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15:0115:01, 3 November 2023 diff hist −13‎ m Mashhadi Jews ‎ →‎21st century: edited the format of "Great Neck, Long Island, NY. Cite" to "Great Neck, New York."

12:1412:14, 20 October 2023 diff hist +22‎ Rafah Border Crossing ‎ →‎2021 to present: The source says that Egypt said the bombings at the Rafah crossing were Israeli air strikes, but there doesn't seem to be any real evidence of this.

00:3400:34, 1 October 2021 diff hist −683‎ Patsy's Pizzeria ‎ →‎History: Removed a paragraph that was not even remotely neutral, it was just a rave review of Patsy's. It was also not written in a wikipedish voice -- the sentence started with "and" and it was... Idk, it wasn't even a little bit right for a wikipedia history. ~~~~

03:0603:06, 16 June 2021 diff hist +29‎ Rich Communication Services ‎ Pointed out that e2ee is only supported for one-on-one conversations. ~~~~

18:2518:25, 6 June 2021 diff hist +1,276‎ Talk:Advocacy ‎ →‎Define & Clarify the Difference Between Advocacy & Lobbying
18:1018:10, 6 June 2021 diff hist −30‎ Advocacy ‎ An advocate is somebody who provides advocacy, full stop. Not necessarily "support," nor to "people who need it, nor to people at all, and honestly, "provides" is awkward grammar here at best. There's a reason there was no source for that sentence. ~~~~

23:1823:18, 16 January 2021 diff hist +6‎ Drake's (haberdashers) ‎ Cleaning up some truly God-awful grammar. ~~~~

23:4923:49, 8 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Talk:Texas v. Pennsylvania et al ‎No edit summary
23:4923:49, 8 December 2020 diff hist +174‎ Talk:Texas v. Pennsylvania et al ‎No edit summary
23:4823:48, 8 December 2020 diff hist +251‎ N Talk:Texas v. Pennsylvania et al ‎ ←Created page with 'Is this "an ongoing Supreme Court case?" There is a petition for a writ of certiorari, but it's not a Supreme Court case until certiorari has been granted. ~~~~'

14:0114:01, 18 September 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Scarlett Johansson ‎ →‎Early life: The bit about his father, and his father, and his father, and his father is a mess of commas -- not wrong, but an ugly run-on sentence. I improved it a bit. Note that the serial comma is used elsewhere in this article, so I added it for internal consistency, as per the Wikipedia manual of style.

18:4418:44, 12 August 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Barneys New York ‎ →‎Stores: Corrected capitalization on the words "Before going out of business." Was previously "Before Going out of Business."

14:2414:24, 23 January 2019 diff hist +67‎ BSD licenses ‎ The previous description of the BSD License's Requirements was incorrect and misleading. It said that it required source code be licensed under the BSD license; in reality, it only requires that the original license be included (which still holds for the base work, but not necessarily for derivative works). A redditor recently asked if the BSD license could be used in a commercial product based on this confusing line.

18:2918:29, 21 January 2019 diff hist +1‎ Mi Gente (J Balvin and Willy William song) ‎ →‎Composition: "Stole" is blatantly normative, and unnecessarily so. I went with "copied," but "took" could do just as well.

02:2202:22, 22 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ Stefano Gabbana ‎ →‎Sinophobic comments on Instagram: Corrected "racial" to "racist" as necessary.
02:2102:21, 22 November 2018 diff hist +22‎ Stefano Gabbana ‎ →‎Sinophobic comments on Instagram: Gabana's comments were grammatically nonsensical. This section, as previously written, also used nonsensical grammar, and did not use quotation marks when quoting Gabana's nonsense. I corrected and cleaned up grammar. There is no substance to these changes.