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9 January 2006
- 04:0004:00, 9 January 2006 diff hist −7,819 John Kerry rv to prior - stop being so bossy - these are good edits
- 03:5903:59, 9 January 2006 diff hist +157 User talk:Coburnpharr04/archive4 →<center>Happy New Year</center>
- 03:5503:55, 9 January 2006 diff hist −7,819 John Kerry can we get an update and confirm on these numbers? this looks low to me - are we sure this is accurate?)
- 03:5403:54, 9 January 2006 diff hist +2 John Kerry →Sponsorship of legislation: can we get an update and confirm on these numbers? this looks low to me - are we sure this is accurate?
- 03:5103:51, 9 January 2006 diff hist −262 John Kerry →Career future: this was redundant and poorly written
- 03:4903:49, 9 January 2006 diff hist −43 John Kerry →Career future: fix dated, run-on sentence - also not all are supporters still or ever were
- 03:4703:47, 9 January 2006 diff hist +2 John Kerry →Career future: I'm sure it's more than 45 by nnow
- 03:4303:43, 9 January 2006 diff hist −1 John Kerry →Kerry's tour of duty as commander of a Swift boat: he commanded two different boats, not one
- 03:3903:39, 9 January 2006 diff hist −230 John Kerry →Career in law and politics (1972-1985): not notable not sourced photo is gratuitous insult against Kerry
- 03:3703:37, 9 January 2006 diff hist −583 John Kerry →Career in law and politics (1972-1985): this needs to end with the setting up up the law fimr so as to segue to next section correctly. his small business diversion is not notable part of career
- 03:3503:35, 9 January 2006 diff hist −170 John Kerry →Media appearances: uh no justifications needed here - just state the facts
- 03:3103:31, 9 January 2006 diff hist +4 John Kerry →Bronze Star and third Purple Heart: he was awarded this - he did not merely "receive" it
- 03:3003:30, 9 January 2006 diff hist −300 John Kerry →Bronze Star and third Purple Heart: this is redundant
- 03:2603:26, 9 January 2006 diff hist +14 John Kerry →Joining the Vietnam Veterans Against the War: tweak this
- 03:2403:24, 9 January 2006 diff hist +4 John Kerry →Return from Vietnam: add wiki link
- 03:2203:22, 9 January 2006 diff hist +4 John Kerry →Second Purple Heart: this needs a wiki article
- 03:2103:21, 9 January 2006 diff hist +3 John Kerry →Second Purple Heart: two "received"s in one sentence reads poorly
- 03:1603:16, 9 January 2006 diff hist −3,026 John Kerry rv - there is progress being made here - please don't obstruct it
- 03:0703:07, 9 January 2006 diff hist −4 John Kerry →Bronze Star and third Purple Heart: heading >> swimming. He was rescued, plain and simple
- 03:0303:03, 9 January 2006 diff hist −279 John Kerry →The protest at the U.S. Capitol: this conclusionary assertion is POV and ought to stay only on the VVAW page
- 03:0003:00, 9 January 2006 diff hist −745 John Kerry →Family: none of this wealth justification is notable or even interesting - there is no crime in being wealthy - this is overkille
- 02:5602:56, 9 January 2006 diff hist −820 John Kerry →Family: No need to justify his divorce - plenty of politicians get divorced
- 02:5302:53, 9 January 2006 diff hist −175 John Kerry →Personal life: this is simple facts and need not be justified. Also, no need for 1 sentence paragraph or dated 2004 campaign micro-fact
- 02:4902:49, 9 January 2006 diff hist +1,204 Talk:John Kerry →Request
- 02:3402:34, 9 January 2006 diff hist −4,240 John Kerry rv to 70.85.195.239