User contributions for ArceusArmory
A user with 9 edits. Account created on 27 January 2023.
10 June 2023
- 03:3703:37, 10 June 2023 diff hist +17 m Tata Hitachi Construction Machinery I re-phrased a few flowery sentences but this may need further edit. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:3203:32, 10 June 2023 diff hist −2,557 Watt+Volt The entire article appears to be written like PR content, I was able to remove and modify some of the language but 60% of the article may just need to be removed as they appear either irrelevant to a reader or overly descriptive. Tags: references removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
30 January 2023
- 22:3222:32, 30 January 2023 diff hist +5,527 International Academy of Digital Arts and Sciences Several major changes - Language was changed to be neutral, all superficial adjectives were removed, new categories were added to reflect the current state, several claims are now cited to their original source. Some relevant personalities have also been linked in the article so as a result of all the changes, the warning banner was removed. Tags: COI template removed Visual edit
- 20:3320:33, 30 January 2023 diff hist −32 Stevie Awards The tag was removed because I added some neutral sources and made some minor edits to the article, it should be good now. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2620:26, 30 January 2023 diff hist +385 Stevie Awards Fixed some broken links, the article seemed to rely excessively on the company's own website so modified the citations with neutral press features about the subject. Tag: Visual edit
29 January 2023
- 20:3720:37, 29 January 2023 diff hist +306 User talk:ArceusArmory →Welcome!: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 20:3520:35, 29 January 2023 diff hist +255 m A. Muthukrishnan Very minor wording, and grammatical errors. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2320:23, 29 January 2023 diff hist −3,154 Plumi The language used in the article was occasionally promotional so it was modified to be neutral. Self-promotional terms like "Sophisticated", "Advanced", and a statement referring to YouTube as a commercial software was removed as it was not accurate. Finally, the "features" section was unnecessarily long and contained information that did not appear readily useful to a reader, an exhaustive list of features, edits to the software seemed unnecessary so that was removed all together. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
27 January 2023
- 16:1116:11, 27 January 2023 diff hist +146 m Singapore Space and Technology Ltd A few sentence structures, grammatical errors and a broken link was fixed. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit