User contributions for 203.19.70.162

14 April 2021

• 02:1802:18, 14 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ Nothofagus ‎ →‎Distribution

16 August 2014

• 20:5320:53, 16 August 2014 diff hist +4‎ John Juanda ‎ MOS
• 20:5320:53, 16 August 2014 diff hist −7‎ John Juanda ‎ objective
• 20:4220:42, 16 August 2014 diff hist −21‎ PokerStars ‎ Undid revision 621529952 by 2005 (talk) don't revert for no reason
• 11:5011:50, 16 August 2014 diff hist −136‎ Nellie Bly ‎ certainly completely unchaperoned because she was not a young person at a social event being accompanied by an adult. also encyclopaedic tone is preferred to copying biased material
• 11:4711:47, 16 August 2014 diff hist −134‎ Around the World in Seventy-Two Days ‎ →‎Homecoming: rm verbatim copying, you have to write things in your own words in an encyclopaedic tone. also rm "unchaperoned" sentence, very bad choice of word, and no explanation given for why it was "almost" anyway
• 11:4411:44, 16 August 2014 diff hist −7‎ Around the World in Seventy-Two Days ‎ →‎Journey: rm pointless word
• 11:4311:43, 16 August 2014 diff hist −240‎ Around the World in Seventy-Two Days ‎ less clunky and cluttered lead, and "a year later" clearly contradicts "with two days notice"
• 11:3611:36, 16 August 2014 diff hist −2‎ Willy Wonka ‎ totally pointless brackets
• 11:3511:35, 16 August 2014 diff hist −14‎ Fast radio burst ‎ →‎Lorimer burst: using two words instead of one like this is really, really poor writing.
• 11:3011:30, 16 August 2014 diff hist −21‎ PokerStars ‎ less promotional, more factual
• 09:5709:57, 16 August 2014 diff hist +3‎ Clement Vallandigham ‎ →‎Death: people seem to love putting things in needless brackets and quotes. And the kind of grammatical error that results in meaningless attributions is increasingly widespread as people try to fewer words than are needed to express points
• 09:2309:23, 16 August 2014 diff hist −210‎ Campbell Island, New Zealand ‎ Quoting this series of letters and number is spectacularly boring. state the facts clearly.
• 09:0309:03, 16 August 2014 diff hist −35‎ Campbell Island, New Zealand ‎ not an extreme point of earth so link is inappropriate
• 04:3004:30, 16 August 2014 diff hist 0‎ Arapaima ‎ →‎Anatomy and morphology: citations obviously go after facts, not before
• 04:3004:30, 16 August 2014 diff hist −15‎ Neist Point ‎No edit summary
• 04:1504:15, 16 August 2014 diff hist +70‎ Messier 82 ‎ best to make sense. explain what is meant by prototype rather than just sticking it in the middle of the sentence with a citation to further interrupt things

