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8 August 2009

• 15:3415:34, 8 August 2009 diff hist −2 SharePoint Fixed odd spelling variant

1 August 2009

• 04:5504:55, 1 August 2009 diff hist −8 Endoreduplication Reworded for parallel phrasing
• 04:5304:53, 1 August 2009 diff hist −1 Endoreduplication Changed word choice again
• 04:5204:52, 1 August 2009 diff hist +2 Endoreduplication Changed odd word choice, and subject-verb agreement

17 April 2009

• 12:4312:43, 17 April 2009 diff hist −2 Persistence (computer science) →Storage devices: word correction

7 April 2009

• 02:4402:44, 7 April 2009 diff hist +2 Phonological history of English consonant clusters →Plum-plumb merger: spelling

4 April 2009

• 13:3513:35, 4 April 2009 diff hist +7 Bolus (medicine) Clearer wording

4 March 2009

• 17:1017:10, 4 March 2009 diff hist −13 Island of Kesmai →Features of the Game and Lessons Learned: department of redundancy department

28 February 2009

• 16:1916:19, 28 February 2009 diff hist −2 Synesthesia →Sound → color synesthesia: minor edit. Amongst to among

25 February 2009

• 14:3514:35, 25 February 2009 diff hist −2 Shareaza →Domain transfer: minor edit. Pronoun-noun agreement

24 February 2009

• 00:0900:09, 24 February 2009 diff hist +21 Ogden Nash →Ogden Nash stamp: Shorter is not better. Gender is often confused with sex. The distinction is important and should be maintained. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender

14 February 2009

• 19:0219:02, 14 February 2009 diff hist +31 Ogden Nash →Ogden Nash stamp: sex is not a synonym for gender.

7 February 2009

• 18:3018:30, 7 February 2009 diff hist +1 Celesta oops
• 18:2918:29, 7 February 2009 diff hist −2 Celesta comma splice

15 January 2009

• 03:5203:52, 15 January 2009 diff hist −1 Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation →Investments: Minor edit, removed bad comma

5 January 2009

• 05:3105:31, 5 January 2009 diff hist 0 Slackware →Design philosophy: Minor, fixed bad hyphen use
• 05:2905:29, 5 January 2009 diff hist −2 Slackware →History: minor edit. Amongst to among

4 January 2009

• 01:5201:52, 4 January 2009 diff hist +1 The Secret Saturdays →Villains: Minor edit, changed whom to which

31 December 2008

• 03:0303:03, 31 December 2008 diff hist +13 Teardrop tattoo Clarified wording of the first sentance

30 December 2008

• 01:0001:00, 30 December 2008 diff hist −2 HD Radio →Awareness, coverage: minor edit. Changed amongst to among

17 October 2008

• 04:3604:36, 17 October 2008 diff hist −2 Foreign key →Example 1: Subject-pronoun agreement *sigh*

27 September 2008

• 17:2617:26, 27 September 2008 diff hist −187 Rollerball pen →Disadvantages: Recaptioned the photograph. Changed the wording. Corrected incorrect hyphen use.
• 17:1717:17, 27 September 2008 diff hist −146 Rollerball pen Reworded the opening section. The content remains the same.
• 17:1017:10, 27 September 2008 diff hist −210 Ballpoint pen →Multi-colored pens
• 17:0917:09, 27 September 2008 diff hist −176 Ballpoint pen →Multi-coloured pens
• 17:0417:04, 27 September 2008 diff hist −175 Talk:Fountain pen Retitled the section and changed the comments
• 16:5916:59, 27 September 2008 diff hist +226 Talk:Fountain pen →Inconsistency

19 September 2008

• 10:0510:05, 19 September 2008 diff hist −1 Green politics →History and influences: Subject-verb agreement

16 September 2008

• 03:0103:01, 16 September 2008 diff hist −2 Hennessy →Hennessy in popular culture: Fixed odd variant of "among"

10 September 2008

• 04:0604:06, 10 September 2008 diff hist −1 The Ballroom Blitz Subject-verb agreement

7 September 2008

• 15:4815:48, 7 September 2008 diff hist −35 Thomisidae Changed wording to match previous edits, which were much clearer.

25 August 2008

• 04:4004:40, 25 August 2008 diff hist −18 Pilotwings 64 →Standard vehicles: Now witness the firepower of this fully armed and operational gyrocopter!

29 May 2008

• 04:4704:47, 29 May 2008 diff hist +139 Talk:Shadow of the Colossus →Define: Giants
• 04:2704:27, 29 May 2008 diff hist +349 Talk:Shadow of the Colossus →Heroe's name, Wander?

28 May 2008

• 13:1513:15, 28 May 2008 diff hist +4 Talk:Woman on top →Is gender neutrality necessary here?

18 May 2008

• 22:2922:29, 18 May 2008 diff hist −1 Talk:Woman on top →Is gender neutrality necessary here?
• 22:2822:28, 18 May 2008 diff hist +759 Talk:Woman on top →Is gender neutrality necessary here?