User contributions for 205.209.24.211

2 January 2023

• 22:1822:18, 2 January 2023 diff hist −12‎ World's fair ‎ →‎Current and upcoming expositions Tag: Manual revert
• 22:1722:17, 2 January 2023 diff hist +12‎ World's fair ‎ →‎2023 Buenos Aires: Make it clearer for the reader that this event has been cancelled. Otherwise, one has to read deep into the paragraph to realize that we've known since October 2020 that it's not proceeding. Tag: Reverted

23 August 2022

• 21:5721:57, 23 August 2022 diff hist +3‎ Moon (2009 film) ‎ →‎Box office: You'd have to go back to the beginning of the article to understand that "domestic" means UK. I'm saving the reader the confusion, as most "western" movies are US films, not UK. Tag: Visual edit

23 March 2022

• 23:0923:09, 23 March 2022 diff hist +18‎ Chris Kyle ‎ This article states that Routh was diagnosed with Schizophrenia, but for some reason that pertinent info was omitted from the opening paragraph. I'm a former VA psychiatrist, and PTSD would not generally make Routh kill someone. Schizophrenia might. Tag: Reverted

15 March 2022

• 13:4413:44, 15 March 2022 diff hist −3‎ Aloha (2015 film) ‎ →‎Plot: It wasn't clear whether "his" in that sentence referred to Woody or to Gilcrest.

2 December 2021

• 13:5913:59, 2 December 2021 diff hist +8‎ Afrikaners ‎ I assure you that few readers will know where Calicut is. Therefore, it helps to note we are talking about India.

15 July 2021

• 22:4022:40, 15 July 2021 diff hist +15‎ Philippines national football team ‎ →‎Team image Tag: Reverted

26 April 2021

• 23:0923:09, 26 April 2021 diff hist +1‎ Austin, Texas ‎ →‎Demographics: New 2020 Census Data Came out today via Bloomberg News Tag: Reverted
• 23:0723:07, 26 April 2021 diff hist +1‎ Austin, Texas ‎ New 2020 census date just came out per Bloomberg News today Tag: Reverted

22 February 2021

• 23:3523:35, 22 February 2021 diff hist +5‎ 1997–98 Chicago Bulls season ‎ confusing wording corrected. "Last year's" in this case is vague.

4 October 2020

• 22:2222:22, 4 October 2020 diff hist +5‎ Åland War ‎ clarification of confusing sentence.

25 September 2020

• 20:3820:38, 25 September 2020 diff hist +2‎ The Princess Diaries (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Seems like a new paragraph, no? It's a completely different topic. I'm trying to improve readability. Tag: Visual edit

7 November 2018

• 00:1400:14, 7 November 2018 diff hist +2‎ Top Chef Junior ‎ →‎Elimination table Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 October 2018

• 19:2719:27, 22 October 2018 diff hist +1‎ Apple I ‎ →‎History

18 September 2018

• 20:1320:13, 18 September 2018 diff hist +6‎ Sa Pa (ward) ‎ →‎History

10 September 2018

• 00:5700:57, 10 September 2018 diff hist +12‎ Dejima ‎ →‎History
• 00:5600:56, 10 September 2018 diff hist +8‎ Dejima ‎ →‎History

30 July 2018

• 18:4018:40, 30 July 2018 diff hist −9‎ Turkish invasion of Cyprus ‎ →‎United States arms embargo on Turkey and Republic of Cyprus

30 May 2018

• 10:2910:29, 30 May 2018 diff hist +23‎ Talk:2018 FIFA World Cup ‎No edit summary
• 10:2810:28, 30 May 2018 diff hist +593‎ Talk:2018 FIFA World Cup ‎No edit summary

21 May 2018

• 15:2515:25, 21 May 2018 diff hist +117‎ Talk:San Jose–San Francisco–Oakland, CA Combined Statistical Area ‎ →‎Name of CSA
• 15:2415:24, 21 May 2018 diff hist +187‎ Talk:San Jose–San Francisco–Oakland, CA Combined Statistical Area ‎ →‎Name of CSA: new section

22 March 2018

• 09:4409:44, 22 March 2018 diff hist +16‎ Antipodes Islands ‎No edit summary
• 09:4109:41, 22 March 2018 diff hist +263‎ Talk:Campbell Island, New Zealand ‎ Thanks

8 October 2017

• 19:3319:33, 8 October 2017 diff hist −1‎ Hericium erinaceus ‎ →‎Alternative names: My wife is Korean, and literally, it is "deer hip" not "deer tail".

7 October 2017

• 22:5122:51, 7 October 2017 diff hist +12‎ Air Wales ‎ The main question the reader wants to know is: Is there currently an Air Wales? One has to read three paragraphs to find the answer.
• 15:3915:39, 7 October 2017 diff hist −1,293‎ User talk:Name goes here ‎ Thanks

5 October 2017

• 00:1900:19, 5 October 2017 diff hist +647‎ User talk:Name goes here ‎ You're the boss. I just live in your world.

4 October 2017

• 23:4523:45, 4 October 2017 diff hist +6‎ Tetilla cheese ‎ Gotta put the type of cheese (cow) up front, rather than burying it in the 2nd paragraph. Tag: Visual edit

7 September 2017

• 01:1701:17, 7 September 2017 diff hist +122‎ Manufacture of cheddar cheese ‎ →‎Cheddaring
• 00:5100:51, 7 September 2017 diff hist +1‎ Annatto ‎ →‎Industrial food coloring

6 September 2017

• 19:0619:06, 6 September 2017 diff hist +13‎ Gruyère cheese ‎ →‎Uses: clarification, since Vacherin makes 2 cheeses, and the less common is the one referred to here.

9 August 2017

• 21:3621:36, 9 August 2017 diff hist −15‎ Hanoi ‎ Fixed English typos Tag: Visual edit

20 July 2017

• 20:3720:37, 20 July 2017 diff hist +1‎ Area codes 760 and 442 ‎No edit summary
• 13:1713:17, 20 July 2017 diff hist +416‎ Talk:Darien scheme ‎ →‎Untitled: I don't think citing some Ohio woman's mere Master's thesis is appropriate. Master's theses are a dime a dozen. I could write one on aliens living among us. Doesn't make it true.
• 13:1113:11, 20 July 2017 diff hist +311‎ Talk:Darien scheme ‎ →‎Subscriptions -- a better term?

19 July 2017

• 16:0316:03, 19 July 2017 diff hist +6‎ Ann Curry ‎No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 00:4400:44, 19 July 2017 diff hist +126‎ Kissy Suzuki ‎ Who cares whether someone other than Ian Fleming wrote that Kissy dies of ovarian cancer in some fan fiction published 30 years later?! I'm correcting the misperception that Fleming wrote that.