User contributions for DrPD

24 December 2011

• 18:2918:29, 24 December 2011 diff hist 0 Oxybenzone moved reference to penetration and overall safety (as judged by relevant regulators) out of the first paragraph and into the controversy section where it belongs.

17 November 2011

• 16:2716:27, 17 November 2011 diff hist +3 Over-the-counter drug Moved sentence on consumer acceptance of risk out of the introduction and into the discussion where it belongs.

21 June 2011

• 22:0622:06, 21 June 2011 diff hist +117 Polyquaternium explained arbitrary nomenclature

19 June 2011

• 11:5611:56, 19 June 2011 diff hist +105 Hair →Introduction: Simpler flow highlighting what hair is, demoted what hair isn't to a sub-section.

14 June 2011

• 04:0204:02, 14 June 2011 diff hist −109 Talk:Hair →Shorter Tighter Structure: Proposal for some real rewriting
• 03:5203:52, 14 June 2011 diff hist −67 Hair →Eyebrows and eyelashes: and a bit more tightening of the second paragraph. Still, should have more information and a bit less random detail (camels?).
• 03:4903:49, 14 June 2011 diff hist −169 Hair →Eyebrows and eyelashes: a bit more tightening of the first paragraph of this section.
• 03:4603:46, 14 June 2011 diff hist −289 Hair →Eyebrows and eyelashes: reduced the siliness (people use umbrellas instead of eyebrows?) but this section should either be much better or go away.

11 June 2011

• 11:5511:55, 11 June 2011 diff hist −535 Hair →Human "hairlessness": tightened intro paragraph to this section.
• 11:5011:50, 11 June 2011 diff hist +769 Talk:Hair →Shorter Tighter Structure: new section
• 11:3711:37, 11 June 2011 diff hist +1 Hair →Hair pigment: improved section title
• 02:5902:59, 11 June 2011 diff hist +226 Talk:Hair →Body hair growth cycles: question answered

5 March 2011

• 21:2821:28, 5 March 2011 diff hist +26 m Essex County, New Jersey →Overview: consistent links in list

20 February 2011

• 23:0523:05, 20 February 2011 diff hist −8 Hair →Warmth: it's white, just keep it simple.
• 23:0423:04, 20 February 2011 diff hist +2 Hair Undid revision 414184789 by 72.177.0.43 (talk) while some hair is transparent, this doesn't apply to most medulated hair, like polar bear hair.

31 January 2011

• 03:2503:25, 31 January 2011 diff hist −72 Hair deleted non-informative sentence in first paragraph.
• 03:1303:13, 31 January 2011 diff hist −197 Hair →Hair pigment: deleted sentence on platinum blond hair. too fine grained a topic for this level of discussion.

5 September 2010

• 21:2721:27, 5 September 2010 diff hist +15 m Mie scattering →Comparison with Rayleigh scattering: added parens for clarity
• 21:1421:14, 5 September 2010 diff hist +522 Hair →The EDAR Locus: Correctly (?) formatted references to EDAR.
• 21:0421:04, 5 September 2010 diff hist −42 Hair →Texture: deleted 'no reference' flag since there are references. Still, this section could take a wider point of view. And the references should be correctly formatted.

1 September 2010

• 12:1712:17, 1 September 2010 diff hist +87 Hair coloring Undid revision 382213454 by 205.209.85.243 (talk) prior edit violated neutrality. evidence really is limited and inconsistent.

