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23 May 2024
- 08:1408:14, 23 May 2024 diff hist −8 Neutron star merger rm parenthetical discourse mark, not needed current
- 07:4607:46, 23 May 2024 diff hist −29 Neutron star merger MOS:COMMA serial, before ref, rm unary nested section
- 06:4106:41, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: MOS:COMMA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3706:37, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3306:33, 23 May 2024 diff hist +37 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: reposition cite; if covers the following sentence too Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:1406:14, 23 May 2024 diff hist −23 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce: generalize; whether microbes give birth or not is not important here Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:0506:05, 23 May 2024 diff hist +9 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: word choice (again), partial revert, meeting the microbes halfway (see previous edit) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:0106:01, 23 May 2024 diff hist −2 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce: word choice. Microbes have DNA but may not be “beings”, not sure if they survive here. Either way, one doesn’t think of them as “giving birth” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:4705:47, 23 May 2024 diff hist −4 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce: encyclopedic style, relocate existing inline {{xref}} Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 May 2024
- 18:5418:54, 22 May 2024 diff hist +361 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: Fix typo on 'parsecs' abbreviaions, plus copyedit
- 14:0814:08, 22 May 2024 diff hist +12 Longshot it's the opposite. as proposed last month in Talk:Wide_shot, and after a suitable waiting period current Tag: Visual edit: Switched
18 May 2024
- 07:5107:51, 18 May 2024 diff hist +1 Bell test ce: word choice current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:0404:04, 18 May 2024 diff hist +8 Bell test ce: word choice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:1203:12, 18 May 2024 diff hist +3 Bell test clarify: the word “results” was already used in negated form, so a second, non-negated usage, intended as also negated, is too confusing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 May 2024
- 04:3704:37, 17 May 2024 diff hist +6 Future of an expanding universe →The Stelliferous Era: ce: word choice current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 May 2024
- 20:3120:31, 16 May 2024 diff hist −25 Iron-56 →Relationship to nickel-62: ce: awkward preposition chain and WP:PLA, fix by removing unnecessary pipe text current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0120:01, 16 May 2024 diff hist +27 GW170817 →Gravitational wave detection: Further clarify 100s/1000s disparity; the latter is only discerned with hindsight current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 10:2610:26, 16 May 2024 diff hist 0 Keyboard expression →Pressure sensitivity or aftertouch: 1.) hyphen is not dash 2.) MOS:EMDASH opted elsewhere in this article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3606:36, 16 May 2024 diff hist −45 Adam Rippon WP:PLA remove redirect pipe text, rm unsourced “world feed” (still needs further clarification) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:2906:29, 16 May 2024 diff hist −1 Stars on Mars →Format: ce: word choice - definite → indefinite article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2405:24, 16 May 2024 diff hist −4 Kurzweil Music Systems →Artis/Forte Series: WP:REDNO - not notable current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2305:23, 16 May 2024 diff hist −4 Kurzweil Music Systems →MIDIboard: WP:REDNO - not notable Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1705:17, 16 May 2024 diff hist −89 Kurzweil Music Systems Remove ‘issues’ tag - resolved - citations problem from talk page was resolved 7 years ago in 2016 when the ‘Kurzweil’ users section was deleted entirely Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1005:10, 16 May 2024 diff hist −23 Kurzweil Music Systems →K2xxx synthesizers: WP:REDNO not notable, WP:NOTADVERT Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:2304:23, 16 May 2024 diff hist −11 SpaceX →2001–2004: Founding: copyedit, rm MOS:COMMA (not needed) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 May 2024
- 03:4003:40, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1 Lyle Mays →Biography: MOS:COMMA serial current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 May 2024
- 18:1318:13, 10 May 2024 diff hist −323 Stars on Mars →Format: factual fix: 1.) the ‘Parade’ cite does not discuss details of the elimination/immunity process 2.) the “Base Commander” is always eligible for elimination Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3305:33, 10 May 2024 diff hist −19 Adam Rippon ce: fix grammar, simplify Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:4302:43, 10 May 2024 diff hist +15 Stars on Mars add end date for finished series Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0402:04, 10 May 2024 diff hist −4 Carrie Fisher MOS:EMDASH - should not be surrounded by spaces Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 May 2024
- 20:2120:21, 8 May 2024 diff hist +17 SpaceX →Launch vehicles: MOS:CURRENT dating of ostensibly expiring future plans Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5907:59, 8 May 2024 diff hist +10 Kurzweil Music Systems →Artis/Forte Series: ce: unwrap abbreviation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5507:55, 8 May 2024 diff hist +37 Kurzweil Music Systems →K2xxx synthesizers: fix: MOS:CURRENT tense, grammar, encyclopedic style/clarity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 May 2024
- 23:1223:12, 3 May 2024 diff hist −24 Michel Petrucciani →Personality and musical style: ce: fluff current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:4520:45, 3 May 2024 diff hist +9 GW170817 fix: "100s" duration is inconsistent with later cited figure (1000s); probably refers only to human-audible frequency range
- 20:3520:35, 3 May 2024 diff hist −29 GW170817 →Gravitational wave detection: ce: clause sequential order, encyclopedic style
- 20:1120:11, 3 May 2024 diff hist +467 Talk:Swing time →Proposed split/move?: Reply current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 20:0220:02, 3 May 2024 diff hist +350 Talk:Swing time →Proposed split/move?: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 19:5019:50, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 SpaceX →2001–2004: Founding: punct before ref. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:5904:59, 3 May 2024 diff hist +4 Charles Simonyi MOS:CURRENT use template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:5004:50, 3 May 2024 diff hist +4 Nancy Grace Roman Space Telescope MOS:CURRENT - use template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:3503:35, 3 May 2024 diff hist +201 Talk:Wide shot →A “long shot” is exactly the opposite of a “wide shot”, not the same thing: Reply current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Disambiguation links added Reply
- 03:3003:30, 3 May 2024 diff hist +785 Talk:Wide shot →A “long shot” is exactly the opposite of a “wide shot”, not the same thing: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
- 03:1203:12, 3 May 2024 diff hist −35 Long take ce: simplify, reduce off-topic detail in the lede Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 May 2024
- 20:0620:06, 2 May 2024 diff hist +9 SpaceX MOS:CURRENT use template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0220:02, 2 May 2024 diff hist +6 Raising and lowering indices →Mathematical formulation: make hyphen non-breaking current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:5619:56, 2 May 2024 diff hist +6 Accidental (music) add wikilink letter ‘B’, MOS:UL: “relevant connection” current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:4719:47, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 Accidental (music) MOS:EMDASH consistency; this article elsewhere opts for em- vs. en-dash Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1019:10, 2 May 2024 diff hist +118 SpaceX →2001–2004: Founding: 1. already wikilinked in previous paragraph, 2. clarify Griffin declined the position, with cite Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:2901:29, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2 American Restoration →Season 7: MOS:ENDASH current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit