User contributions for 200.83.84.155

23 May 2015

• 18:0418:04, 23 May 2015 diff hist +240‎ User talk:Drmies ‎ →‎Disappointing: new section
• 18:0418:04, 23 May 2015 diff hist +823‎ User talk:Kww ‎ →‎How things will go: new section

20 May 2015

• 11:4111:41, 20 May 2015 diff hist +396‎ User talk:200.83.84.155 ‎No edit summary
• 04:0604:06, 20 May 2015 diff hist +380‎ User talk:200.83.84.155 ‎ →‎May 2015
• 03:4503:45, 20 May 2015 diff hist −1,872‎ User talk:200.83.84.155 ‎ rm trolling
• 03:4503:45, 20 May 2015 diff hist −303‎ The Holocaust in Poland ‎ (edit summary removed)
• 03:3303:33, 20 May 2015 diff hist +493‎ Talk:The Holocaust in Poland ‎ →‎Problems: new section
• 03:2603:26, 20 May 2015 diff hist −84‎ The Holocaust in Poland ‎ →‎Role of national minorities: bibliographic information goes in the citation, not in the text. "wrote" and "replied" as was used here is not normal English.
• 03:2403:24, 20 May 2015 diff hist −210‎ The Holocaust in Poland ‎ don't revert for no reason. see WP:BEGIN and WP:BOLDTITLE. "heroic", in this context, is biased.
• 03:2303:23, 20 May 2015 diff hist −9‎ The Holocaust in Poland ‎ let's not write as if we know or have an opinion on how many individuals are deserving. also let's not use this bizarre use of "wrote" as if it means "according to".
• 02:2702:27, 20 May 2015 diff hist −210‎ The Holocaust in Poland ‎ don't revert for no reason. see WP:BEGIN and WP:BOLDTITLE, and yes, describing individuals as heroic is about as obviously non-neutral as it gets
• 01:2401:24, 20 May 2015 diff hist −210‎ The Holocaust in Poland ‎ article should start by defining its scope. a first paragraph about a broader topic is not appropriate. see WP:BEGIN also, the bolded article title should not contain links. see WP:BOLDTITLE. and rm pov.

19 May 2015

• 02:2402:24, 19 May 2015 diff hist −55‎ Jeremy Bamber ‎ rm spam
• 02:0502:05, 19 May 2015 diff hist −275‎ Democratic Unionist Party ‎ →‎Robinson leadership: misuse of capitals, misspelling, inappropriate "it is thought", undefined acronym and wrong link syntax all corrected
• 02:0102:01, 19 May 2015 diff hist +101‎ Ulster Unionist Party ‎ →‎2005 General Election: trying to say too much in too few words.
• 01:5301:53, 19 May 2015 diff hist −60‎ Ulster Unionist Party ‎ →‎The Trimble Leadership: rm uncited claim needlessly interrupting a sentence, misuse of capitalisation and titles, and pov
• 01:4701:47, 19 May 2015 diff hist −92‎ Democratic Unionist Party ‎ →‎Post-troubles: rm redundant text and image, corrected a lot of misuse of capital letters, used one name for the 1998 agreement instead of two.
• 01:2601:26, 19 May 2015 diff hist −87‎ Torus ‎ rm lots of unnecessary bolding which contravenes the MOS, and a link to another wikipedia article masquerading as a citation.
• 01:2601:26, 19 May 2015 diff hist +56‎ Torus ‎ well ok, if you really prefer that...
• 00:5100:51, 19 May 2015 diff hist −232‎ Torus ‎ →‎Geometry: this diagram is misleading. the purple line is in the wrong place, appearing at the edge of the torus where it should be in its centre.

