User contributions for 85.193.242.83

10 January 2018

• 03:5703:57, 10 January 2018 diff hist +4‎ Anonymity ‎ "certain" -> "a certain"; it was misleading and ambiguous at best, unless you meant "sure", as in "certain death"
• 02:3202:32, 10 January 2018 diff hist +32‎ Cheakamus Lake ‎ ext. link updated; mysterious acronym "CN" = Canadian National Railway

9 January 2018

• 03:4803:48, 9 January 2018 diff hist +254‎ Talk:Future perfect ‎ →‎"I will have done it on the previous Tuesday" (?): new section
• 01:2701:27, 9 January 2018 diff hist −9‎ Irreligion ‎ " takes issue with" -> "rejects"; See plain English - readability matters.
• 00:4200:42, 9 January 2018 diff hist +2‎ Estonia ‎ "to all but" -> "to all except"; "all but disappeared" -> "almost disappeared"; See plain English - readability matters.
• 00:2000:20, 9 January 2018 diff hist +2‎ Estonia ‎ It looked like "economic growth ITSELF resulted in a wide wealth gap..."

8 January 2018

• 03:5003:50, 8 January 2018 diff hist +312‎ Talk:National Enquirer ‎ →‎Automatic redirection?: new section
• 02:3302:33, 8 January 2018 diff hist −17‎ Paradox of hedonism ‎ "sentient" is redundant here; there is no suffering in insentient life
• 01:0801:08, 8 January 2018 diff hist −16‎ Paradox of hedonism ‎ "spun around backwards" -> "reversed"; "as though" -> "as if"; comma, tense, syntax; See plain English - readability matters.
• 00:0200:02, 8 January 2018 diff hist 0‎ Pleasure principle (psychology) ‎ instinctual -> instinctive ; See plain English - readability matters.

7 January 2018

• 23:4823:48, 7 January 2018 diff hist 0‎ Pleasure ‎ account -> concept ; See plain English - readability matters.
• 21:2821:28, 7 January 2018 diff hist −3‎ Gilbert Morgan Smith Medal ‎ elucidate -> explain; See plain English - readability matters.
• 06:2806:28, 7 January 2018 diff hist −6‎ Egypt–Qatar relations ‎ "push back on" -> "resist"; Avoid idioms, use plain English, readability matters.