User contributions for 82.113.133.21

23 April 2013

• 16:3516:35, 23 April 2013 diff hist −4‎ Gilet ‎ improve style

22 April 2013

• 09:5209:52, 22 April 2013 diff hist −6‎ Shirataki noodles ‎ chg "This gets rid of the aku (bitterness)" to "This gets rid of the bitterness" - no reason to throw in a Japanese synonym here

18 April 2013

• 14:3814:38, 18 April 2013 diff hist −16‎ Dwarf (folklore) ‎ "dwerrow" is not Modern English. only J R R Tolkien has used it. see Google Books search results for the word.
• 14:3714:37, 18 April 2013 diff hist −1‎ Nuno sa punso ‎ →‎Description: grammar

11 April 2013

• 11:5811:58, 11 April 2013 diff hist +1‎ Steve Coast ‎ →‎Personal life: comma

9 April 2013

• 08:2408:24, 9 April 2013 diff hist −36‎ Trent Reznor ‎ →‎Collaboration with Dr. Dre's Beats Electronics: apostrophe
• 08:1908:19, 9 April 2013 diff hist −5‎ How to Destroy Angels (band) ‎ →‎Releases

3 April 2013

• 15:1815:18, 3 April 2013 diff hist −1‎ Adol Dam ‎ remove incorrect comma
• 15:1415:14, 3 April 2013 diff hist −4‎ Michael Robertson (businessman) ‎ typo
• 15:0715:07, 3 April 2013 diff hist +20‎ Microsoft PlaysForSure ‎ put the info about start/end of PFS lifetime in the same place
• 15:0615:06, 3 April 2013 diff hist −1‎ Zune ‎ →‎Preloaded content: bad comma
• 15:0615:06, 3 April 2013 diff hist −2‎ Zune ‎ grammar

19 March 2013

• 12:4912:49, 19 March 2013 diff hist −7‎ Amala (food) ‎No edit summary

11 March 2013

• 21:2521:25, 11 March 2013 diff hist +7‎ Mega Man 9 ‎ →‎Reception and legacy: grammar
• 17:2317:23, 11 March 2013 diff hist 0‎ Ancient Domains of Mystery ‎ →‎Herbs: grammar

8 March 2013

• 13:3413:34, 8 March 2013 diff hist 0‎ Hosea Williams ‎ "inner circle" is 2 words
• 13:3413:34, 8 March 2013 diff hist −130‎ Reverse racism ‎ →‎In the United States: remove apparent nonsense: "at which point" starting a sentence, and no point in time has been mentioned
• 13:2613:26, 8 March 2013 diff hist +1‎ Reverse racism ‎ apostrophe
• 12:3912:39, 8 March 2013 diff hist −12‎ Association for the Study of African American Life and History ‎ →‎Notable fact about the convention: silly header. change to "Derived organizations"
• 08:3108:31, 8 March 2013 diff hist 0‎ Cyberdog (shop) ‎ →‎History: bad hyphen

7 March 2013

• 15:5215:52, 7 March 2013 diff hist +238‎ Wikipedia talk:List of Wikipedians by number of edits ‎ →‎What is the purpose of this list?: new section
• 10:3010:30, 7 March 2013 diff hist 0‎ Copper phthalocyanine ‎ Monastral blue was/is a trade name and is nearly always found with the capital M
• 10:2710:27, 7 March 2013 diff hist +4‎ Gel pen ‎ avoid ambiguous "they"
• 08:4308:43, 7 March 2013 diff hist −2‎ Wallop ‎ past tense of "lead" is "led"
• 08:4308:43, 7 March 2013 diff hist +1‎ FOAF ‎ hyphen needed, since "him-" is short for "himself"
• 08:4208:42, 7 March 2013 diff hist −20‎ Wallop ‎ redundant "originally...its origins"

6 March 2013

• 11:2411:24, 6 March 2013 diff hist −1‎ Corporate entertainment ‎No edit summary
• 10:0410:04, 6 March 2013 diff hist +7‎ Knowledge Generation Bureau ‎ It is believed{{who}} to be the third largest such player in the UK - who says? what are the other two?

5 March 2013

• 13:1213:12, 5 March 2013 diff hist −14‎ Timeline of computer viruses and worms ‎ →‎1974/1975: you coin a word. you don't coin the use of a word
• 13:1013:10, 5 March 2013 diff hist −1‎ AutoCAD ‎ bad comma
• 12:1612:16, 5 March 2013 diff hist −6‎ Data wrangling ‎ change "credited as deriving" to "said to derive". nobody is giving a term "credit" for having been derived
• 08:2708:27, 5 March 2013 diff hist +13‎ Iran–United States copyright relations ‎ →‎Freely distributed unlicensed software: caps

4 March 2013

• 14:4214:42, 4 March 2013 diff hist −8‎ Akeelah and the Bee ‎ →‎Plot: grammar
• 13:4113:41, 4 March 2013 diff hist +8‎ Internet Explorer 10 ‎ →‎User interface: "string" is programmer jargon. use "word or phrase".
• 13:4113:41, 4 March 2013 diff hist −2‎ Internet Explorer 10 ‎ →‎User interface: bad commas
• 13:3913:39, 4 March 2013 diff hist −94‎ Internet Explorer 10 ‎ →‎Adobe Flash integration: redundant
• 13:3913:39, 4 March 2013 diff hist −6‎ Internet Explorer 10 ‎ →‎Adobe Flash integration: redundant "also...also"
• 13:2513:25, 4 March 2013 diff hist −399‎ Whompyjawed ‎ delete appar rubbish
• 13:1413:14, 4 March 2013 diff hist +5‎ Ondol ‎ →‎Use: style: spell out low numbers in words
• 13:1113:11, 4 March 2013 diff hist −10‎ Fan death ‎ →‎Origins of belief: redundant word
• 12:5512:55, 4 March 2013 diff hist −16‎ Crocoduck ‎No edit summary

27 February 2013

• 14:0414:04, 27 February 2013 diff hist +2‎ EDIFACT ‎ →‎Current state of EDIFACT: grammar
• 14:0214:02, 27 February 2013 diff hist +3‎ EDIFACT ‎ →‎Structure: grammar. "it...are" is wrong

26 February 2013

• 12:0012:00, 26 February 2013 diff hist +14‎ 3 ‎ →‎Evolution of the glyph: grammar
• 10:2910:29, 26 February 2013 diff hist 0‎ Princess Protection Program ‎ →‎Plot: missing bracket
• 10:1410:14, 26 February 2013 diff hist +5‎ DJMax Technika ‎ →‎Gameplay: "for example" is abbreviated "e.g." not "ex"
• 10:0110:01, 26 February 2013 diff hist −3‎ Let's trim our hair in accordance with the socialist lifestyle ‎ grammar

25 February 2013

• 13:1113:11, 25 February 2013 diff hist +1‎ Spam (video games) ‎ →‎Weapon spamming: grammar
• 13:0813:08, 25 February 2013 diff hist −1‎ Controversies surrounding Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2 ‎ split para for readability
• 13:0613:06, 25 February 2013 diff hist −101‎ Pramface ‎ →‎Online: remove info about unofficial fan Twitter accounts. not notable at all. e.g. PramfaceBeth has only 20 followers!!