User contributions for 72.89.38.176

23 April 2018

• 03:3103:31, 23 April 2018 diff hist +335‎ Talk:Carry On Wayward Son ‎ →‎MOS:TRIVIA

28 December 2017

• 21:2621:26, 28 December 2017 diff hist +55,376‎ West Africa ‎ Reverting article to original state before vandalism
• 21:2521:25, 28 December 2017 diff hist −1,719‎ West Africa ‎ Undid revision 817507280 by 69.161.199.69 (talk) Removing vandalism that deleted article

11 December 2017

• 19:0819:08, 11 December 2017 diff hist +14‎ Roux ‎No edit summary

15 October 2017

• 18:4718:47, 15 October 2017 diff hist −45‎ Araçatuba ‎ potential vandalism. please add sources to support any statement like this

11 October 2017

• 12:0112:01, 11 October 2017 diff hist +241‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Undid revision 804829168 by 72.89.38.176 (talk) temp; good faith that more sources will be added
• 11:5711:57, 11 October 2017 diff hist −241‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Undid revision 804620625. Civilization emergence as per the article was in the western Indo-Gangetic Plain; the Indus Valley in Pakistan and India. If you want to expand it to the whole plain need also add sources discussing Nepal, Bhutan, and Bangeldesh. Tag: references removed
• 11:4911:49, 11 October 2017 diff hist −90‎ Second Epistle to the Thessalonians ‎ →‎Content: The Great Apostasy is not mentioned in the text and its application here is an interpretation by some Christian faiths not all. For example (Protestant but not Catholic readings). Needs a 3rd party source explaining the reading to add totext

10 September 2017

• 05:2105:21, 10 September 2017 diff hist −69‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Article deals with the emergence of civilization (stratified socieites with a level of technology). For China this is at Erlitou. The advanced neolithic cultures of the Yangtze are already discussed in the China section but shouldn't be linked in the lead

9 September 2017

• 13:5113:51, 9 September 2017 diff hist −222‎ Jandamarra ‎ →‎Legacy: Notability is establiished by indepednant third party sources.

7 September 2017

• 12:3612:36, 7 September 2017 diff hist +598‎ Talk:Shinbutsu bunri ‎No edit summary

27 August 2017

• 17:0917:09, 27 August 2017 diff hist −16‎ Griffin Newman ‎ →‎TV

14 July 2017

• 23:0323:03, 14 July 2017 diff hist 0‎ Rose, Rose, I Love You ‎ corrected syntax

21 June 2017

• 17:2017:20, 21 June 2017 diff hist 0‎ Isis Unveiled ‎ →‎Critical reception: minor

19 June 2017

• 11:5211:52, 19 June 2017 diff hist +7‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Undid revision 786199667 by 90.222.64.119 (talk) The discussed area covers more than modern day India, and Indus Valley is a more accurate descriptor anyway

8 June 2017

• 12:1612:16, 8 June 2017 diff hist −115‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ However, also trimmed that sentence.
• 12:1412:14, 8 June 2017 diff hist +299‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Egypt: Restored the sentence about proto hieroglyphics, since the development of writing is used throughout the article as one of the key moments in the emergence of a civilization.

30 May 2017

• 01:4701:47, 30 May 2017 diff hist −40‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ copy-editing, formatting, extraneous wikilinks
• 01:4601:46, 30 May 2017 diff hist −1‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Egypt: formating
• 01:4501:45, 30 May 2017 diff hist −29‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Old World: The pertinent links of the infobox are covered in the section itself. Meanwhile, the infbox only serves to clutter an already crowded section and is largely concerned with topics outside the scope of the article.

20 May 2017

• 15:2615:26, 20 May 2017 diff hist −129‎ List of Philippine mythological figures ‎ The caption of the image itself says its a fictional contemporary design. It may still be warranted in the article, but certainly not as the lead image.

13 May 2017

• 16:0816:08, 13 May 2017 diff hist −1‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Central Andes: minor copy-editing
• 16:0516:05, 13 May 2017 diff hist −1‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Mesoamerica: minor copy-editing
• 16:0316:03, 13 May 2017 diff hist −1‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Mesoamerica: minor

11 May 2017

• 21:1321:13, 11 May 2017 diff hist −65‎ Celestial (comics) ‎ Yes, Ego is a living planet in both the Comics and Movies. However, he is also celestial ONLY in the movies. He is NOT a celestial in the comics. This distinction keeps getting deleted. The list is mostly comics so maybe a separate section for the movies.

2 May 2017

• 19:3819:38, 2 May 2017 diff hist 0‎ Isis Unveiled ‎No edit summary

24 April 2017

• 13:3013:30, 24 April 2017 diff hist +108‎ Talk:Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Please don't continually edit the dating of the Indus Valley Civilization section
• 13:2313:23, 24 April 2017 diff hist +10‎ Talk:Cradle of civilization ‎No edit summary
• 13:2313:23, 24 April 2017 diff hist −56‎ Talk:Cradle of civilization ‎ corrected the citation so that it links to the subsection instead of the end of the talk page
• 13:2113:21, 24 April 2017 diff hist +243‎ Talk:Cradle of civilization ‎No edit summary
• 13:1813:18, 24 April 2017 diff hist +956‎ Talk:Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Please don't continually edit the dating of the Indus Valley Civilization section: new section
• 13:1013:10, 24 April 2017 diff hist −171‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Undid revision 776876693 by 68.33.78.135 (talk) The dating of IVC is discussed in the article with citations. Earlier dates at Bihranna and Mehrgarh are considered pre-IVC. Tag: references removed

17 April 2017

• 16:0216:02, 17 April 2017 diff hist −4‎ Monolithic church ‎ precious is a Weasel word

15 April 2017

• 14:0914:09, 15 April 2017 diff hist 0‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Mesopotamia: added semicolon, period
• 14:0814:08, 15 April 2017 diff hist +1‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Mesopotamia: added comma

22 March 2017

• 22:1422:14, 22 March 2017 diff hist −1‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Undid revision 771598005 by Meganesia (talk) No real reason to re-order the lead

15 March 2017

• 23:3823:38, 15 March 2017 diff hist +8‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Undid revision 770311892: The sentence is specifically talking about Bhirrana along the Sarasvati, not the Indus which developed later.

21 February 2017

• 13:3213:32, 21 February 2017 diff hist −2‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ minor: you don't need commas AND parenthesis

16 February 2017

• 01:2701:27, 16 February 2017 diff hist −1‎ On the Mysteries of the Egyptians, Chaldeans, and Assyrians ‎No edit summary

12 February 2017

• 18:3518:35, 12 February 2017 diff hist −9‎ Amanah ‎ Undid revision 750459354 by 2A02:C7D:A1D2:A800:C05:285D:2241:4F66 (talk) Vandalism

21 December 2016

• 00:0000:00, 21 December 2016 diff hist −34‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ Undid revision 755346468 The edit seems specifically nationalistic to namedrop modern Iraq, and potentially confusing as the 6 cradles (and Mesopotamia) are discussed independent of the modern states in the region. The existing wikilink is enough. Tag: wikilinks removed

25 November 2016

• 15:4215:42, 25 November 2016 diff hist −42‎ Squanto ‎ Considering we know of his death, he didn't just disappear into the forest and was never heard from. If this is part of folk tradition, then it should be cited as such.

9 November 2016

• 16:1716:17, 9 November 2016 diff hist +49‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Indus Valley: added wikilink
• 16:0816:08, 9 November 2016 diff hist +230‎ Cradle of civilization ‎ →‎Indus Valley: As a notable theory it should be mentioned and clarified + added source