User contributions for Deftonesderrick
A user with 1,332 edits. Account created on 12 October 2009.
11 April 2011
- 15:2815:28, 11 April 2011 diff hist −473 Insidious (film) →Plot: Plot bloat. "Events" is enough information. Also, outlining every detail isn't necessary.
5 April 2011
- 17:4617:46, 5 April 2011 diff hist +42 User:Deftonesderrick/Contributions list Added Insidious
- 17:4317:43, 5 April 2011 diff hist −86 User talk:Deftonesderrick No edit summary
- 17:4217:42, 5 April 2011 diff hist −102 User:Deftonesderrick fix
- 17:4017:40, 5 April 2011 diff hist −57 Insidious (film) →Plot: Quick fix.
- 17:3417:34, 5 April 2011 diff hist −1,202 Insidious (film) →Plot: Cleaned up and shortened. Trimmed unnecessary details, fixed grammar mistakes, tonal inconsistencies, etc. Per WP:FILMPLOT.
- 15:5515:55, 5 April 2011 diff hist −6,567 User talk:Deftonesderrick Clean-up
28 January 2011
- 22:1622:16, 28 January 2011 diff hist +109 User:Deftonesderrick/Contributions list →Deftonesderrick's (and 173.11.54.241) Contributions List: Added Dead Space 2.
- 22:0822:08, 28 January 2011 diff hist −32 m Dead Space 2 →Plot: Redundant escape reference.
- 22:0422:04, 28 January 2011 diff hist +2,425 Dead Space 2 →Plot: Added complete plot. 690 words. Remember wiki has no spoiler warnings!
7 June 2010
- 16:3816:38, 7 June 2010 diff hist −16 God of War III →Plot: Minor fixes.
2 June 2010
- 18:3218:32, 2 June 2010 diff hist +1 Disturbia (film) →Cast: Wrong
- 18:2818:28, 2 June 2010 diff hist −117 Lucky Number Slevin →Plot: Not necessary.
- 18:2818:28, 2 June 2010 diff hist −83 Lucky Number Slevin Undid revision 365170520 by 98.155.95.141 (talk)
- 18:2718:27, 2 June 2010 diff hist −126 Stay Alive Undid revision 365261129 by 71.114.58.156 (talk)
- 18:2518:25, 2 June 2010 diff hist −186 Ultraviolet (film) Not a huge point in the movie and no sequel to flesh it out.
- 18:2418:24, 2 June 2010 diff hist −2,357 User talk:Deftonesderrick Clean up
- 17:5217:52, 2 June 2010 diff hist −58 God of War III →Plot: Minor fixes.
30 May 2010
- 18:5118:51, 30 May 2010 diff hist −1 m God of War III →Plot: Minor fix
28 May 2010
- 18:1418:14, 28 May 2010 diff hist −160 God of War III →Plot: Unnecessary detail. Hades motivations for wanting revenge aren't important in the overall story. Grammar mistakes fixed that keep getting restored.
- 18:0218:02, 28 May 2010 diff hist +321 Talk:God of War III →User: 125.7.71.6 and WP:OWN: Response.
27 May 2010
- 18:4718:47, 27 May 2010 diff hist +58 Talk:God of War III →User: 125.7.71.6 and WP:OWN: Response 2, added.
- 18:1718:17, 27 May 2010 diff hist −27 Infamous (video game) →Story: Spacing fixes and a minor fix.
- 18:0518:05, 27 May 2010 diff hist +114 Green Lantern: First Flight Undid revision 364400239 by 67.83.32.236 (talk)Not necessary.
- 18:0218:02, 27 May 2010 diff hist −5 Pandorum →Plot: Minor fix.
- 18:0018:00, 27 May 2010 diff hist +17 User:Deftonesderrick Edit count
- 17:5717:57, 27 May 2010 diff hist +2,122 Talk:God of War III →User: 125.7.71.6 and WP:OWN: Reponse 2.
- 17:4917:49, 27 May 2010 diff hist +102 God of War III →Plot: Restore River Styx sentence.
- 17:4017:40, 27 May 2010 diff hist −198 God of War III →Plot: See talk page.
- 17:2017:20, 27 May 2010 diff hist +1,087 Talk:God of War III →User: 125.7.71.6 and WP:OWN: Response.
26 May 2010
- 22:2822:28, 26 May 2010 diff hist −443 Stay Alive Undid revision 364373518 by 68.236.218.9 (talk)
- 17:1817:18, 26 May 2010 diff hist +26 God of War III →Plot: Another minor fix.
- 17:1417:14, 26 May 2010 diff hist −98 God of War III →Plot: Minor fix.
- 17:1117:11, 26 May 2010 diff hist +246 God of War III There is nothing that says the plot NEEDS to be in-universe. Extreme over use of semicolons. Disjointed sentence flow and lack of narrative direction. See talk page concerning issues with WP:OWN.
- 16:5316:53, 26 May 2010 diff hist +637 Talk:God of War III →User: 125.7.71.6 and WP:OWN: new section
25 May 2010
- 17:5417:54, 25 May 2010 diff hist +213 Talk:God of War III →Plot Update
- 17:5017:50, 25 May 2010 diff hist −23 District 9 →Plot: Minor fixes.
- 17:4317:43, 25 May 2010 diff hist −44 Legion (2010 film) →Plot: Minor fix.
- 17:3917:39, 25 May 2010 diff hist +223 Legion (2010 film) →Plot: Added some detail and fixed some minor things.
- 17:1417:14, 25 May 2010 diff hist −168 God of War III →Plot: Grammar fixes. Fragmented sentences and hyperbole. Repeated use of "encounter". Like it or not, Wikipedia contains spoilers.
24 May 2010
- 23:3623:36, 24 May 2010 diff hist −160 Kick-Ass (film) →Plot: Trim.
- 23:2023:20, 24 May 2010 diff hist +21 The Fourth Kind →Plot: Minor fixes.
- 23:1323:13, 24 May 2010 diff hist −101 Rogue (2007 film) Undid revision 363815406 by Greatwhite3d (talk) Unnecessary.
- 23:1023:10, 24 May 2010 diff hist −360 Trick 'r Treat Undid revision 363981813 by Kierot 12345 (talk)
- 23:1023:10, 24 May 2010 diff hist −181 Trick 'r Treat Undid revision 363983710 by Kierot 12345 (talk) Grammar.
21 May 2010
- 18:4018:40, 21 May 2010 diff hist −224 Pandorum →Plot: Minor clarity fixes. Deleted restatement of what the mutants are.
- 18:2818:28, 21 May 2010 diff hist −42 The Hangover →Plot: Minor fix.
- 18:2418:24, 21 May 2010 diff hist −21 Paranormal Activity →Plot: Minor fix.
- 18:2018:20, 21 May 2010 diff hist +4,156 Paranormal Activity Undid revision 363423953 by 90.203.22.72 (talk) Undoing vandalism.
- 18:2018:20, 21 May 2010 diff hist +3,689 Paranormal Activity Undid revision 363424088 by 90.203.22.72 (talk) Undoing vandalism.
