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18 September 2024
- 20:0520:05, 18 September 2024 diff hist +188 The Guns of August →Ch. 12 – BEF to the Continent: Wikilinks current
- 19:4619:46, 18 September 2024 diff hist +104 The Guns of August →Ch. 12 – BEF to the Continent: Page references
- 19:4219:42, 18 September 2024 diff hist +1,835 The Guns of August →Ch. 12 – BEF to the Continent: Summary
15 August 2024
- 10:0410:04, 15 August 2024 diff hist +142 The Guns of August →Afterword: Page references
- 08:5708:57, 15 August 2024 diff hist +149 The Guns of August →Afterword: Encapsulated existing ideas in new text
- 08:5608:56, 15 August 2024 diff hist +218 The Guns of August →Afterword: New idea: why the battle of the Marne was a decisive battle of the world
- 08:5508:55, 15 August 2024 diff hist −840 The Guns of August →Afterword: Removed previous text now encompassed by new
- 08:5408:54, 15 August 2024 diff hist +364 The Guns of August →Afterword: New ideas: 1) Added Joffre and Clergerie to Gallieni, 2) Despite all this, France did not get its decisive victory
- 08:5208:52, 15 August 2024 diff hist +846 The Guns of August →Afterword: New ideas: 1) completed the list of German failures (Kluck not level with Bülow, did not march back on Marne, entered Belgium) 2) All this produced numerical superiority for the Allies
- 08:5008:50, 15 August 2024 diff hist +503 The Guns of August →Afterword: New ideas: 1) Allies's fail to get into the German gap 2) Kluck and Moltke explain Germany's defeat by French soldiers' resilience
- 08:4608:46, 15 August 2024 diff hist 0 The Guns of August →Afterword: Moved this paragraph to its position in Tuchman's Afterword
- 08:4508:45, 15 August 2024 diff hist −60 The Guns of August →Afterword: Removed "Gallieni saved the day" as it does not fully reflect Tuchman's wider view in the Afterword that France, not just Paris, was saved by Gallieni as well as Joffre, Franchet d'Esperey, Lanrezac, Clergerie and Maunoury.
- 08:4008:40, 15 August 2024 diff hist −446 The Guns of August →Afterword: Removed without losing meaning (use of third person) or to make space for more important ideas (Lanrezac's dismissal, hope required to fight)
- 08:3708:37, 15 August 2024 diff hist −204 The Guns of August →Afterword: Removed ideas that do not belong to the Afterword 1) The Battle of the Frontiers was brutal [belong to ch. 13 and 14] 2) The Germans were within 40 miles of Paris [ch. 20] 3) Paris prepared for siege [ch. 20] 4) French government fled south [ch. 21]
- 08:2408:24, 15 August 2024 diff hist −548 The Guns of August →Afterword: Removed 3 ideas not found in Tuchman's book: 1) The Belgian Army was rushed against the German Army 2) Joffre cynically took complete credit for saving Paris and France 3) France and Germany were plagued with poor communications and field commanders were ignored by general staff more interested in politics.
27 July 2024
- 21:2321:23, 27 July 2024 diff hist −3 m The Guns of August Fixed typo #article-section-source-editor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
- 13:3313:33, 27 July 2024 diff hist +116 The Guns of August →Ch. 20 – The front is Paris: Hyperlinks ch. 20
- 13:2813:28, 27 July 2024 diff hist +103 The Guns of August →Ch. 20 – The front is Paris: References ch. 20
- 13:2313:23, 27 July 2024 diff hist +2,363 The Guns of August →Battle: Summary Ch. 20
6 July 2024
- 19:4919:49, 6 July 2024 diff hist +5 The Sixth of July Added the year #article-section-source-editor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
4 July 2024
- 19:3419:34, 4 July 2024 diff hist −14 m The Guns of August →Ch. 19 – Retreat
- 18:3018:30, 4 July 2024 diff hist +64 The Guns of August →Ch. 9 – "Home before the leaves fall": Added invasion contrary to international law
- 18:2218:22, 4 July 2024 diff hist 0 m The Guns of August →Ch. 9 – "Home before the leaves fall"
- 18:1718:17, 4 July 2024 diff hist +93 The Guns of August →Ch. 19 – Retreat: Wikilinks
- 17:5517:55, 4 July 2024 diff hist +1,061 The Guns of August →Battle: Added Ch. 19
2 July 2024
- 18:1418:14, 2 July 2024 diff hist +1,052 The Guns of August →Synopsis: Synopsis of the part Plans
- 17:5817:58, 2 July 2024 diff hist +867 The Guns of August →Synopsis: Synopsis of Outbreak
- 17:2017:20, 2 July 2024 diff hist +1,007 The Guns of August →Synopsis: Moved the introduction of the section Battle
- 17:0317:03, 2 July 2024 diff hist −1,068 The Guns of August →Battle: Moved the introduction of the Battle section to Synopsis
- 16:5916:59, 2 July 2024 diff hist +26 The Guns of August →Summary: Synopsis (renamed from Summary) and Summary by chapters (new section)
1 July 2024
- 19:5419:54, 1 July 2024 diff hist +140 The Guns of August →Ch. 9 – "Home before the leaves fall": Link to text of German declaration of war on France
- 19:5319:53, 1 July 2024 diff hist +156 The Guns of August →Ch. 9 – "Home before the leaves fall": Page references of quotes
- 19:5019:50, 1 July 2024 diff hist −794 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Deleted short summary to shorten article length
- 19:4119:41, 1 July 2024 diff hist +2,453 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Summarized Ch. 9
21 June 2024
- 21:1921:19, 21 June 2024 diff hist 0 The Guns of August Corrected year when Sukhomlinov was War Minister #article-section-source-editor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
13 June 2024
- 05:3705:37, 13 June 2024 diff hist +25 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Referenced quote
- 05:3605:36, 13 June 2024 diff hist +326 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Wikilinked
- 05:3105:31, 13 June 2024 diff hist −71 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Summary, shorter and richer
12 June 2024
- 05:5805:58, 12 June 2024 diff hist +78 The Guns of August →Chapter 8 - Ultimatum in Brussels: Page references of quotes
- 05:5605:56, 12 June 2024 diff hist +170 The Guns of August →Chapter 8 - Ultimatum in Brussels: Wikilinked
- 05:4905:49, 12 June 2024 diff hist +1,972 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Summary of chapter 8
29 May 2024
- 16:5816:58, 29 May 2024 diff hist +102 The Guns of August →Ch. 7 - August 1: Paris and London: Added references
- 16:5316:53, 29 May 2024 diff hist +383 The Guns of August →Ch. 7 - August 1: Paris and London: added Wikilinks
- 07:1207:12, 29 May 2024 diff hist +2,402 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Ch. 7 summary
23 May 2024
- 18:1518:15, 23 May 2024 diff hist +4 m The Guns of August →Ch. 6 - August 1: Berlin
- 18:1118:11, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1,498 The Guns of August →Outbreak: Summary ch. 6
18 May 2024
- 21:0521:05, 18 May 2024 diff hist −9 Gottlieb von Jagow Improved language to (hopefully) reflect the intended meaning #article-section-source-editor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
- 20:5920:59, 18 May 2024 diff hist −16 Gottlieb von Jagow Improved language #article-section-source-editor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
- 20:5320:53, 18 May 2024 diff hist +2 Gottlieb von Jagow Clearer, more correct and readable language while preserving the original meaning. #article-section-source-editor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
- 20:4720:47, 18 May 2024 diff hist +10 Gottlieb von Jagow Fixed missing verbs and articles #article-section-source-editor Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
