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A user with 110 edits. Account created on 13 September 2019.
11 December 2019
- 19:0119:01, 11 December 2019 diff hist +48 And Tango Makes Three I added links to other Wikipedia articles for awards listed in the awards section. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5818:58, 11 December 2019 diff hist +3 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated unnecessary spaces in the Hong Kong challenge, as well as reworded sentences to improve clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5618:56, 11 December 2019 diff hist −24 And Tango Makes Three I clarified the wording and combined sentences in the Singapore challenge section. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5418:54, 11 December 2019 diff hist +172 And Tango Makes Three I reworded the section on the Davis, Utah challenge to improve clarity. I also added a new source with additional information about the challenge. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4918:49, 11 December 2019 diff hist −2 And Tango Makes Three I corrected capitalization and punctuation in the section on the Southwick, Massachusetts challenge. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4718:47, 11 December 2019 diff hist −12 And Tango Makes Three In the Savannah, Missouri challenge section, I eliminated the name of a reporter, which is not necessary to the content of the section. I also corrected punctuation surrounding quotation marks. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4618:46, 11 December 2019 diff hist +11 And Tango Makes Three I added the town where the Massachusetts challenge took place. This matches the formatting of the rest of the article. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4418:44, 11 December 2019 diff hist −4 And Tango Makes Three I changed the size of headings to improve the organization of the challenges section. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4318:43, 11 December 2019 diff hist −57 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated a heading in a section, which was unnecessary because it was the only heading in the section and was very similar to the title of the section. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4218:42, 11 December 2019 diff hist −7 And Tango Makes Three I created part of the reception section into a new challenges section, as challenges to the book are relevant enough to have their own section. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4018:40, 11 December 2019 diff hist −4 And Tango Makes Three I changed the usage of parentheses to be in line with the rest of the article. I also changed wording to improve clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3918:39, 11 December 2019 diff hist −9 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated words in a sentence to make it grammatically correct. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3418:34, 11 December 2019 diff hist +20 And Tango Makes Three I changed a reference to the title of the book to be in line with the rest of the article. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3218:32, 11 December 2019 diff hist −6 And Tango Makes Three I reworded the section on the Shiloh, Illinois challenge. I eliminated "some" which could be biased language. I also corrected punctuation. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:3018:30, 11 December 2019 diff hist −515 And Tango Makes Three I made reworded some sentences in the book challenges section to improve clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1718:17, 11 December 2019 diff hist −4 And Tango Makes Three I alphabetized the list of book awards, which Wikipedia suggests for articles about books. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1618:16, 11 December 2019 diff hist +310 And Tango Makes Three I added additional awards the book received. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1118:11, 11 December 2019 diff hist −5 And Tango Makes Three I clarified the name of an award nomination. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:0918:09, 11 December 2019 diff hist −42 And Tango Makes Three I corrected the name of an award. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:0318:03, 11 December 2019 diff hist −527 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated the description of an award because the other awards listed did not include descriptions. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:0118:01, 11 December 2019 diff hist −7 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated the year of a book award, which was already included in the title of the award. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:0118:01, 11 December 2019 diff hist −54 And Tango Makes Three I removed an unnecessary apostrophe and eliminated an unnecessary link. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5917:59, 11 December 2019 diff hist −95 And Tango Makes Three I changed the organization of a title of an award to be more logical. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5817:58, 11 December 2019 diff hist −14 And Tango Makes Three I changed the capitalization and headings of the awards and nominations section to be more logical. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5417:54, 11 December 2019 diff hist −114 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated the see also section because the one linked article was not totally relevant to the article. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2515:25, 11 December 2019 diff hist −9 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated an unnecessary word which may fall under Wikipedia's description of biased language. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2515:25, 11 December 2019 diff hist −2 And Tango Makes Three I reworded a sentence to improve clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2315:23, 11 December 2019 diff hist 0 And Tango Makes Three I corrected the italicization of the book's title. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2215:22, 11 December 2019 diff hist +2 And Tango Makes Three I corrected the usage of quotation marks and added punctuation as the sentence was missing it. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2115:21, 11 December 2019 diff hist −234 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated a sentence which had no source attributed to the information. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2015:20, 11 December 2019 diff hist −7 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated a repeated word. Tag: Visual edit
10 December 2019
- 18:0918:09, 10 December 2019 diff hist 0 And Tango Makes Three I fixed a spelling error. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4815:48, 10 December 2019 diff hist +529 User:BenTelerski/sandbox continued draft additions to article current Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4715:47, 10 December 2019 diff hist +523 And Tango Makes Three I added information from a scholarly article discussing the merits of the book. Copied from sandbox User:BenTelerski/sandbox Tag: Visual edit
5 December 2019
- 17:1017:10, 5 December 2019 diff hist −1 User:BenTelerski/sandbox continued draft additions to article Tag: Visual edit
- 17:1017:10, 5 December 2019 diff hist −46 And Tango Makes Three I rewrote a sentence to improve clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0917:09, 5 December 2019 diff hist −500 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated a large section of quoted material, which Wikipedia does not like to be included in articles. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0817:08, 5 December 2019 diff hist −3 And Tango Makes Three I changed the wording of a section to improve clarity. I also deleted "mostly" in another sentence, which was redundant. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0617:06, 5 December 2019 diff hist −88 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated unnecessary words and rephrased one sentence to improve clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0317:03, 5 December 2019 diff hist −35 And Tango Makes Three I eliminated an unnecessary heading. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0217:02, 5 December 2019 diff hist −3,066 And Tango Makes Three I removed the themes sub-section because it included original analysis and the sources cited were not relevant to the analysis section. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5816:58, 5 December 2019 diff hist +27 And Tango Makes Three I added a citation to provide clarity for where information is coming from. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5716:57, 5 December 2019 diff hist −70 And Tango Makes Three I made grammatical corrections throughout the paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5616:56, 5 December 2019 diff hist +52 And Tango Makes Three I changed mentions of the book's name to be consistent throughout the section on benefits in the classroom. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5416:54, 5 December 2019 diff hist +452 And Tango Makes Three I added a paragraph to the section on book challenges to include information about the authors' response to the challenges. Copied from sandbox User:BenTelerski/sandbox Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5216:52, 5 December 2019 diff hist +1 And Tango Makes Three I changed the name of the response section to reception, which is what Wikipedia recommends for articles about books. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5116:51, 5 December 2019 diff hist +866 And Tango Makes Three I added a publication section, which Wikipedia recommends in its guidelines for articles about books. Copied from sandbox User:BenTelerski/sandbox Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4916:49, 5 December 2019 diff hist +91 And Tango Makes Three I rewrote the genre section to more closely follow Wikipedia's guidelines for an article about a book. Copied from sandbox User:BenTelerski/sandbox Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4716:47, 5 December 2019 diff hist +181 And Tango Makes Three I added a citation of the book for the summary section. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4516:45, 5 December 2019 diff hist −4 And Tango Makes Three I corrected a grammatically incorrect sentence in the summary. Copied from sandbox User:BenTelerski/sandbox Tag: Visual edit