User contributions for 24.205.64.27

1 December 2011

• 06:1606:16, 1 December 2011 diff hist −53‎ The Blob ‎ →‎Production: If his own article doesn't mention this uncited title, it's probably not all that widely accepted.

21 November 2011

• 22:5322:53, 21 November 2011 diff hist +217‎ Wikipedia:Village pump (idea lab) ‎ →‎500,000,000 edits
• 22:4722:47, 21 November 2011 diff hist +308‎ Wikipedia:Village pump (idea lab) ‎ →‎500,000,000 edits: new section

16 November 2011

• 22:3122:31, 16 November 2011 diff hist +159‎ Talk:Faggot (food) ‎ →‎"African-American Country"
• 22:2022:20, 16 November 2011 diff hist +55‎ Christmas truce ‎ I don't like this sentence, it feels too cutesy (witholding the name to the end, not telling us why we care directly). I'm not entirely happy with my addition either; perhaps an experienced editor could refine it?

11 November 2011

• 01:5901:59, 11 November 2011 diff hist −4‎ Tomato purée ‎ Use of the prefix "pre" makes this sentence confusing; was it seasoned before packaging, or was it packaged before seasoning. I'm sure strict application of grammar disambiguates, but so does clearer grammar.

5 November 2011

• 07:3407:34, 5 November 2011 diff hist +6‎ Finderscope ‎ without parallax correction, there is no way a finder scope can mark precisely where the main telescope is looking.

3 November 2011

• 09:5109:51, 3 November 2011 diff hist +294‎ Critical Mass (cycling) ‎ Undid revision 458779867 by Alfacosmo (talk) wp:duck vandalism

24 October 2011

• 06:0906:09, 24 October 2011 diff hist +186‎ Talk:Beans, Beans, the Musical Fruit ‎ →‎Melody

22 October 2011

• 04:5404:54, 22 October 2011 diff hist +9‎ Cultural appropriation ‎ →‎Criticism: The entirety of this section is arguments in favor of cultural appropriation. Therefore, I changed the name. I thought it was better than clarifying "criticism" as "criticism of criticism".

19 October 2011

• 08:3308:33, 19 October 2011 diff hist +11‎ Jonathan's Law ‎ →‎Records access: What if I love someone but they are not a relative. Do they still qualify as "loved ones"?

18 October 2011

• 23:4623:46, 18 October 2011 diff hist 0‎ John Aristotle Phillips ‎ →‎Aristotle, Inc.: Changed "enrich" to a term that doesn't make me giggle so much. If you really want "enrich" in an article about a man who supposedly designed a nuclear bomb, go ahead.
• 07:1707:17, 18 October 2011 diff hist +7‎ Wonderlic test ‎ →‎Average scores for other professions: I assume Warehouses don't tend to score above "literate" on a cognitive ability test.

17 October 2011

• 07:3507:35, 17 October 2011 diff hist −164‎ Fedor Jeftichew ‎ →‎In popular culture
• 06:1506:15, 17 October 2011 diff hist −153‎ British Shorthair ‎ →‎Temperament: There is no practical way to provide a citation for that statement, or reword it in citable form; Therefore, you win, guy who put fact tag on a caption.
• 05:4705:47, 17 October 2011 diff hist +9‎ Gretna Green ‎ →‎Marriage: I assume it means parental consent; otherwise one could marry someone against their will, which wouldn't be likely to be supported by law.

14 October 2011

• 02:2302:23, 14 October 2011 diff hist +26‎ Fir Park ‎ →‎Future

10 October 2011

• 03:4603:46, 10 October 2011 diff hist −4‎ Double Rainbow (viral video) ‎ double dipping does not link to the practice of dipping a chip which was partially consumed into a communal bowl of dip.

9 October 2011

• 05:2105:21, 9 October 2011 diff hist −133‎ Fritz the Cat ‎No edit summary

28 September 2011

• 21:0421:04, 28 September 2011 diff hist +8‎ Coerced abstinence ‎ As I understand it, if addiction is a disease, it requires treatment. Treatment need not necessarily be drug-based

21 September 2011

• 18:0318:03, 21 September 2011 diff hist 0‎ Serviced office ‎ Unless I'm missing something, that's a benefit.
• 17:5817:58, 21 September 2011 diff hist +4‎ Steel building ‎ →‎Advantages
• 17:2817:28, 21 September 2011 diff hist +8‎ Santa Justa Lift ‎ →‎History: I'm assuming that the conversion to electric power was a conversion to grid power, and not simply the replacement of a steam-driven engine with an electric engine powered by a generator.

