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A user with 82 edits. Account created on 22 January 2019.
4 October 2024
- 07:3307:33, 4 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Missouri State Guard →History: Corrected typo, changing at to as. current
4 August 2024
- 02:0702:07, 4 August 2024 diff hist +9 Urban Hymns Composition revision Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0202:02, 4 August 2024 diff hist −72 Urban Hymns Sentence needed revisions related to grammar and composition. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 June 2024
- 15:4815:48, 7 June 2024 diff hist −4 m Freedman's Savings Bank →Fraud and other financial misconduct: Removed "was".
14 May 2024
- 06:2006:20, 14 May 2024 diff hist −8 m Popular sovereignty →United States: Composition edit. Does not alter argument content.
10 May 2024
- 14:5014:50, 10 May 2024 diff hist +4 m John Mearsheimer →2014 Crimean crisis: Composition. Inserted "the".
12 April 2024
- 17:3617:36, 12 April 2024 diff hist +5 m Sula (novel) No edit summary
20 March 2024
- 13:1313:13, 20 March 2024 diff hist +869 Talk:Charlottesville car attack →Simple edit request in "Perpetrator—Ideology": new section Tag: New topic
1 March 2024
- 23:4723:47, 1 March 2024 diff hist +55 Sharecropping →United States
- 23:4423:44, 1 March 2024 diff hist +588 Sharecropping →United States: The family unit, and protecting black women from sexual assault, were most definitely factors in the development of sharecropping as the cited monograph, not to mention recent Reconstruction historiography generally, support.
8 February 2024
- 23:1123:11, 8 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Michael Guido →Mayor of Dearborn: Removed unnecessary space left from my previous edit between period and citation.
- 23:1023:10, 8 February 2024 diff hist −41 m Michael Guido →Mayor of Dearborn: Composition needed revision. I think the writing was improved without altering the content, or spirit, I think the original contributor intended.
17 January 2024
- 17:0717:07, 17 January 2024 diff hist −17 m Mexican muralism →Los Tres Grandes (The Three Greats): Grammar and composition. Also, it was somewhat redundant, but I may be wrong.
12 January 2024
- 02:2402:24, 12 January 2024 diff hist −28 m History of New York City (1665–1783) →Revolution: Edited my own grammatical error and some composition.
- 02:1302:13, 12 January 2024 diff hist +437 Talk:Airlift →Largest Civilian Airlift: new section
10 January 2024
- 17:0517:05, 10 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Myth of the spat-on Vietnam veteran →Press reports: Changed "the" to "that". It is grammatically correct, as well as the actual word used in the quotation being cited.
30 December 2023
- 19:4419:44, 30 December 2023 diff hist −11 Second Sino-Japanese War Deleted "provincial". I was wrong. Sorry. Tag: Manual revert
- 19:4119:41, 30 December 2023 diff hist +11 Second Sino-Japanese War Nanjing is the capital of Jiangsu province. It needs to say "provincial capital" here, otherwise it implies it is the national capital of China. It isn't. Please fact check this before changing my one-word edit. Tag: Reverted
26 December 2023
- 16:5616:56, 26 December 2023 diff hist +1,910 Talk:Big River (musical) →Infobox Awards List: new section Tag: New topic
14 December 2023
- 19:2919:29, 14 December 2023 diff hist +11 m Second Sino-Japanese War Nanjing is the capital of a province in China, not all of China. Tag: Reverted
4 December 2023
- 18:5618:56, 4 December 2023 diff hist −4 m 1860 United States presidential election →Democratic (Northern Democratic) Party nomination: Deleted the word "was".
29 November 2023
- 18:1118:11, 29 November 2023 diff hist +21 m Earl Warren Composition issue. Content moved around, but not changed or removed.
27 October 2023
- 14:4914:49, 27 October 2023 diff hist +122 m Michael the Black Man →Later career and reinvention: Added full citation with link to article.
- 14:4614:46, 27 October 2023 diff hist +227 Michael the Black Man →Later career and reinvention: I added this because the Mother Jones piece had yet to be referenced. It is a great article/interview with the subject of this page.
22 October 2023
- 14:2814:28, 22 October 2023 diff hist +204 Talk:Haaretz →Please Edit This Word Choice: Reply Tag: Reply
- 14:2714:27, 22 October 2023 diff hist +601 Talk:Haaretz →Please Edit This Word Choice: new section Tag: New topic
9 October 2023
- 09:4609:46, 9 October 2023 diff hist +17 Police brutality in the United States →Militarization of police: The numbers are inconclusive in this article. Even the data provided does not amount to a 50% difference as previously indicated in this sentence. I decided to quote the story directly to avoid taking my own liberties (or doing math to change the percentage). Yay!