9 August 2014

• 13:4413:44, 9 August 2014 diff hist +188‎ Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents ‎ →‎Extreme personal attack
• 13:4313:43, 9 August 2014 diff hist −32‎ Argentine Military Cemetery ‎ Undid revision 620503856 by Kahastok (talk) nothing of sense has been written on the talk page.
• 13:4213:42, 9 August 2014 diff hist +289‎ Talk:Argentine Military Cemetery ‎ →‎Heads Up Suggestion
• 13:4013:40, 9 August 2014 diff hist −706‎ User talk:203.19.70.162 ‎ rm personal attack
• 13:4013:40, 9 August 2014 diff hist +243‎ Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents ‎ →‎Extreme personal attack
• 13:3613:36, 9 August 2014 diff hist +207‎ Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents ‎ →‎Extreme personal attack
• 13:2813:28, 9 August 2014 diff hist +253‎ Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents ‎ →‎Extreme personal attack
• 13:1913:19, 9 August 2014 diff hist +254‎ User talk:Wee Curry Monster ‎No edit summary
• 13:1813:18, 9 August 2014 diff hist +364‎ Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents ‎ →‎Extreme personal attack: new section
• 13:1613:16, 9 August 2014 diff hist −32‎ Argentine Military Cemetery ‎ Undid revision 620502614 by Wee Curry Monster (talk) the fact which is cited is still present. the wording was ridiculous.
• 13:1213:12, 9 August 2014 diff hist −32‎ Argentine Military Cemetery ‎ Undid revision 620501753 by Wee Curry Monster (talk) no explanation given for revert
• 13:0813:08, 9 August 2014 diff hist −15‎ Payne Stewart ‎ "only" has little meaning in this context. also rm pov
• 12:5512:55, 9 August 2014 diff hist −59‎ Guilty (Awake) ‎ too many "quotes", and two pieces of awful writing removed
• 12:4212:42, 9 August 2014 diff hist −1,004‎ List of deadliest aircraft accidents and incidents ‎ way too much relevant text removed from the article; when you begin with three notes and even the notes section begins with a note, you know you're going too far. Placed relevant material into the article text, removed redundant duplications
• 12:3612:36, 9 August 2014 diff hist −32‎ Argentine Military Cemetery ‎ what nonsense. political motivation is as clearly expressed now as before. what is removed is the implication that they were somehow being crafty devils and cunningly "knew" something that the British had inexplicably overlooked
• 12:2312:23, 9 August 2014 diff hist −5‎ Itavia Flight 870 ‎ pointless to interrupt the very first sentence of the article after precisely nothing has been established. better to put this information somewhere sensible, like in the text
• 12:1212:12, 9 August 2014 diff hist −19‎ LOT Polish Airlines Flight 5055 ‎ →‎Passengers and crew: grammar; no need to write like a tabloid article; and rewrote sentence to avoid massive interruption containing another interruption.
• 09:4709:47, 9 August 2014 diff hist −33‎ Laura Innes ‎ subjective -> objective
• 09:3409:34, 9 August 2014 diff hist −61‎ Argentine Military Cemetery ‎ rm spam link
• 09:3009:30, 9 August 2014 diff hist −32‎ Argentine Military Cemetery ‎ (edit summary removed)
• 09:2809:28, 9 August 2014 diff hist −42‎ Alison Lohman ‎ perhaps, or perhaps not. it's simple enough to just describe the objective facts
• 03:0503:05, 9 August 2014 diff hist −31‎ Laura Allen ‎ rm pov and peacock words
• 02:5602:56, 9 August 2014 diff hist −6‎ Vitaly Kaloyev ‎ →‎Murder of Peter Nielsen and aftermath: no reason at all for this to be bolded
• 02:5502:55, 9 August 2014 diff hist −4‎ Vitaly Kaloyev ‎No edit summary
• 02:5402:54, 9 August 2014 diff hist −73‎ Vitaly Kaloyev ‎ illogically ordered and somewhat repetitive intro rewritten
• 02:5002:50, 9 August 2014 diff hist +37‎ Krist Novoselic ‎ rm subjective claim, and just saying Nirvana "ended" seems inadequate. brief details added
• 02:4802:48, 9 August 2014 diff hist −20‎ Emilie de Ravin ‎ entirely subjective
• 02:2202:22, 9 August 2014 diff hist −35‎ Steve Harris (actor) ‎ subjective -> objective
• 00:1100:11, 9 August 2014 diff hist −427‎ René Higuita ‎ peacock words, badly written sentences, unencyclopaedic tone

8 August 2014

• 22:5722:57, 8 August 2014 diff hist −34‎ Stephen Root ‎ sub
• 22:3022:30, 8 August 2014 diff hist −12‎ Ryan Dunn ‎ rm pov
• 22:2722:27, 8 August 2014 diff hist −79‎ Paul Hogan ‎ subjective -> objective
• 22:2522:25, 8 August 2014 diff hist −28‎ Kevin Weisman ‎ never heard of that one. rm subjective claim