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25 May 2024

• 03:5603:56, 25 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Shane (film) ‎ Paramount is an it, not a they. current
• 03:5503:55, 25 May 2024 diff hist −6‎ Shane (film) ‎ Paramount is an it, not a they. Also, of course something is new if it's being debuted.

23 May 2024

• 15:0815:08, 23 May 2024 diff hist −6‎ 40-yard dash ‎ More recently, this was not a sentence. current
• 15:0615:06, 23 May 2024 diff hist +9‎ 40-yard dash ‎ 4.27 is not less than 4.2

9 May 2024

• 05:3405:34, 9 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Spartacus (film) ‎ The studio is an it, not a they
• 05:3305:33, 9 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Spartacus (film) ‎ The American Film Institute is an it, not a they
• 04:0304:03, 9 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Brandon deWilde ‎ comma

6 May 2024

• 05:4305:43, 6 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Barney Oldfield ‎ The company is an it, not a they. current
• 05:3405:34, 6 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ The Horse Soldiers ‎ commas with appositives current
• 02:0602:06, 6 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ The Big Trail ‎ commas in dates
• 02:0602:06, 6 May 2024 diff hist −4‎ The Big Trail ‎ "had employed" is not needed
• 02:0502:05, 6 May 2024 diff hist −6‎ The Big Trail ‎ there are no small hordes
• 02:0402:04, 6 May 2024 diff hist −6‎ The Big Trail ‎ none of this "would" stuff needed
• 02:0302:03, 6 May 2024 diff hist +29‎ The Big Trail ‎ It was the West they were crossing.

4 May 2024

• 19:5819:58, 4 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Leo Szilard ‎ the library is an it, not a they
• 19:4419:44, 4 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Howard Buffett ‎ commas in appositives
• 19:4319:43, 4 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Howard Buffett ‎ commas in appositives
• 19:3119:31, 4 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Berkshire Hathaway ‎ The company is an it, not a they.

29 April 2024

• 17:5517:55, 29 April 2024 diff hist +1‎ Clash of the Titans (1981 film) ‎ dates get two commas current

28 April 2024

• 04:5904:59, 28 April 2024 diff hist +2‎ The Big Knife ‎ →‎Stage play: two commas in dates

26 April 2024

• 03:4003:40, 26 April 2024 diff hist −4‎ The In-Laws (1979 film) ‎ →‎Reception: "new recruits" is redundant
• 03:3603:36, 26 April 2024 diff hist −6‎ The In-Laws (1979 film) ‎ →‎Plot: we don't need "local"
• 03:3503:35, 26 April 2024 diff hist +5‎ The In-Laws (1979 film) ‎ →‎Plot: dangler
• 03:3403:34, 26 April 2024 diff hist −11‎ The In-Laws (1979 film) ‎ we don't need "respective"

15 April 2024

• 09:3609:36, 15 April 2024 diff hist −9‎ Lasata ‎ →‎Present ownership: not "cyrrently current
• 09:2909:29, 15 April 2024 diff hist −11‎ Grey Gardens ‎ →‎Aftermath: "ultimately" adds nothing
• 09:2809:28, 15 April 2024 diff hist −13‎ Grey Gardens ‎ →‎Aftermath: "subsequently" adds nothing
• 09:0709:07, 15 April 2024 diff hist −14‎ Frog and Toad ‎ "respectively" adds nothing

7 April 2024

• 07:5307:53, 7 April 2024 diff hist +5‎ Class of '44 ‎ →‎Plot: They graduate from high school; they don't graduate high school

4 April 2024

• 03:0203:02, 4 April 2024 diff hist +2‎ The Wild One ‎ typo, apparently
• 02:3602:36, 4 April 2024 diff hist +9‎ The Wild One ‎ The photo may or may not be staged; facts on both sides are presented on the page about the incident.
• 02:3402:34, 4 April 2024 diff hist −2‎ Hollister riot ‎ The AMA is an it, not a they. current
• 02:3202:32, 4 April 2024 diff hist −2‎ Hollister riot ‎ The Chronicle is an it, not a they.

3 April 2024

• 21:0221:02, 3 April 2024 diff hist +3‎ Fernand de Brinon ‎ starting to repair referece to Bloch; beyond my ken how to do that; book is listed below current
• 20:5520:55, 3 April 2024 diff hist +654‎ Fernand de Brinon ‎ adding effect of Brinon report on Hitler in 1933, with reference to Bloch biography of Ribbentrop; could have added that this particular meeting was arranged by Ribbentrop, but didn't want to clutter so high with a reference to Ribbentrop

29 March 2024

• 22:4122:41, 29 March 2024 diff hist −12‎ Letty Cottin Pogrebin ‎ →‎Career: The publisher is an it, not a they. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 March 2024

• 05:4905:49, 26 March 2024 diff hist −12‎ Debbie Reynolds ‎ Yes, we can see it's self-titled. Never need to say that.
• 03:1403:14, 26 March 2024 diff hist +9‎ Red Skelton ‎ need to specify Eheart, or else this bit about the stepfather and the name makes no sense; details are in footnote only

24 March 2024

• 23:3923:39, 24 March 2024 diff hist −2‎ Django Unchained ‎ →‎Accolades: The AFI is an it, not a they. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 March 2024

• 20:2420:24, 23 March 2024 diff hist −68‎ Mark Few ‎ This "constant on the sidelines" stuff is trite filler.
• 20:1820:18, 23 March 2024 diff hist −1‎ Mark Few ‎ In the US, it's "canceled." Cancel, canceled, cancellation.

22 March 2024

• 19:2319:23, 22 March 2024 diff hist +191‎ The Penguins ‎ →‎Later years: Mentions by Paul Simon, as in interview on The Late Show with Stephen Colbert
• 19:1619:16, 22 March 2024 diff hist −11‎ Grease (film) ‎ "respective" adds nothing, is never needed.
• 19:0419:04, 22 March 2024 diff hist −2‎ Sidney Poitier ‎ The film festival is an it, not a they.
• 05:2105:21, 22 March 2024 diff hist −7‎ In the Heat of the Night (film) ‎ appositives get two commas
• 05:2005:20, 22 March 2024 diff hist −11‎ In the Heat of the Night (film) ‎ "Respective" adds nothing.
• 04:5104:51, 22 March 2024 diff hist −25‎ In the Heat of the Night (film) ‎ We don't need all the "local"s. Diners are local. Racists are local. Everything is local.
• 04:5004:50, 22 March 2024 diff hist −34‎ In the Heat of the Night (film) ‎ We don't see Gillespie arrive
• 04:4604:46, 22 March 2024 diff hist −35‎ In the Heat of the Night (film) ‎ Delete the turning around, which happens before Gillespie says, "You take care..." Unimportant, but was in error.
• 02:1802:18, 22 March 2024 diff hist −19‎ Stirling Silliphant ‎ "subsequently" adds nothing