- 02:2502:25, 9 October 2023 diff hist −2 Antonio López de Santa Anna "Resulted in" is misleading. It implies territory would not have been lost to the US, were it not for his actions.
1 October 2023
- 17:4117:41, 1 October 2023 diff hist +4 Rio Grande The link is for longest rivers in US, not N. America. So I replaced N.A. with U.S.
25 September 2023
- 03:1803:18, 25 September 2023 diff hist +718 Talk:Colfax massacre →Democrats and Republicans: Reply Tag: Reply
- 02:0502:05, 25 September 2023 diff hist +599 Talk:Colfax massacre →Concern about terms: Reply Tag: Reply
22 September 2023
- 18:2018:20, 22 September 2023 diff hist −5 m Siege of Boston Deleted the word over. It was not necessary.
20 September 2023
- 03:0803:08, 20 September 2023 diff hist +327 History of New York City (1665–1783) →Revolution: Added the perspective of another historian to supplement the mostly McCullough citations.
- 02:4002:40, 20 September 2023 diff hist −3 m History of New York City (1665–1783) →Revolution
15 September 2023
- 16:5616:56, 15 September 2023 diff hist +258 User talk:Dsa605 →The 1619 Reaction: Reply current Tag: Reply
29 August 2023
- 05:3005:30, 29 August 2023 diff hist −382 Warren Beatty →Sexual misconduct allegation: Essentially the same content. However, the NBC News article cited—and paraphrased here—inaccurately claimed the lawsuit described the defendant as winning an Academy Award for Best Actor for "Bonnie and Clyde". Beatty was nominated, but did not win. The lawsuit actually says he was nominated. The Variety Magazine reference now included accurately reported this portion of the lawsuit.
9 August 2023
- 15:2015:20, 9 August 2023 diff hist −4 m Armistice of Cassibile Changed "Germany moved rapidly" to "Germany responded", so the paragraph begins with a better transition. "In response, Germany" may be the ideal choice. But, I wanted to keep the edit minimal.
26 July 2023
- 17:3217:32, 26 July 2023 diff hist −222 John Casor →Background: Two sentences were deleted for being false. The first citation after these sentences contradicts the content of the deleted sentences. Of the twenty Africans brought to Jamestown in 1619, at least one eventually became free. However, not all of them became free. Also, it the deleted sentences asserted those first twenty Africans voluntary left Africa after agreeing to indenture contracts. The historical evidence does not support this.
16 July 2023
- 01:0501:05, 16 July 2023 diff hist +4 m Chapters from My Autobiography →Chapter 8: Inserted a clearly missing word in a sentence.
10 July 2023
- 16:1416:14, 10 July 2023 diff hist +391 Jackson State killings →Timeline: Added more context using the same source already cited.
- 08:1208:12, 10 July 2023 diff hist +302 m Mark Twain →Love of science and technology: Added citation where needed.
29 June 2023
- 07:2507:25, 29 June 2023 diff hist +252 Ron Richardson →Early years: Minor composition revisions to accomodate an inline citation (which were requested in a template message for this page).
26 October 2022
- 05:5705:57, 26 October 2022 diff hist +15 m Jaleel White Grammatical
22 October 2022
- 07:0507:05, 22 October 2022 diff hist −699 False accusation of rape →Lisak, USA (2010): This statement in no way represents—and may contradict—the study it references. No where in the Lisak study is it stated—or even implied—that cases that did not proceed with prosecution were as likely to be true as they were false. This sentence implies that, which makes it extremely problematic.
- 06:5506:55, 22 October 2022 diff hist +97 False accusation of rape Word choice/composition misrepresented the study cited. This edit only attempts to accurately represent the study which was already cited on this page. See pg 1329 of https://cdn.atixa.org/website-media/atixa.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/12193336/Lisak-False-Allegations-16-VAW-1318-2010.pdf
24 September 2022
- 08:5108:51, 24 September 2022 diff hist −26 m List of police violence incidents during George Floyd protests →List of incidents: Deleted superfluous/redundant content
- 08:4708:47, 24 September 2022 diff hist +265 List of police violence incidents during George Floyd protests Added one incident in San Jose, CA on 29 May 2020. The citation included is a class-action lawsuit.
26 August 2022
- 16:5016:50, 26 August 2022 diff hist −10 m Stucco Composition. "Notably Italian" or "including Italian". "Notably including" is unnecessary.
7 July 2022
- 16:0116:01, 7 July 2022 diff hist −56 m Mexican Movement of 1968 →Sparking events of the student movement: Minor composition edit. Paragraph one.