17 May 2015

• 19:2419:24, 17 May 2015 diff hist −410‎ 2011 Oldham East and Saddleworth by-election ‎ a discussion of an arbitrary number and how it ranks if you order all by elections by the completely arbitrary number is really not interesting at all.
• 14:5214:52, 17 May 2015 diff hist −39‎ Merkén ‎ →‎See also: interwiki link already present
• 11:0811:08, 17 May 2015 diff hist −15‎ Conrad Anker ‎ peacockery
• 11:0811:08, 17 May 2015 diff hist −1‎ Wilfred Mott ‎ citations after facts, not before or in the middle
• 09:5009:50, 17 May 2015 diff hist −184‎ The Raven That Refused to Sing (And Other Stories) ‎ (edit summary removed)
• 00:4200:42, 17 May 2015 diff hist −619‎ The Fog Warning ‎ consensus is determined on talk pages. Trying to override that mechanism with hidden messages like this is entirely inappropriate. also, rm spammy tone. link is there for visitors to follow if they want to. instructions to do so are inappropriate

16 May 2015

• 23:5723:57, 16 May 2015 diff hist −184‎ The Raven That Refused to Sing (And Other Stories) ‎ copying and pasting text instead of using your own words is not the point of Wikipedia.
• 21:3321:33, 16 May 2015 diff hist −8‎ Kenwood Chef ‎ extreme peacockery
• 16:5616:56, 16 May 2015 diff hist 0‎ 15 February 2003 anti-war protests ‎ incorrect capitalisation, and put citations after facts, not in the middle of them.
• 03:4403:44, 16 May 2015 diff hist −335‎ Brighton Pavilion (UK Parliament constituency) ‎ →‎Constituency history and profile: better writing
• 03:2603:26, 16 May 2015 diff hist +11‎ Maipo River ‎ rm pov and bad writing
• 03:1803:18, 16 May 2015 diff hist +115‎ 1997 Winchester by-election ‎ more useful details in lead; additional info elsewhere
• 03:1503:15, 16 May 2015 diff hist −48‎ Santiago Metropolitan Cathedral ‎ inappropriate easter egg link

14 May 2015

• 01:5901:59, 14 May 2015 diff hist −32‎ Scottish Parliament Building ‎ none of these things are really unique
• 01:5601:56, 14 May 2015 diff hist +8‎ Donald Dewar ‎ →‎Legacy: citation needed
• 01:5501:55, 14 May 2015 diff hist −11‎ Donald Dewar ‎ →‎Legacy: if you're a scottish politics nerd then maybe. otherwise, no
• 01:5401:54, 14 May 2015 diff hist −413‎ List of first ministers of Scotland ‎ →‎Living Former First Ministers: all of this information is already in the table above Tag: section blanking
• 01:5301:53, 14 May 2015 diff hist +376‎ Donald Dewar ‎ →‎Death and funeral: no apparent reason for the quote to be presented out of context, and mentioned his will here.
• 01:4701:47, 14 May 2015 diff hist −1,388‎ Donald Dewar ‎ also not controversies. one is barely even relevant to Donald Dewar. Tag: section blanking
• 01:4401:44, 14 May 2015 diff hist −527‎ Donald Dewar ‎ →‎Controversies: not a controversy

13 May 2015

• 11:4511:45, 13 May 2015 diff hist +8‎ 1981 Warrington by-election ‎ rm pov and rewrote garbled sentence
• 11:3711:37, 13 May 2015 diff hist 0‎ SDP–Liberal Alliance ‎ citations after facts, not before
• 11:3611:36, 13 May 2015 diff hist −9‎ SDP–Liberal Alliance ‎ rm pov
• 03:2403:24, 13 May 2015 diff hist 0‎ Apoquindo Waterfall ‎ citations go after facts, not before
• 03:2303:23, 13 May 2015 diff hist −2,416‎ Cerro Provincia ‎ →‎Attempting a summit: Wikipedia is not a guide book. rm unencyclopaedic text.
• 03:1303:13, 13 May 2015 diff hist +7‎ Santiago ‎ →‎Natural disasters: wrong plate
• 03:1003:10, 13 May 2015 diff hist −857‎ Santiago ‎ →‎Natural Disasters: rm swathes of pov and awful writing

12 May 2015

• 03:0203:02, 12 May 2015 diff hist −26‎ Stanley Johnson (writer) ‎ →‎Work and interests: rm spam link
• 03:0103:01, 12 May 2015 diff hist −171‎ Stanley Johnson (writer) ‎ a book written by him plainly does not verify that claim

11 May 2015

• 02:2602:26, 11 May 2015 diff hist 0‎ Parliament of the United Kingdom ‎ misplaced citation