User contributions for 67.175.245.235

24 December 2012

• 04:1404:14, 24 December 2012 diff hist +4 Talk:Cytokine storm →Enough of the "citation needed"? Request and very strong disagreement: minor stylistic
• 04:1304:13, 24 December 2012 diff hist +1,570 Talk:Cytokine storm →Enough of the "citation needed"
• 03:5903:59, 24 December 2012 diff hist +1,329 Talk:Cytokine storm →Datedness on citations, general thought on overstating therapeutic tracks (subheadings under "Treatment"): new section

21 December 2012

• 04:1604:16, 21 December 2012 diff hist +318 Talk:Computer graphics →No ILM, etc. in article on CG?: new section
• 02:0102:01, 21 December 2012 diff hist +341 Yerba mate →Nomenclature: citations needed
• 01:5801:58, 21 December 2012 diff hist +340 Yerba mate →History: citations needed
• 01:5501:55, 21 December 2012 diff hist +34 Yerba mate →Xanthines: citation needed

12 December 2012

• 15:3615:36, 12 December 2012 diff hist +592 Talk:Ecology →New section
• 15:2815:28, 12 December 2012 diff hist +380 Talk:Ecology →Coevolution section needs attention vis-a-vis commensalism...: new section
• 15:2015:20, 12 December 2012 diff hist −1 Proteus (bacterium) Moved sentences not germane to identification, from this section up to more general area of article. LeProf
• 15:1715:17, 12 December 2012 diff hist +791 Proteus (bacterium) →Identification: Clarification and referencing of Hauch, Ohne Hauch information.

10 December 2012

• 04:2304:23, 10 December 2012 diff hist −2 Talk:Lauren Winner →Question both tone and importance
• 04:2204:22, 10 December 2012 diff hist +827 Talk:Lauren Winner No edit summary

3 December 2012

• 19:4219:42, 3 December 2012 diff hist +260 Talk:Erica Tazel →Encourage correction and improvement...: new section
• 19:3919:39, 3 December 2012 diff hist +21 Erica Tazel corrected technical aspect of current roll LeProf
• 19:3619:36, 3 December 2012 diff hist +3,022 Erica Tazel Extensive first edit from available sources, but without best/standard wiki structure of text and referencing as of yet. LeProf

20 November 2012

• 05:2805:28, 20 November 2012 diff hist +87 Talk:Dust Bowl →Suggest better coverage of deaths due to dust pneumonia, in opening and through-out
• 05:2505:25, 20 November 2012 diff hist +931 Talk:Dust Bowl →Suggest better coverage of deaths due to dust pneumonia, in opening and through-out: new section

19 November 2012

• 06:3706:37, 19 November 2012 diff hist +437 Witch hazel (astringent) →Uses: Restructured and renamed to bring together and highlight composition info. Clarified WebMD-derived information as to evidenced uses and nonuses. LeProf

14 November 2012

• 05:1405:14, 14 November 2012 diff hist +1,531 Talk:Huntington's disease →Caspase-6 cleavage of mHtt: Colleague encourage openness, caution. Cheers. LeProf.
• 04:5504:55, 14 November 2012 diff hist +236 Talk:Huntington's disease →Bravo, thank you for quality, continuing improvements.: new section

25 October 2012

• 13:5013:50, 25 October 2012 diff hist −68 Erythropoietin →Medical uses: Same as immediately preceding; cut and paste error led last correction to be ineffectual. Cheers, LeProf
• 13:4713:47, 25 October 2012 diff hist +74 Erythropoietin →Medical uses: Fixed close-ref error. Cheers, LeProf
• 13:4613:46, 25 October 2012 diff hist +377 Erythropoietin →Medical uses: Extended information on drug names, and added FDA box warnings. Cheers, LeProf
• 13:3113:31, 25 October 2012 diff hist −127 Erythropoietin →Medical uses: Sentence with errors, and making specific research claim, deleted for lack of any cross-references or citations (whatsoever). LeProf

13 October 2012

• 20:4320:43, 13 October 2012 diff hist +56 Felisa Wolfe-Simon Citations found to replace out of date refutation citation, and text adjusted accordingly. Cheers. LeProf
• 20:2520:25, 13 October 2012 diff hist +2 Felisa Wolfe-Simon monor, corrected typo. Cheers. LeProf
• 20:2420:24, 13 October 2012 diff hist +1,300 Felisa Wolfe-Simon Expanded prose on critique; made clear that refuting citation, as cited, is submitted rather than published (though by now, likely pub'd), edited inaccurate phrase on not finding As (vs not finding arsenical DNA. Cheers. LeProf

2 October 2012

• 19:5019:50, 2 October 2012 diff hist 0 Francisella tularensis gram-negative is Gram-negative, formal name derived, Prof D

23 September 2012

• 12:4512:45, 23 September 2012 diff hist +452 Talk:BASE jumping →Fatalities section question: new section
• 12:4212:42, 23 September 2012 diff hist −5 BASE jumping →Fatalities: Clarified that concluding sentence derives from the Norway study, and tried to tighten up prose. Prof D
• 12:1012:10, 23 September 2012 diff hist +57 BASE jumping →Fatalities: Made clear why the two fatality stats were different by adding "same site" to the Norway stat, and made clear that the nonfatal accident stat was derived from the "same site" study. Prof D.

10 September 2012

• 19:2219:22, 10 September 2012 diff hist −12 Talk:The New Yankee Workshop →Project page links that appear no longer appear to work...
• 19:2119:21, 10 September 2012 diff hist +125 Talk:The New Yankee Workshop →Project page links that appear no longer appear to work...: new section

8 September 2012

• 13:2713:27, 8 September 2012 diff hist +228 Talk:Justin Vivian Bond →use of nonstandard language confuses, is unjustified as general encyclopedic language
• 13:2413:24, 8 September 2012 diff hist +2 Talk:Justin Vivian Bond →use of nonstandard language confuses, is unjustified as general encyclopedic language
• 13:2313:23, 8 September 2012 diff hist +9 Talk:Justin Vivian Bond →use of nonstandard language confuses, is unjustified as general encyclopedic language
• 13:2313:23, 8 September 2012 diff hist +467 Talk:Justin Vivian Bond →"third gender": comment on language use in article
• 13:1713:17, 8 September 2012 diff hist +1,139 Talk:Justin Vivian Bond →use of nonstandard language confuses, is unjustified as general encyclopedic language: new section

30 August 2012

• 14:2114:21, 30 August 2012 diff hist +530 Methylsulfonylmethane →Effects on health: Added statement, citation on MSM functional/structural relation to DMSO. Prof D

23 August 2012

• 23:3523:35, 23 August 2012 diff hist +5 Talk:Microbiota →Lederberg-microbiome connecting reference still missing: Possible citation located.
• 23:3323:33, 23 August 2012 diff hist −304 Talk:Microbiota →Lederberg-microbiome connecting reference still missing: Citation identified for possible inclusion.
• 23:2823:28, 23 August 2012 diff hist +404 Talk:Microbiota →Lederberg-microbiome connecting reference still missing: Possible citation provided.
• 23:2123:21, 23 August 2012 diff hist −99 Microbiota →Introduction: Removed stray sentence making ridiculously broad claim without citation.
• 23:1823:18, 23 August 2012 diff hist +342 Talk:Microbiota →Lederberg-microbiome connecting reference still missing: new section