User contributions for Anastrophe

25 November 2024

• 02:1302:13, 25 November 2024 diff hist +12 Dementia with Lewy bodies →top: not everyone is familiar with photomicrographs, or what to look for in images of biological specimens. clearer wording is appropriate. current
• 02:0902:09, 25 November 2024 diff hist +159 User talk:Anastrophe →Adjusting auto-archival: Reply current Tag: Reply

24 November 2024

• 21:5221:52, 24 November 2024 diff hist +3 Starlink in the Russo-Ukrainian War →top: grammar/flow current
• 21:5121:51, 24 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Starlink in the Russo-Ukrainian War Rollback edit(s) by 174.84.26.52 (talk): Non-constructive edit (UV 0.1.6) Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback
• 21:2721:27, 24 November 2024 diff hist +10 Shari's Cafe & Pies The "citation" isn't a citation, only a textual claim. Probably true, so if someone can find an actual citation, please do. I did numerous searches and couldn't find reliable sourcing.
• 21:2521:25, 24 November 2024 diff hist −236 Shari's Cafe & Pies →History: fix archive refs. rm unsourced claims challenged since jan 2024. clarify/simplify/or expand statements and claims.adjust template entries
• 20:4920:49, 24 November 2024 diff hist +4 Shari's Cafe & Pies →top: MOS:NUM
• 20:4920:49, 24 November 2024 diff hist −4 Shari's Cafe & Pies →top: precise day/date meaningless.
• 20:3920:39, 24 November 2024 diff hist −182 Patrick J. Kennedy →Personal life and family: The children are non-notable. current
• 20:2920:29, 24 November 2024 diff hist +16 Patrick J. Kennedy →Capitol Hill intoxicated-driving accident: precise dates aren't particularly relevant; descriptions in relative terms are simpler.
• 18:5518:55, 24 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Corporatocracy →Forms of Corporatocracy: errant space current
• 18:4518:45, 24 November 2024 diff hist +313 Talk:Corporatocracy →Requested move 24 November 2024 current

23 November 2024

• 18:1018:10, 23 November 2024 diff hist −49 OnePlus →OnePlus USB-C cable incident: simplify current
• 17:5417:54, 23 November 2024 diff hist −4 The Sterile Cuckoo →Plot: 'but' doesn't really work here, sounds like they have sex and she immediately after says she's pregnant. current
• 17:4917:49, 23 November 2024 diff hist −62 Liza Minnelli →top: see WP:OVERLINK
• 06:2506:25, 23 November 2024 diff hist +3 Alan Hunter (VJ) →Life after MTV: grammar current

22 November 2024

• 19:2519:25, 22 November 2024 diff hist −150 m Talk:Telegram (software) Rollback edit(s) by 103.7.60.50 (talk): Non-constructive edit (UV 0.1.6) current Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback
• 19:1919:19, 22 November 2024 diff hist −10 List of cities in South America →Largest cities: simplify construction. current
• 19:1719:17, 22 November 2024 diff hist −21 m List of cities in South America Rollback edit(s) by Vhko96 (talk): Reverting good faith edits: unnecessary construction, will fix in next edit. (UV 0.1.6) Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback
• 19:1019:10, 22 November 2024 diff hist −428 m São Tomé and Príncipe Rollback edit(s) by Vhko96 (talk): Reverting good faith edits: Already wikilinked a few sentences before. see WP:OVERLINK (UV 0.1.6) current Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback
• 19:0719:07, 22 November 2024 diff hist −30 m Kijong-dong Rollback edit(s) by Vhko96 (talk): Reverting good faith edits: completely unnecessary. See second sentence of article. (UV 0.1.6) current Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback
• 19:0519:05, 22 November 2024 diff hist −51 List of countries by intentional homicide rate Restored revision 1257541514 by GreenC bot (talk): Editor also falsified data for Turks & Caicos (there are no 2024 UNODC numbers for any country) Tags: Twinkle Undo

