User contributions for 68.48.3.158

23 November 2014

• 18:3518:35, 23 November 2014 diff hist +1‎ Opioid ‎ →‎Constipation: fixed run-on sentence

30 June 2014

• 18:2518:25, 30 June 2014 diff hist +3‎ Alpha wave ‎ →‎History of alpha waves: changed phrasing of sentence to enhance clarity -- it wasn't despite his brilliance that he was meticulous, it was despite his brilliance and data-gathering skill that he lacked confidence to publish

20 April 2014

• 15:4215:42, 20 April 2014 diff hist −8‎ Attachment-based psychotherapy ‎ correct spacing

15 April 2014

• 20:2620:26, 15 April 2014 diff hist +4‎ Cushing's disease ‎ →‎History: egregious punctuation
• 16:5916:59, 15 April 2014 diff hist 0‎ Bathmotropic ‎ switched semicolons and commas so sentence made sense
• 16:2316:23, 15 April 2014 diff hist +3‎ Cortisol ‎ →‎Health disparities
• 16:2216:22, 15 April 2014 diff hist +9‎ Cortisol ‎ →‎Health disparities
• 15:5915:59, 15 April 2014 diff hist 0‎ Cortisol ‎ →‎Potassium: capitalization
• 15:3915:39, 15 April 2014 diff hist 0‎ Hormone replacement therapy ‎ →‎Absolute contraindications: punctuation
• 15:3215:32, 15 April 2014 diff hist +2‎ Hormone replacement therapy ‎ →‎Endometrial effects
• 15:2615:26, 15 April 2014 diff hist +1‎ Hormone replacement therapy ‎ →‎Health effects: punctuation, style
• 15:2415:24, 15 April 2014 diff hist +23‎ Hormone replacement therapy ‎ →‎Health effects: restructured sentence with parallelism to improve clarity

13 April 2014

• 23:1323:13, 13 April 2014 diff hist +7‎ Heaven Is for Real ‎ →‎Film adaptation: italicizing name of book
• 23:1223:12, 13 April 2014 diff hist −2‎ Heaven Is for Real ‎ →‎Film adaptation: minor changes to sentence structure to increase clarity

30 January 2013

• 02:5602:56, 30 January 2013 diff hist +1‎ Surrender of Japan ‎ →‎Broadcast of the Imperial Rescript on surrender

5 January 2013

• 16:1216:12, 5 January 2013 diff hist 0‎ Grandmaster Flash and the Furious Five ‎ "began straining" changed to "became strained"

23 September 2012

• 02:0802:08, 23 September 2012 diff hist +66‎ Quetiapine ‎ →‎Adverse effects: fixed really, really bad sentence structure

2 September 2012

• 13:5313:53, 2 September 2012 diff hist +12‎ Women's Professional Soccer ‎ →‎National exposure
• 13:5213:52, 2 September 2012 diff hist −1‎ Women's Professional Soccer ‎ →‎National exposure
• 13:5113:51, 2 September 2012 diff hist +1‎ Women's Professional Soccer ‎ →‎National exposure
• 13:4413:44, 2 September 2012 diff hist +1‎ Kate Markgraf ‎No edit summary

10 July 2012

• 15:4215:42, 10 July 2012 diff hist −1‎ Hurricane Irene ‎ removed improper comma

7 September 2011

• 21:3521:35, 7 September 2011 diff hist −1‎ Screamo ‎ →‎Influence on other styles: punctuation

6 August 2011

• 17:3717:37, 6 August 2011 diff hist 0‎ Extraterrestrial liquid water ‎ →‎Icy moon and trans-Neptunian object subsurface oceans
• 17:3417:34, 6 August 2011 diff hist 0‎ Extraterrestrial liquid water ‎ fix run-on sentence
• 17:3317:33, 6 August 2011 diff hist 0‎ Extraterrestrial liquid water ‎No edit summary
• 17:3117:31, 6 August 2011 diff hist +1‎ Seasonal flows on warm Martian slopes ‎ →‎Hypotheses

31 July 2011

• 13:4813:48, 31 July 2011 diff hist +1‎ List of U.S. state reptiles ‎ →‎Athletics
• 13:4413:44, 31 July 2011 diff hist 0‎ Common box turtle ‎ →‎Distribution

13 April 2010

• 01:1701:17, 13 April 2010 diff hist −12‎ Patty Hearst ‎ →‎Kidnapping and the SLA
• 01:1401:14, 13 April 2010 diff hist +3‎ Patty Hearst ‎ →‎Kidnapping and the SLA
• 01:1201:12, 13 April 2010 diff hist +2‎ Patty Hearst ‎ →‎Kidnapping and the SLA

10 April 2010

• 12:1812:18, 10 April 2010 diff hist +148‎ Talk:Presidents' Trophy ‎ →‎Current holder

6 November 2009

• 03:1303:13, 6 November 2009 diff hist −50‎ Marshall (name) ‎ →‎Women surnamed Marshall

3 November 2009

• 22:3422:34, 3 November 2009 diff hist 0‎ Writing style ‎ →‎Occupation

12 October 2009

• 20:5920:59, 12 October 2009 diff hist 0‎ Saw (franchise) ‎ →‎Overview

9 September 2009

• 00:0900:09, 9 September 2009 diff hist −15‎ Battle of Agincourt ‎No edit summary