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9 December 2008

• 03:1303:13, 9 December 2008 diff hist 0‎ The Shrike ‎ →‎Origin: hyphen would only be appropriate if we were using it as a compound adjective
• 02:0202:02, 9 December 2008 diff hist +4‎ Anti-set-off spray powder ‎ comma usage throughout
• 02:0002:00, 9 December 2008 diff hist 0‎ Carrom ‎ →‎Powder: comma splice

8 December 2008

• 21:5821:58, 8 December 2008 diff hist −2‎ Defenestration ‎ →‎Notable defenestrations in history: scare quotes inappropriate unless you have a source saying the investigation was a sham

7 December 2008

• 18:1918:19, 7 December 2008 diff hist +4‎ Jewel (singer) ‎ →‎Project Clean Water: Celebrity Lyrics Auction
• 16:4416:44, 7 December 2008 diff hist −2‎ Costume jewelry ‎ →‎History: "since" requires a moment in time, not a length of time.
• 15:4115:41, 7 December 2008 diff hist +4‎ Hyperion Cantos ‎ →‎Major characters
• 14:5614:56, 7 December 2008 diff hist −43‎ Electric blanket ‎No edit summary
• 01:0301:03, 7 December 2008 diff hist +363‎ Talk:Rita Hayworth ‎ →‎Related to Ginger Rogers

6 December 2008

• 22:1422:14, 6 December 2008 diff hist +10‎ Silver ‎ →‎Precautions: disfiguring is some amount of harm
• 01:5101:51, 6 December 2008 diff hist −2‎ Baijiu ‎ →‎Taste: quotation marks inappropriate
• 01:1101:11, 6 December 2008 diff hist 0‎ Joint Worldwide Intelligence Communications System ‎ packet switching is a method of network data transmission, not a method of security-clearing systems.
• 00:0900:09, 6 December 2008 diff hist +9‎ Votive offering ‎ →‎Western Christianity: just saying "donations" is tautological

5 December 2008

• 23:3623:36, 5 December 2008 diff hist +61‎ Euphemism ‎ →‎Euphemisms for death: actually it probably doesn't come from that, but either way it should be cited
• 15:0515:05, 5 December 2008 diff hist −40‎ Death Note ‎ harmful sensation not a significant part of the series - you die if someone writes your name in the Note, not if you *see* them write your name in the Note.

3 December 2008

• 22:5822:58, 3 December 2008 diff hist −30‎ Color gel ‎ →‎History: the reader will decide whether to be interested
• 22:5222:52, 3 December 2008 diff hist −24‎ Stage lighting instrument ‎ →‎House lights and worklights: just note it
• 04:0704:07, 3 December 2008 diff hist +4‎ Talk:List of games with concealed rules ‎ →‎Nomic
• 04:0504:05, 3 December 2008 diff hist +939‎ Talk:List of games with concealed rules ‎ →‎Nomic

2 December 2008

• 21:0621:06, 2 December 2008 diff hist −25‎ Wicked (Maguire novel) ‎ →‎Objects
• 20:5620:56, 2 December 2008 diff hist −1‎ Wicked (Maguire novel) ‎ →‎Major Characters: "whereas" is one word, not the same thing as "where as"
• 20:5320:53, 2 December 2008 diff hist +1‎ Wicked (Maguire novel) ‎ →‎Plot summary: "infamous" arguably goes against the point of the book, and is certainly at least POV
• 02:5102:51, 2 December 2008 diff hist −11‎ Salute state ‎ →‎Salute states in present India: no reason for that to be an "of course"

1 December 2008

• 15:4515:45, 1 December 2008 diff hist −36‎ Electric blanket ‎ all electrical heating devices are 100% efficient by nature

30 November 2008

• 22:3522:35, 30 November 2008 diff hist +1,212‎ Wikipedia talk:Content disclaimer ‎ →‎Just note it: new section
• 22:2722:27, 30 November 2008 diff hist −97‎ Devil sticks ‎ →‎Fire Devil sticking: Caption should describe the image, not provide a disclaimer against guidelines. (See WP:NDA)
• 21:3921:39, 30 November 2008 diff hist −5‎ Penta Water ‎ →‎Mainstream science: no reason to expect that there ever will be
• 21:3221:32, 30 November 2008 diff hist +2‎ Stage lighting instrument ‎ →‎Reflector: one focus, two foci
• 20:5920:59, 30 November 2008 diff hist −68‎ Breakout box ‎ equipment is a mass noun and doesn't take a plural; and the breakout box is not generally a protective device
• 01:5401:54, 30 November 2008 diff hist +346‎ Talk:Fusel alcohol ‎ →‎WikiProject Food and drink Tagging
• 01:3201:32, 30 November 2008 diff hist −102‎ Mandelic acid ‎ →‎External Links: rm advertising

29 November 2008

• 18:3018:30, 29 November 2008 diff hist +241‎ Velvet painting ‎No edit summary
• 18:2718:27, 29 November 2008 diff hist −8‎ Velvet painting ‎ saying it was "the Florence" without any explanation of why Florence would have a relevant reputation, is unnecessarily confusing

28 November 2008

• 15:0315:03, 28 November 2008 diff hist −54‎ Penta Water ‎ →‎Mainstream science: add disclaimers, remove unsalvageable POV assertion

26 November 2008

• 21:1221:12, 26 November 2008 diff hist −141‎ Avonite ‎ →‎External links: purely commercial link, fails guidelines