issues.
- 13:5913:59, 22 May 2024 diff hist +16 The Court Jester →Plot current
- 13:5213:52, 22 May 2024 diff hist +54 Secondhand Lions →Plot: most of the article is fine, but this one sentence is super-confusingly worded. Adding a few words just so there's complete clarity. Tag: Reverted
- 13:1813:18, 22 May 2024 diff hist −1 How Ridiculous →Rexy Clothing Line current
- 13:1813:18, 22 May 2024 diff hist +5 How Ridiculous →Rexy Clothing Line
- 13:1613:16, 22 May 2024 diff hist +608 How Ridiculous →Rexy Clothing Line
- 13:0413:04, 22 May 2024 diff hist −7 How Ridiculous No edit summary
18 May 2024
- 04:1204:12, 18 May 2024 diff hist +1 Toy Story 3 →Plot: Proper grammar dictates that commas go after phrases and ideas. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 May 2024
- 19:2319:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist −1 WBTV →2022 helicopter crash current
- 19:2319:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist 0 WBTV →2022 helicopter crash: organization
- 19:1519:15, 13 May 2024 diff hist −15 WBTV No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:3214:32, 13 May 2024 diff hist +93 Toy Story 3 →Plot: awkward grammar, hyperbole, unexplained removal of key plot points, and inaccurate info. Point 1) Buzz is the ONLY one that attacks ANdy's toys to imprison them, calling Lotso "Commander". Lotso and the rest just watch. 2) The issue that makes Big Baby mad is the fact that Lotso doesn't let him look in the window to see the truth and LIES to him. To quote Woody, "She replaced YOU, and if you couldn't have her no one could. You LIED to Big Baby and you've been lying ever since!"
- 13:5913:59, 13 May 2024 diff hist −11 Toy Story That Time Forgot →Plot: redundant current
- 13:5213:52, 13 May 2024 diff hist −2 Toy Story 2 →Plot: no "Donate" about it. He's going to SELL it. To quote Al talking on the phone to the director of the museum, "Let's add another zero to the price". He's selling it.
8 May 2024
- 15:1815:18, 8 May 2024 diff hist 0 Incredibles 2 →Plot
- 15:0115:01, 8 May 2024 diff hist +1 The Incredibles →Plot
- 14:5514:55, 8 May 2024 diff hist +88 Toy Story 3 →Plot: Again, someone has removed key plot points for a low wordcount and also made sentences really choppy/awkward to read because of clearly missing info. Yes, extraneous detail needs to go, but you can't sacrifice clarity for sake of a low wordcount. As long as it's clear, concise and under 700 words it's ok.
- 14:3514:35, 8 May 2024 diff hist −16 Toy Story 2 →Plot: No reveal here. He gives them his perspective but they all already knew, as he was mint in his original packaging, he'd never been owned or played with. So he didn't "reveal" anything.
- 14:3114:31, 8 May 2024 diff hist −10 Toy Story →Plot
- 14:2814:28, 8 May 2024 diff hist +27 Toy Story →Plot
- 14:2514:25, 8 May 2024 diff hist +233 Toy Story →Plot: very awkwardly worded/unclear sentences, and also inaccurate. Concise is good and its good to take out as much extraneous detail as possible, but we can't sacrifice overall clarity for a low word count - remember there are people who never saw the film reading this. The toys are sentient the whole time, they just don't move when humans are around.
- 14:0514:05, 8 May 2024 diff hist +17 Toy Story 2 →Plot: cleanup. Wordcount still well under 700 word limit at 566.
- 13:5913:59, 8 May 2024 diff hist +122 Toy Story 2 Undid revision 1222671072 by Rangertapper (talk) Good faith edits, but need some grammatical cleaning up and clarity cleanup as well. Also reverting unexplained deletion of important plot point - it's Woody's fear of Andy abandoning him that causes him to temporarily want to go to the museum.
6 May 2024
- 21:1221:12, 6 May 2024 diff hist +9 Watership Down →Part 1: The Journey
- 07:4307:43, 6 May 2024 diff hist −9 Toy Story 2 →Plot
- 01:4301:43, 6 May 2024 diff hist −4 Belvidere, Illinois →History: Removing red link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 May 2024
- 13:1113:11, 4 May 2024 diff hist 0 Toy Story 2 →Plot
- 13:1013:10, 4 May 2024 diff hist +4 Toy Story 2 →Plot
- 13:0713:07, 4 May 2024 diff hist +1 Toy Story 2 →Plot
- 13:0413:04, 4 May 2024 diff hist +2 Toy Story 2 →Plot
3 May 2024
- 08:0308:03, 3 May 2024 diff hist +4 Toy Story 3 →Plot
- 07:5507:55, 3 May 2024 diff hist +72 Toy Story 2 →Plot
- 07:5007:50, 3 May 2024 diff hist −1 Toy Story 2 →Plot
- 07:4707:47, 3 May 2024 diff hist +104 Toy Story 2 →Plot: some ungrammatical and very confusingly worded sentences here. Cleaning up. You can always be concise, but you can't sacrifice good grammar and clarity for shortened plot.
- 06:5006:50, 3 May 2024 diff hist +1 Tron: Legacy →Plot
28 April 2024
- 03:4003:40, 28 April 2024 diff hist −11 Watership Down →Part 4: Hazel-rah Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 April 2024
- 22:0122:01, 27 April 2024 diff hist +4 Watership Down →Epilogue Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:0022:00, 27 April 2024 diff hist −27 Watership Down →Part 4: Hazel-rah Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:5521:55, 27 April 2024 diff hist +37 Watership Down →Part 3: Efrafa Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:5121:51, 27 April 2024 diff hist −2 Watership Down →Part 2: On Watership Down: More bad grammar. Commas go after phrases and ideas. I don't know who removed them all. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:4621:46, 27 April 2024 diff hist +3 Watership Down →Part 1: The Journey: Bad grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 April 2024
- 18:2418:24, 24 April 2024 diff hist +6 Smaug Removing what might be construed as an editorial
31 March 2024
- 20:3020:30, 31 March 2024 diff hist −4 How Ridiculous updating viewcount, etc.
