User contributions for 71.162.213.68

9 March 2016

• 20:4620:46, 9 March 2016 diff hist +13 James Haskell copyedit

1 February 2016

• 20:5820:58, 1 February 2016 diff hist −8 Joyce Vincent tighten syntax

20 January 2016

• 19:3319:33, 20 January 2016 diff hist −5 The Rockford Files →Premise: lite copyedit

9 January 2016

• 02:5502:55, 9 January 2016 diff hist 0 Bodyshockers →Series three: correct date
• 02:5102:51, 9 January 2016 diff hist −1 Lip plate →List of traditional wearers: remove nonstandard comma
• 02:4302:43, 9 January 2016 diff hist +303 Bodyshockers added season three info

29 December 2015

• 18:5318:53, 29 December 2015 diff hist +1 Madeira fix ref tag

28 December 2015

• 15:2715:27, 28 December 2015 diff hist −4 Off the derech correct adjective

23 December 2015

• 15:0715:07, 23 December 2015 diff hist −12 Peronism remedy redundancy

10 December 2015

• 18:4218:42, 10 December 2015 diff hist +5 Dan Quayle →Vice presidency: bust is no longer the most recent; Cheney was added in 2015

19 November 2015

• 18:2818:28, 19 November 2015 diff hist −147 Perfect is the enemy of good removed unsourced subjective opinion

18 November 2015

• 20:0520:05, 18 November 2015 diff hist +5 Glamour Awards →Controversies
• 20:0520:05, 18 November 2015 diff hist −6 Glamour Awards →Controversies: flow

14 November 2015

• 03:1503:15, 14 November 2015 diff hist +424 Talk:November 2015 Paris attacks →Islamic terrorism

13 November 2015

• 13:2113:21, 13 November 2015 diff hist −6 United States v. Alvarez →Supreme Court oral arguments: passive versus active verb
• 13:2013:20, 13 November 2015 diff hist −27 United States v. Alvarez tighten from passive to active phrasing
• 13:1813:18, 13 November 2015 diff hist −11 United States v. Alvarez →Reaction: tighten phrasing

12 November 2015

• 15:2915:29, 12 November 2015 diff hist +2 Alan Keyes →Media and advocacy: punctuation
• 15:2815:28, 12 November 2015 diff hist 0 Alan Keyes →Obama citizenship lawsuit: l/c

11 November 2015

• 17:1617:16, 11 November 2015 diff hist −5 Malcolm Webster (murderer) →Arrest: copyedit
• 17:1517:15, 11 November 2015 diff hist +28 The Widower (TV series) copyedit lede

9 November 2015

• 19:2319:23, 9 November 2015 diff hist −31 2015 Myanmar general election →Preparation: verb tenses to update

27 October 2015

• 19:4219:42, 27 October 2015 diff hist −1 Omayra Sánchez fix space

5 October 2015

• 20:1020:10, 5 October 2015 diff hist +4 Prince John of the United Kingdom →Popular culture: copyedit

30 September 2015

• 18:5318:53, 30 September 2015 diff hist +247 User talk:71.162.213.68 No edit summary
• 18:5218:52, 30 September 2015 diff hist −1 Discalced Carmelites remove comma, no comma between sentence subject and verb

27 September 2015

• 02:0502:05, 27 September 2015 diff hist +2 Wanamaker's wikipedia style for number

23 September 2015

• 02:1702:17, 23 September 2015 diff hist −2 Valencia Town Center copyedit run-on

13 September 2015

• 16:0216:02, 13 September 2015 diff hist −111 The White Room (KLF album) tighten lede, remedy repetitive syntax

7 September 2015

• 19:0119:01, 7 September 2015 diff hist −14 Dan Markel copyedit

2 September 2015

• 01:3801:38, 2 September 2015 diff hist +4 2016 Democratic Party presidential debates and forums →Criticism and controversy: syntax
• 01:3801:38, 2 September 2015 diff hist −4 2016 Democratic Party presidential debates and forums →Summaries: no space before and after virgules
• 01:3701:37, 2 September 2015 diff hist −75 2016 Democratic Party presidential debates and forums →Summaries: overall copyedit

30 August 2015

• 18:2118:21, 30 August 2015 diff hist +36 Abstinence-only sex education →Description: phrasing
• 18:2018:20, 30 August 2015 diff hist −6 Abstinence-only sex education tighten phrase

25 August 2015

• 02:0802:08, 25 August 2015 diff hist 0 Bystander effect →Emergency versus non-emergency situations: consistent style
• 02:0402:04, 25 August 2015 diff hist +3 Bystander effect →Larry Froistad (1998): copyedit

19 August 2015

• 02:3002:30, 19 August 2015 diff hist 0 Michael Reagan l/c
• 02:2102:21, 19 August 2015 diff hist +2 Theodore Roosevelt IV →Public service: correct typo

4 August 2015

• 02:3402:34, 4 August 2015 diff hist −31 Ectopic pregnancy →Treatment
• 02:2902:29, 4 August 2015 diff hist +9 Ectopic pregnancy copyedit

17 July 2015

• 02:0502:05, 17 July 2015 diff hist −1 Endorsements in the 2016 Democratic Party presidential primaries →Hillary Clinton: fix space

16 July 2015

• 18:4418:44, 16 July 2015 diff hist +4 Richard Rankin →Television: wikilink

7 July 2015

• 18:3418:34, 7 July 2015 diff hist −1 Japanese macaque remove erroneous comma -- no comma between a sentence subject and verb

6 July 2015

• 18:4918:49, 6 July 2015 diff hist +2 Tony Parsons (British journalist) punctuation
• 18:4318:43, 6 July 2015 diff hist −1 The Book of Fate fix spacing

29 June 2015

• 01:2801:28, 29 June 2015 diff hist 0 Canaan syntax

26 June 2015

• 02:0802:08, 26 June 2015 diff hist −109 Poldark (2015 TV series) →Production: remove redundant information already specified in opening section

12 June 2015

• 17:4117:41, 12 June 2015 diff hist −1 Sue Ann Nivens →With Mary and Phyllis: remedy punctuation problem