User contributions for Dylanesmo

28 August 2024

• 09:2209:22, 28 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Magic (Olivia Newton-John song) ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 09:2009:20, 28 August 2024 diff hist +6‎ m Magic (Olivia Newton-John song) ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 09:1909:19, 28 August 2024 diff hist −572‎ Magic (Olivia Newton-John song) ‎ This is a tangentially related factoid. It would make sense to include it if he named "Magic" as a favorite. The deleted paragraph could be included in any article about ELO. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:1809:18, 28 August 2024 diff hist −1,032‎ Magic (Olivia Newton-John song) ‎ The description from a lawsuit is not relevant to the popular perception of the song. A legal description of the song's subject is pretty specific. That said, the idea that there was a lawsuit with a high school about the use of this song would be interesting to include in the opening section of the article or as section of its own (e.g. "controversy"). I'd like to read more about it! Tag: Visual edit

24 August 2024

• 08:2308:23, 24 August 2024 diff hist +33‎ m Handle with Care (1977 film) ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

16 August 2024

• 15:2915:29, 16 August 2024 diff hist −1,543‎ Rick Derringer ‎ →‎2000s and 2010s: Irrelevant details involving his finances. Not key to his biography. Also, just weirdly specific. This page has some oddness going on - maybe is being edited by Rick Derringer himself? current Tag: Visual edit

9 July 2024

• 07:0107:01, 9 July 2024 diff hist +1‎ The Last Days of Disco ‎ →‎Cast: Poorly written confusing sentenc Tag: Visual edit
• 07:0007:00, 9 July 2024 diff hist −160‎ m The Last Days of Disco ‎ →‎Cast: Removed analysis and expanded trivia from the basic cast list Tag: Visual edit
• 06:5706:57, 9 July 2024 diff hist +166‎ The Last Days of Disco ‎ →‎Cast Tag: Visual edit
• 06:5106:51, 9 July 2024 diff hist −125‎ The Last Days of Disco ‎ →‎Cast: simplified credits. removed references to other characters. references that should be put some other section. Tag: Visual edit
• 06:4206:42, 9 July 2024 diff hist +10‎ The Last Days of Disco ‎ →‎Cast: Separated out the credits for the two famous guys that did cameos. I checked that the roles matched the film and imdb credits. Seems like there shouldn't be a period at the end of most of these credits because they aren't sentences, but that could be revisited later. Tag: Visual edit

13 June 2024

• 06:1506:15, 13 June 2024 diff hist −30‎ Licorice Pizza ‎ →‎Cast: He isn't credited as a future film producer in the movie. Also, none of the other characters have a description of their future careers in this section of the wiki. Tag: Visual edit

10 June 2024

• 12:1612:16, 10 June 2024 diff hist −6‎ Once Upon a Time in Hollywood ‎ →‎Pre-production and casting Tag: Visual edit
• 11:5511:55, 10 June 2024 diff hist +10‎ Tony Tarantino ‎ →‎Position on police brutality Tag: Visual edit

2 June 2024

• 10:4210:42, 2 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Meatloaf ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

16 May 2024

• 09:5809:58, 16 May 2024 diff hist −1,764‎ List of University of Puget Sound alumni ‎ →‎Literature and journalism: mentioned in entertainment section already Tag: Visual edit
• 09:5309:53, 16 May 2024 diff hist −1,108‎ List of University of Puget Sound alumni ‎ →‎Business: Not an alumni - only received honorary degree. was never enrolled. Tag: Visual edit

26 April 2024

• 04:5804:58, 26 April 2024 diff hist −9‎ Zzyzx, California ‎ All the city names should have the state abbreviations after them or none should. I assume there is a wiki style guideline for this. I just removed the one from Las Vegas to have it match Baker. Tag: Visual edit

14 March 2024

• 11:2211:22, 14 March 2024 diff hist −1,034‎ Rose City Book Pub ‎ →‎Description and history: This reads as an advertisement. There is some scant historical info padded around it that seems like an attempt to sneak the advertising by. It is not clear why this relatively recently-founded business needs a wiki page. The article doesn't tie to any other aspects/events in the community history. I don't want to be rude, but I think the page meets the criteria for removal overall. Tag: Visual edit
• 11:1811:18, 14 March 2024 diff hist −1,041‎ Rose City Book Pub ‎ →‎Description and history: Not relevant. Advertising an event for fundraising. Tag: Visual edit

6 March 2024

• 12:4112:41, 6 March 2024 diff hist −4‎ m Riverport Riot ‎ →‎Incident Tag: Visual edit

16 February 2024

• 12:4912:49, 16 February 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Earl Palmer ‎ "Hits" doesn't have a clear definition. For that reason, saying that Mr. Palmer played on them is a bit dubious. Tag: Visual edit

10 February 2024

• 03:1203:12, 10 February 2024 diff hist −1‎ Murder on a Sunday Morning ‎ →‎Aftermath Tag: Visual edit

4 February 2024

• 15:0815:08, 4 February 2024 diff hist −42‎ John Doe (musician) ‎ →‎Acting: already mentioned Tag: Visual edit

