User contributions for Doradus

26 October 2024

• 20:2720:27, 26 October 2024 diff hist 0 Tom Holland →Career: Start the "breakthrough as Spider-Man" section by talking about Spider-man. Seems to me that rigidly splitting sections at calendar-year boundaries buries the lede of his career

10 October 2024

• 18:5918:59, 10 October 2024 diff hist −39 X3D →Alternatives: Remove 3DMLW, which is not actually a viable alternative anymore

27 August 2024

• 12:2312:23, 27 August 2024 diff hist +236 Talk:Quark model →Still exceedingly technical: new section current Tag: New topic

13 August 2024

• 12:1112:11, 13 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Static single-assignment form →History: Fix incorrect word order. The cited source uses the order "static single assigmnent"; see heading 2.2 for example

30 July 2023

• 03:2503:25, 30 July 2023 diff hist −2 m Toroidal propeller Fix "dampened" -> "damped"

24 July 2023

• 13:0113:01, 24 July 2023 diff hist −81 SS Warrimoo →International Date Line claim: Expand on the notion of "century" as per Talk

7 April 2023

• 14:0714:07, 7 April 2023 diff hist −10 m Jerk (physics) Provide more informative link for "clothoid"

18 March 2023

• 22:3322:33, 18 March 2023 diff hist +16 List of National Lacrosse League records Undo incorrect Lyle Thompson record. He scored 12 points, not 12 goals. Tag: Manual revert

10 February 2023

• 03:3103:31, 10 February 2023 diff hist −27 m Vickrey auction Remove "clarification needed". It's not unclear. The paragraph is quite explicit.

1 February 2023

• 13:1213:12, 1 February 2023 diff hist −32 Hash function →Trivial hash function: replace jargon "dialed out" with plain "extracted"

1 January 2023

• 16:5416:54, 1 January 2023 diff hist +4 m List of countries and territories by number of land borders →Superlatives: Link Gibraltar

11 December 2022

• 13:1913:19, 11 December 2022 diff hist +542 Talk:SS Warrimoo →Start of the century: new section Tag: New topic

31 October 2022

• 11:0911:09, 31 October 2022 diff hist +27 m Eye pattern →PSK: Ok, how about a "main article" link?

26 October 2022

• 12:2312:23, 26 October 2022 diff hist +23 m Eye pattern →PSK: Link to Phase-shift keying Tag: Reverted

27 September 2022

• 03:1103:11, 27 September 2022 diff hist −35 m Lake Agassiz →Geological progression: Remove "citation needed" for area comparison with Black Sea. That article lists the Black Sea's area, which is readily compared with the number from Fisher at al

27 June 2022

• 02:3702:37, 27 June 2022 diff hist +20 m Talk box →Kustom Electronics talk box ("The Bag"): Link Superstition (song)

19 June 2022

• 21:5321:53, 19 June 2022 diff hist +7 m Corsi–Rosenthal Box →Design: "20 inch" as an adjective

13 February 2022

• 18:2218:22, 13 February 2022 diff hist +9 m Andromeda Galaxy →Nucleus: Remove excess precision in conversion of approximately 160km/s -> 199mi/s
• 18:1718:17, 13 February 2022 diff hist −22 m Andromeda Galaxy →Structure: "directly from the side" is unclear - what side? "Edge-on" is more clear and is the term used later in this section
• 17:5417:54, 13 February 2022 diff hist −7 m TON 618 →Supermassive black hole: Reduce jargon: QSO -> quasar

8 February 2022

• 14:2314:23, 8 February 2022 diff hist −37 Recursive islands and lakes →Lakes on islands in lakes on islands in lakes: Remove unnecessary "citation needed". The Geohack link shows the island quite clearly.

11 December 2021

• 18:3718:37, 11 December 2021 diff hist −34 m Heat pipe →Structure, design and construction: Delete unnecessary "cication needed". We've already established that heat transfers more slowly in the wall material, and this statement follows from that.

