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10 August 2008

• 03:3203:32, 10 August 2008 diff hist +11‎ Sorcerer (film) ‎ →‎Trivia
• 03:3203:32, 10 August 2008 diff hist −13‎ Tangerine Dream ‎No edit summary
• 03:3003:30, 10 August 2008 diff hist −12‎ Paramount Pictures ‎No edit summary
• 03:3003:30, 10 August 2008 diff hist −17‎ Donald O'Connor ‎ →‎Death
• 03:2903:29, 10 August 2008 diff hist −37‎ Claudette Colbert ‎ some fixes
• 03:2703:27, 10 August 2008 diff hist −86‎ Peter Ustinov ‎ simpe the intro, just say what they are, not all this award stuff
• 03:2703:27, 10 August 2008 diff hist −55‎ David Niven ‎No edit summary
• 03:2603:26, 10 August 2008 diff hist −36‎ Jack Lemmon ‎ pov fixes
• 03:2503:25, 10 August 2008 diff hist −116‎ Helen Hayes ‎ →‎Death
• 03:2403:24, 10 August 2008 diff hist −50‎ Helen Hayes ‎No edit summary
• 03:2103:21, 10 August 2008 diff hist −14‎ Johnny Carson ‎No edit summary
• 03:2103:21, 10 August 2008 diff hist −27‎ Goldie Hawn ‎ she is an actress before some award
• 03:2003:20, 10 August 2008 diff hist −25‎ Paul Hogan ‎No edit summary
• 03:2003:20, 10 August 2008 diff hist −34‎ Chevy Chase ‎ first part of sentence needs to be what he is, not some award
• 03:1903:19, 10 August 2008 diff hist −60‎ Billy Crystal ‎ simp/pov intro
• 03:1803:18, 10 August 2008 diff hist −35‎ Jack Benny ‎ →‎Death
• 03:1503:15, 10 August 2008 diff hist −139‎ The Lucy Show ‎No edit summary
• 03:1503:15, 10 August 2008 diff hist −7‎ Lucille Ball ‎ iconic is povish, no need to be in first sentence
• 03:1403:14, 10 August 2008 diff hist −28‎ Lucille Ball ‎ →‎Death: redundant, up top
• 03:1303:13, 10 August 2008 diff hist −24‎ I Love Lucy ‎ pov intro
• 03:1303:13, 10 August 2008 diff hist −7‎ Life Is Worth Living ‎No edit summary
• 03:1203:12, 10 August 2008 diff hist −7‎ Jackie Gleason ‎ iconic is povish
• 03:1103:11, 10 August 2008 diff hist −10‎ Jackie Gleason ‎ →‎Death
• 03:1103:11, 10 August 2008 diff hist −68‎ Audrey Meadows ‎ →‎Personal life: simplify/redundant
• 03:1003:10, 10 August 2008 diff hist −80‎ Art Carney ‎ simp/pov
• 03:0903:09, 10 August 2008 diff hist −118‎ The Honeymooners ‎ nn
• 03:0803:08, 10 August 2008 diff hist −23‎ Late Show with David Letterman ‎ keep it pov, don't put "award winning" in first sent
• 03:0703:07, 10 August 2008 diff hist −28‎ Thirtysomething ‎No edit summary
• 03:0403:04, 10 August 2008 diff hist −59‎ Buffy the Vampire Slayer ‎ keep first sentence simple and pov
• 03:0303:03, 10 August 2008 diff hist −79‎ Jon Vitti ‎ redundant, nn
• 03:0103:01, 10 August 2008 diff hist −522‎ The Larry Sanders Show ‎ →‎Crew: removed stereotyping of crew, they have their own articles
• 03:0003:00, 10 August 2008 diff hist −109‎ Twin Peaks ‎ keep first sentence simple
• 02:5902:59, 10 August 2008 diff hist −70‎ The X-Files ‎ keep the award stuff out of the first sent/pov
• 02:5802:58, 10 August 2008 diff hist −2,044‎ TV Guide's 50 Greatest TV Shows of All Time ‎ way too trivial for some random magazine list, over last

9 August 2008

• 03:3503:35, 9 August 2008 diff hist −152‎ Wendy Wasserstein ‎ more simple/pov
• 03:3203:32, 9 August 2008 diff hist −27‎ Paula Vogel ‎No edit summary
• 03:3103:31, 9 August 2008 diff hist −14‎ Richard Nelson (playwright) ‎ keep first sentence simple
• 03:3003:30, 9 August 2008 diff hist −9‎ Dawn Coe-Jones ‎ more timely, over last
• 03:2903:29, 9 August 2008 diff hist −20‎ Emily Mann (director) ‎ pov intro
• 03:2803:28, 9 August 2008 diff hist −52‎ Robert Hazard ‎ a little simpler, over last
• 03:1803:18, 9 August 2008 diff hist −15‎ Angels in America ‎No edit summary
• 03:1803:18, 9 August 2008 diff hist −14‎ Tony Kushner ‎ don't need award noms in first sent

8 August 2008

• 22:1622:16, 8 August 2008 diff hist −51‎ Orville Moody ‎ made a little more current, over last
• 22:1522:15, 8 August 2008 diff hist 0‎ Deaths in 2008 ‎ wrong age, over last
• 22:1422:14, 8 August 2008 diff hist +138‎ Deaths in 2008 ‎ now this is it