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16 February 2014

• 04:4804:48, 16 February 2014 diff hist +117‎ White House Farm murders ‎ →‎Telephone calls: article incorrectly claimed the house had 4 phones it counted the digital phone normally found in the office 2 times.

12 February 2014

• 15:4915:49, 12 February 2014 diff hist +58‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case: a 440 hearing is a common term but it is actually a proceeding with multiple hearings and orders thus the term proceeding is more fitting. Cleaned up the paragraph to make it more accurate and better grammr
• 15:3915:39, 12 February 2014 diff hist +3‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case: Ronald had 2 sisters. Edited to clarify which sister he accused of shooting his father in the 1986 article. As was it just read "his sister'
• 15:3215:32, 12 February 2014 diff hist +24‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case: changed Ron to Ronald and added Jr/Sr for clarification purposes to distinguish between father and son
• 15:2515:25, 12 February 2014 diff hist +6‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case: grammatical fix: added the word "found" so that it reads the police found no evidence of drugs being administered because "police concluded no evidence" is not proper English.
• 15:2015:20, 12 February 2014 diff hist +27‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎The murder of the DeFeo family: as was the sentence failed to note that he told police where the evidence was and that they were thereby able to recover it. That was the major crack in the case
• 15:1015:10, 12 February 2014 diff hist −18‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎The murder of the DeFeo family: Evidence suggests 3 were wakened by the gunfire but Dawn went back to bed. Physical evidence suggest 2 were definitely awake it is unknown if the others were or not. Sentence made more accurate
• 00:3400:34, 12 February 2014 diff hist +8‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case: incorrectly stated the bodies were face down. The bodies were on their stomachs but the faces were to the side. The faces were not face down into the pillows that would result in suffocation.
• 00:3100:31, 12 February 2014 diff hist +13‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Trial and conviction: this section incorrectly stated his appeals to the parole board were rejected. Appeals are filed with courts to reverse a conviction. Parole is simply getting out of prison early though the conviction stands. Fixed this error
• 00:2100:21, 12 February 2014 diff hist +627‎ Talk:Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎The shooting
• 00:1400:14, 12 February 2014 diff hist +2,543‎ Talk:Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Recent edits

11 February 2014

• 23:4923:49, 11 February 2014 diff hist +625‎ Talk:Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Sentence and parole
• 23:3523:35, 11 February 2014 diff hist −3‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case
• 23:1023:10, 11 February 2014 diff hist +3,258‎ Talk:Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎controversy after 2000?
• 22:2922:29, 11 February 2014 diff hist +1,461‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ Undid revision 595046189 by ClueBot NG (talk) Tag: reverting anti-vandal bot
• 22:2522:25, 11 February 2014 diff hist +137‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case
• 22:2122:21, 11 February 2014 diff hist +408‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case
• 21:4521:45, 11 February 2014 diff hist +916‎ Ronald DeFeo Jr. ‎ →‎Controversies surrounding the case

22 July 2009

• 19:3019:30, 22 July 2009 diff hist +15‎ New York Institute of Technology ‎ →‎Fraternities