22 November 2021

• 13:4213:42, 22 November 2021 diff hist +248 Talk:Rational Team Concert →Inappropriate redirect: new section

21 September 2021

• 01:3501:35, 21 September 2021 diff hist −1 Quasi-star →Formation and properties: Reduce excessive precision in the "1 billion kilometers" length

29 August 2021

• 14:0114:01, 29 August 2021 diff hist +1 m Chess middlegame →Aims of the middlegame: Add Oxford comma to clarify sentence containing a list of three items plus another clause
• 13:1313:13, 29 August 2021 diff hist −53 m Angle grinder →Safety: Remove redundant and oddly-phrased bit

14 August 2021

• 19:3719:37, 14 August 2021 diff hist +434 Talk:Geometric algebra →Intro sentence is a barrage of jargon: I pretty much put it back to how it was a year ago
• 19:3419:34, 14 August 2021 diff hist −20 Geometric algebra Restore a more accessible intro sentence from about a year ago as per MOS:INTRO; see talk. Prior version: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Geometric_algebra&oldid=972212911

12 August 2021

• 18:2318:23, 12 August 2021 diff hist −5 m Star Wars: The Bad Batch →Guests: Simplify "Sith" link
• 13:5313:53, 12 August 2021 diff hist +831 Talk:Geometric algebra →Intro sentence is a barrage of jargon: It was simpler a year ago
• 13:4313:43, 12 August 2021 diff hist +1,591 Talk:Geometric algebra →Intro sentence is a barrage of jargon: new section

9 August 2021

• 12:5212:52, 9 August 2021 diff hist −1 m RISC-V →Arithmetic and logic sets: Ditto
• 12:5212:52, 9 August 2021 diff hist −1 m RISC-V →Arithmetic and logic sets: Remove final "s" from "the instructions includes"

20 June 2021

• 12:1712:17, 20 June 2021 diff hist 0 m Cats (musical) →Broadway: Reorder sentences so "the original creative team" makes sense
• 12:1412:14, 20 June 2021 diff hist 0 m Cats (musical) Fix "Heaviside layer" link (attempt #3 - I wish these links worked in Preview mode so I wouldn't need to keep submitting)
• 12:1312:13, 20 June 2021 diff hist 0 m Cats (musical) Fix "Heaviside layer" link (attempt #2)
• 12:1212:12, 20 June 2021 diff hist +17 m Cats (musical) Fix "Heaviside layer" link
• 12:0712:07, 20 June 2021 diff hist 0 m Cats (2019 film) Put the noun "musical" in the link to the musical

27 March 2021

• 12:5612:56, 27 March 2021 diff hist 0 m Four-dimensional space Fix "Minkowski structure" link. (The link is not to an article about Minkowski.)

22 March 2021

• 13:1913:19, 22 March 2021 diff hist −1 m Control plane Move awkwardly parenthesized statement about the forwarding plane

4 November 2020

• 22:2722:27, 4 November 2020 diff hist +8 Numeral prefix →Table of number prefixes in English: Citation needed for "unci" meaning one twelfth. Can't find any refs or any discussion on the talk page.

14 October 2020

• 23:3823:38, 14 October 2020 diff hist +6 m Argentinosaurus Remove excess precision "39.7m" in a length estimate known only to within a few meters

12 September 2020

• 11:2111:21, 12 September 2020 diff hist +570 Talk:Finland–Russia relations →Kept its independence: new section
• 11:1611:16, 12 September 2020 diff hist −112 Finland–Russia relations Remove biased and incorrect statement "Despite losing territory, this was a small price to pay as Finland was the only nation to keep its independence". Canada also kept its independence, and the "small price to pay" bit violates [Wikipedia:ATTRIBUTEPOV]

14 August 2020

• 03:0703:07, 14 August 2020 diff hist −2 m Nicolaus Copernicus →Predecessors: rm unnecessary parentheses

20 July 2020

• 11:3711:37, 20 July 2020 diff hist −781 Forwarding plane rm bogus OOP class vs. instance methods example not supported by the cited references

19 July 2020

• 13:1113:11, 19 July 2020 diff hist −776 Control plane rm bogus OOP class vs. instance methods example not supported by the cited references

10 July 2020

• 11:5411:54, 10 July 2020 diff hist −258 Toronto District School Board Remove confusing and erroneous statement about dress codes that wasn't supported by the linked article

6 July 2020

• 12:4912:49, 6 July 2020 diff hist −203 List of Russian artists Remove Leonid Afremov, whose article has been deleted multiple times

10 June 2020

• 12:5012:50, 10 June 2020 diff hist −4 m Regular expression →Patterns for non-regular languages: rm unnecessary word "far"