26 January 2024

• 12:3512:35, 26 January 2024 diff hist −6‎ Robert Leckie (author) ‎ →‎Personal life Tag: Visual edit
• 08:2008:20, 26 January 2024 diff hist −17‎ Expats (miniseries) ‎ changed tense Tag: Visual edit

17 January 2024

• 06:2906:29, 17 January 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Haka performed by non-New Zealand sports teams ‎ →‎Jefferson High School, Portland, Oregon Tag: Visual edit

10 January 2024

• 16:0716:07, 10 January 2024 diff hist −11‎ New Girl ‎ redundant, clunky phrase. made better Tag: Visual edit

21 December 2023

• 02:4902:49, 21 December 2023 diff hist +5‎ Tom Bukovac ‎ →‎Career: Fixed formatting. This section is a cut and paste from his website bio though. Or vice versa? Tag: Visual edit
• 02:4402:44, 21 December 2023 diff hist −88‎ Tom Bukovac ‎ Advertising Tag: Visual edit

18 December 2023

• 11:1711:17, 18 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Maserati Boomerang ‎ capitalized company name Tag: Visual edit

14 December 2023

• 11:3411:34, 14 December 2023 diff hist −17‎ m Jerry Lee Lewis: Trouble in Mind ‎ →‎Synopsis: the length of the film doesn't seem relevant to the synopsis Tag: Visual edit

4 December 2023

• 08:5008:50, 4 December 2023 diff hist +16‎ Bridget Jones (film series) ‎ →‎Principal cast and characters: the cast matrix key should be a footnote Tag: Visual edit

30 November 2023

• 01:3801:38, 30 November 2023 diff hist −132‎ Life (Richards book) ‎ →‎Synopsis: Stated again in production section with citation. Redundant to have it both places. current Tag: Visual edit

24 November 2023

• 14:1114:11, 24 November 2023 diff hist +8‎ m Next Goal Wins (2023 film) ‎ →‎Production Tag: Visual edit

6 October 2023

• 09:5309:53, 6 October 2023 diff hist −233‎ Sedition Act of 1918 ‎ →‎Enforcement and constitutional challenges: newspaper views not related to enforcement and constitutional challenge. A section of media/cultural reactions could be added though. Tag: Visual edit

6 September 2023

• 09:3409:34, 6 September 2023 diff hist −1‎ Enrique Tarrio ‎ →‎Splits within Proud Boys: edited to reflect article cited. Kind of tricky idea to summarize from that one article. It is not well established how the chapters are related/organized by states/regions and eventually the national arm of the org. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:2909:29, 6 September 2023 diff hist +10‎ Enrique Tarrio ‎ →‎Splits within Proud Boys: clarification. nothing big. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:2809:28, 6 September 2023 diff hist +10‎ Enrique Tarrio ‎ →‎Splits within Proud Boys: clarifies subject of the passage Tag: Visual edit

17 June 2023

• 09:2709:27, 17 June 2023 diff hist −166‎ m Booker T. & the M.G.'s ‎ Doesn't fit into the intro for the page. Could fit into a section (or page) on race in soul and jazz, but Benny Goodman's band isn't a main point of this page. Also lacking a reference. Feels like more of a response to the proceeding sentence Tag: Visual edit

9 June 2023

• 12:3912:39, 9 June 2023 diff hist −8‎ Gibson L6-S ‎ Current when? Tag: Visual edit
• 12:3712:37, 9 June 2023 diff hist −11‎ Gibson L6-S ‎ The range of the guitar isn't two octaves - it is 5. It is 2 octaves on a single string though. Tag: Visual edit

18 May 2023

• 15:0015:00, 18 May 2023 diff hist −255‎ Nutria ‎ The two sentences that were the intro to the US section were specific to Louisiana (which has a well detailed and written section below) Tag: Visual edit

20 April 2023

• 14:1214:12, 20 April 2023 diff hist −41‎ Pele's hair ‎ →‎Features: The weight can't be tied to diameter without a known density. Also, concept was vague and without reference. Tag: Visual edit

15 April 2023

• 15:0415:04, 15 April 2023 diff hist +1‎ Donald M. Kerr (conservationist) ‎ capitalized name of center. the award part of sentence seems off to me too though. Tag: Visual edit

26 March 2023

• 23:4023:40, 26 March 2023 diff hist −4‎ Killers of the Flower Moon (film) ‎ →‎Filming: redundancy, clunky phrase Tag: Visual edit

25 March 2023

• 12:2612:26, 25 March 2023 diff hist −11‎ Ridley Scott ‎ his movies didn't frequently showcase all of those settings. only once for each. Tag: Visual edit

19 January 2023

• 10:4310:43, 19 January 2023 diff hist +190‎ m Voodoo Doughnut ‎ →‎Voodoo Doughnut Recordings Tag: Visual edit

8 November 2022

• 06:3606:36, 8 November 2022 diff hist +4‎ Hung (TV series) ‎ →‎Recurring Tag: Visual edit

22 October 2022

• 11:0511:05, 22 October 2022 diff hist −5‎ Drill music ‎ →‎Characteristics: unnecessary, uninformative adverb Tag: Visual edit