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23:1823:18, 11 August 2024 diff hist −5‎ Marathon Oil ‎ →‎History: www.marathonpetroleum.com/About/History makes it clear that the Marathon name existed prior to 1930 and was established prior by Transcontinental.

21:0821:08, 19 June 2024 diff hist +71‎ m TPS report ‎ →‎Other references and allusions: calling it incorrect is unnecessary editorializing. It's purpose was a joke and it could have stood for Transaction Processing Set (a correct accounting usage) and the joke was still funny.

11:4611:46, 26 April 2024 diff hist +10‎ m NBA draft ‎ →‎Draft lottery: grammar -- talking about past should have past tense.
11:4111:41, 26 April 2024 diff hist −6‎ m NBA draft ‎ →‎Draft lottery: grammar
11:3711:37, 26 April 2024 diff hist +42‎ m NBA draft ‎ →‎Draft lottery: Had to be further reworded because people unfamiliar might think the lottery is to pick players. It is not. The lottery picks the teams, who are then free to choose a player of their choice.
11:3511:35, 26 April 2024 diff hist +15‎ m NBA draft ‎ →‎Draft lottery: wasn't worded clearly and the change from 3 to 4 was illogically flowing.

20:3720:37, 5 February 2024 diff hist +5‎ 2003–04 Minnesota Timberwolves season ‎ Fixed tense, last season made sense when reading in 2004, less clear a couple decades later Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18:4918:49, 28 January 2024 diff hist −33‎ Oakland Athletics relocation to Las Vegas ‎ Was incorrect grammar and redundant Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

01:0401:04, 23 January 2024 diff hist +4‎ Sports Illustrated ‎No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:4414:44, 2 November 2023 diff hist +396‎ Talk:Minnesota Vikings ‎ Questioned if there was an accuracy issue with the second Tarkenton trade

14:1114:11, 16 October 2023 diff hist −13‎ m USS Dwight D. Eisenhower ‎ →‎2020s: in fact, to be consistent, there should be no header. Tag: Reverted
14:1014:10, 16 October 2023 diff hist −17‎ m USS Dwight D. Eisenhower ‎ The header should be consistent with the other headers. The 2023 deployment was a scheduled deployment. Tag: Reverted

18:4218:42, 3 October 2023 diff hist +4‎ m List of Minnesota Twins managers ‎ →‎Managers: changed the word to franchise from Twins, since they were not the twins in 1924.

18:0918:09, 29 September 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Dan White ‎ →‎Tenure as supervisor: tightened the flow so it made logical sense in an article about White. The most important facts are how this affected White and how he felt about it.

12:4712:47, 17 September 2023 diff hist −26‎ m World's fair ‎ →‎History: the link to the list is right above this. It's not intuitive to link on the word "the first" and then be taken to a list instead of a page for the first.

20:3020:30, 29 July 2023 diff hist +2‎ Hexadecimal ‎ →‎Verbal and digital representations: Changed the order of the proposed systems to chronological, meaning the 2015 proposal is now after the 2007 proposal.

14:1514:15, 4 July 2023 diff hist +145‎ User talk:Greyjoy ‎ →‎Fat Sick and Nearly Dead: Reply Tag: Reply
14:1414:14, 4 July 2023 diff hist +344‎ User talk:Greyjoy ‎ →‎Fat Sick and Nearly Dead: Reply Tag: Reply
13:1913:19, 4 July 2023 diff hist −32‎ m Broadcast delay ‎ →‎History: While "that being a legal fiction' might be a technically correct statement, it is out of context, ruins the flow of the article and cannot be introduced without explaining why this is a legal fiction. If someone wants to include it, they can't just attach it as a drive by pot-shot to a paragraph. It needs to be supported and developed.
13:0213:02, 4 July 2023 diff hist −106‎ m Broadcast delay ‎ →‎Usage: The phase "including more mundane problems, such as technical malfunctions (an anchor's lapel microphone goes dead)" is poorly worded and violates the context of the main point. It was likely added by a later editor and detracts from the main point.