11 July 2010

• 14:1514:15, 11 July 2010 diff hist +6 m Hair →Construction of the root and strand: clarify & correct
• 14:1314:13, 11 July 2010 diff hist −32 Hair Changes for clarity.
• 14:0614:06, 11 July 2010 diff hist −52 Hair Reorganized first paragraph, untangling separate concepts.
• 12:0312:03, 11 July 2010 diff hist +2 m Talk:Mie scattering →Contradiction?: separate question & answer with a blank line
• 12:0312:03, 11 July 2010 diff hist +247 Talk:Mie scattering →Contradiction?: answered
• 12:0112:01, 11 July 2010 diff hist −10 Mie scattering what Mie scattering is for -- added cross references and improved clarity.
• 11:5511:55, 11 July 2010 diff hist −1 m Mie scattering comma & hyphen fix.
• 11:5211:52, 11 July 2010 diff hist +834 Mie scattering Introduction made more qualitative. Specific comments about diction, the math and further development of theory moved further down into the formalism section.

26 June 2010

• 12:4812:48, 26 June 2010 diff hist +12 m Hair →Construction of the root and strand: cleaner, simpler middle of last paragraph
• 12:4412:44, 26 June 2010 diff hist −7 m Hair →Construction of the root and strand: minor changes for clarity and simplicity.
• 12:4212:42, 26 June 2010 diff hist −59 Hair →Construction of the root and strand: simplified & corrected opening sentences, wikipedia link to root was confusing as that page is about plants.
• 12:3912:39, 26 June 2010 diff hist −8 Hair simplified opening phrase removing the incorrect "filamentous cells."

25 June 2010

• 21:4221:42, 25 June 2010 diff hist −262 Shampoo →All-natural: removed sulfate-free sentence. It had the citation needed tag because it's at least controversial and most likely simply not true.
• 21:3421:34, 25 June 2010 diff hist −100 Montclair, New Jersey →Sports: deleted reference to an individual kids team and their recent success.
• 21:3121:31, 25 June 2010 diff hist 0 Keratin Re-ordered sections -- cornification under molecular biology. Filament formation further under molecular biology.
• 21:2721:27, 25 June 2010 diff hist +642 Talk:Keratin →Needs revamp -- modern (2006) nomenclature, prioritization of sections: new section
• 21:2621:26, 25 June 2010 diff hist +174 Keratin Added simple orienting material to the first paragraph (keratin is in skin, hair and nails) hoping to lower the obscurity of the article.
• 21:2121:21, 25 June 2010 diff hist −136 Keratin deleted comment "There are various types of keratins ... The outer layer of hair is also made of keratin." 1st part doesn't flow, 2nd part is wrong (keratin is throughout the hair fiber).
• 21:1821:18, 25 June 2010 diff hist −43 Keratin →Silk: deleted the parenthetical comment "(Hair, or fur, occurs only in mammals.)" which isn't needed and breaks the flow of the section.

6 June 2010

• 00:3800:38, 6 June 2010 diff hist −279 Hair →Human hair growth: removed text that is both not quite correct and not really informative to the topic of this section.
• 00:3600:36, 6 June 2010 diff hist +112 Hair →Hair pigment: cleaner and more correct text, along with some details I moved from the section above.
• 00:3300:33, 6 June 2010 diff hist −259 Hair →Construction of the root and strand: moving the discussion of hair color to the next section (which is about hair color).
• 00:3200:32, 6 June 2010 diff hist +138 Hair →Construction of the root and strand: More technical corrections and some more simply structured sentences.
• 00:1900:19, 6 June 2010 diff hist −196 Hair →Construction of the root and strand: Deleted assertion that proteins are non-polar and that keratin being non-polar is why hair is hydrophobic. Both statements are incorrect.

2 March 2010

• 21:2321:23, 2 March 2010 diff hist −228 Hydrogen peroxide →Domestic uses: consistent bullet formatting (1 bullet per application).
• 21:2021:20, 2 March 2010 diff hist +20 Ammonium persulfate added an application (hair bleach). Applications should be better organized.

10 February 2010

• 19:0919:09, 10 February 2010 diff hist +193 Pickering emulsion fixed reference formatting
• 19:0719:07, 10 February 2010 diff hist −191 Pickering emulsion struggling to fix the references so they appear
• 19:0019:00, 10 February 2010 diff hist +397 Pickering emulsion No edit summary