21 November 2024

• 18:2218:22, 21 November 2024 diff hist −28 Corporatocracy →Examples of Corporatocracy: a bullet-list isn't the right format.
• 18:1918:19, 21 November 2024 diff hist −514 Corporatocracy →Examples of Corporatocracy: ordoliberalism doesn't describe corporatocracy, the subject of this article. The characterization misrepresents what the ordoliberalism article here on WP describes. removing.
• 18:1718:17, 21 November 2024 diff hist +745 Talk:Corporatocracy →More info on Lobbying needed: Reply Tag: Reply
• 18:0918:09, 21 November 2024 diff hist +12 Talk:Corporatocracy →More info on Lobbying needed
• 18:0818:08, 21 November 2024 diff hist +1,001 Talk:Corporatocracy →More info on Lobbying needed: Reply Tag: Reply
• 05:4305:43, 21 November 2024 diff hist −3,071 Corporatocracy Restored revision 1256671827 by GreenC bot (talk): Improper additions to lede without discussion in body; inappropriate obfuscation of underlying wikilink in "neoliberalism. Tags: Twinkle Undo
• 05:4205:42, 21 November 2024 diff hist +445 Talk:Corporatocracy →More info on Lobbying needed: Reply Tag: Reply
• 03:1403:14, 21 November 2024 diff hist +626 Talk:Corporatocracy →More info on Lobbying needed: Reply Tag: Reply
• 00:1800:18, 21 November 2024 diff hist −88 Love Canal →Epilogue: the full name is well established merely a few sentences before; it's understood what is being referred to. current

20 November 2024

• 23:5923:59, 20 November 2024 diff hist −4 Love Canal →Sale of the site, 1952: nothing occurs "during" the future, since the future by definition doesn't exist yet.
• 05:4805:48, 20 November 2024 diff hist +11 Long March →top: seems odd not to wl Mao in the lede. Only other wl is far into the article.
• 05:3605:36, 20 November 2024 diff hist +179 Hello Mr. Billionaire →top: add archive url current
• 04:0204:02, 20 November 2024 diff hist +4 Peanut →History: many wikilinks here, but this is valid, and the more the merrier.

19 November 2024

• 06:4506:45, 19 November 2024 diff hist −101 Richard Jeni →Death: Can we try less hard to cram as much information as possible into a single sentence and paragraph, out of chronological order? c/e for clearer narrative. move cite to end of graf. current
• 06:1406:14, 19 November 2024 diff hist −276 Domenick Lombardozzi →Early life: imdb is user-generated information, and not a reliable source for any encyclopedic use.
• 06:0906:09, 19 November 2024 diff hist +12 John Ritter →Response and legacy: reads a bit better current
• 03:3503:35, 19 November 2024 diff hist +157 John Ritter →Response and legacy: mv dot per MOS:INOROUT, add archive url
• 03:2803:28, 19 November 2024 diff hist −43 John Ritter →Death: unclear; the aorta (and aortic dissection inherently) is outside of the heart; also not supported by the sources. assorted c/e for flow, accuracy, clarity
• 02:2802:28, 19 November 2024 diff hist +2,079 User talk:Anastrophe/Archive 2024 No edit summary current
• 02:2702:27, 19 November 2024 diff hist −2,079 User talk:Anastrophe No edit summary Tag: Manual revert

18 November 2024

• 22:2222:22, 18 November 2024 diff hist −3 Vitamin A →Fortification: precise day/date is unnecessary.
• 22:2122:21, 18 November 2024 diff hist −70 Vitamin A →Fortification: unnecessarily wordy; fortification was described in the previous paragraph.
• 20:5620:56, 18 November 2024 diff hist −17 Development and discovery of SSRI drugs →Structural and mechanical differences between the SSRIs: This is a very domain-specific use of the term; better to just spell it out. current
• 18:0418:04, 18 November 2024 diff hist −134 m Talk:Telegram (software) Rollback edit(s) by 102.220.40.229 (talk): Non-constructive edit (UV 0.1.6) Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback

17 November 2024

• 23:4623:46, 17 November 2024 diff hist −3 Deep Blue Sea (1999 film) →top: oxford comma is never wrong. current
• 02:3602:36, 17 November 2024 diff hist −62 m Patty Murray Rollback edit(s) by 66.44.10.51 (talk): Reverting good faith edits: These are not improvements. (UV 0.1.6) Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback
• 02:3502:35, 17 November 2024 diff hist −27 m Peter Welch Rollback edit(s) by 66.44.10.51 (talk): Non-constructive edit (UV 0.1.6) current Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback
• 02:3502:35, 17 November 2024 diff hist −27 m Jack Reed (Rhode Island politician) Rollback edit(s) by 66.44.10.51 (talk): Non-constructive edit (UV 0.1.6) Tags: Ultraviolet Rollback