3 September 2011

• 03:4303:43, 3 September 2011 diff hist −5‎ Ali G ‎ →‎History

18 July 2011

• 15:2415:24, 18 July 2011 diff hist −4‎ Boeing 737 ‎ →‎Initial derivatives: with that number there, it's easy to misread as 1,114,737 aircraft, an absurd number.
• 02:1402:14, 18 July 2011 diff hist +9‎ U2 360° Tour ‎ →‎Conception and stage design: "To mars and back" is a terrible description; distance between mars and earth changes constantly, and it's not clear that they even accounted for reduced air friction/gravity in a supposed flight.

17 July 2011

• 00:4700:47, 17 July 2011 diff hist −55‎ A23 battery ‎ LR44 was cropped from the image

16 July 2011

• 09:4509:45, 16 July 2011 diff hist +9‎ Kryptonite lock ‎ →‎Vulnerabilities: a shaped explosive charge would also presumably destroy the lock, as would any number of other things.

14 July 2011

• 08:3508:35, 14 July 2011 diff hist 0‎ Cost of the Olympic Games ‎ →‎Games Cost: See source

10 July 2011

• 08:2208:22, 10 July 2011 diff hist +271‎ Talk:Air Force One photo op incident ‎ →‎Without the consultation and permission of the president
• 08:1808:18, 10 July 2011 diff hist +430‎ Talk:Air Force One photo op incident ‎ →‎Without the consultation and permission of the president

9 July 2011

• 07:2807:28, 9 July 2011 diff hist +2‎ Janissary ‎ →‎Recruitment, training and status: Booty feels like a strange word choice; revert me if plunder is less correct here.

4 July 2011

• 05:4205:42, 4 July 2011 diff hist −28‎ Battlefield 2 ‎ →‎Sequel

28 June 2011

• 07:3007:30, 28 June 2011 diff hist +1‎ God Bless America ‎ →‎Major League Baseball: Dodgers no longer broadcast GBA during every game, only some.

25 May 2011

• 02:3602:36, 25 May 2011 diff hist 0‎ Rubby De La Rosa ‎ added his 2 Ks

22 May 2011

• 06:5406:54, 22 May 2011 diff hist +24‎ Frances Barber ‎ →‎Screen: This will need refactoring once she's appeared in more. Perhaps something like "appeared in N episodes of the 6th Series of Doctor Who."

18 May 2011

• 06:2506:25, 18 May 2011 diff hist +29‎ Knuckleball ‎ →‎Quotes on the knuckleball: probably better known as Yankees manager.

12 May 2011

• 07:1807:18, 12 May 2011 diff hist +232‎ Talk:Gordy ‎ →‎This article may see increased traffic/vandalism: new section

9 May 2011

• 18:4418:44, 9 May 2011 diff hist −26‎ Deafblindness ‎ →‎Communication: The part after the morse code link was poorly phrased. I couldn't think of a good way to write it. Hopefully, the concept will be evident to everyone who knows morse code, and those who don't can follow the link.

7 May 2011

• 06:2306:23, 7 May 2011 diff hist +15‎ Lisa Dergan ‎ →‎Personal

16 April 2011

• 22:4022:40, 16 April 2011 diff hist +4‎ Source Code ‎No edit summary

14 April 2011

• 06:0906:09, 14 April 2011 diff hist +4‎ Ergogenic use of anabolic steroids ‎ →‎Sports: further clarification, organize is more accurate than play.
• 06:0906:09, 14 April 2011 diff hist +52‎ Ergogenic use of anabolic steroids ‎ →‎Sports: clarification. The sport itself has no way to prohibit steroid use.

11 April 2011

• 08:2508:25, 11 April 2011 diff hist +4‎ Maschinenmensch ‎ →‎The film version
• 06:3206:32, 11 April 2011 diff hist −22‎ Industrial espionage ‎ →‎Google and Operation Aurora: It has a link. I'd wager <1% of people don't recognize the name "Google", and they can follow the link.

8 April 2011

• 06:5006:50, 8 April 2011 diff hist +2‎ Big Fish ‎ →‎Cast: Siamese twins is a deprecated and vaguely offensive phrase, unless they happen to be Siamese twins.