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15 December 2021
- 00:0700:07, 15 December 2021 diff hist +1,595 The Unforgivable Publicly revised with notes in an attempt to provide pointers on increasing the quality of syntax, structure, expression and information provided by the written content Tag: Reverted
14 December 2021
- 23:1323:13, 14 December 2021 diff hist +531 User talk:MaxnaCarta Dispute over The_Unforgivable entry
- 22:5722:57, 14 December 2021 diff hist −2,317 The Unforgivable The recent plot edit was remiss in pointing out that the father of Ruth and Katie passed away through suicide. It also does not clarify the point of view of the statement "as a sister who is a convicted murderer can offer her nothing" is in fact from the point of view of the characters not the author of the page edits. A simple addition of "in their view" would resolve this issue which such a run on sentence can cause. As such, I am re-implementing the previous edit with some Op.ed. pointers Tags: Reverted Visual edit
13 December 2021
- 14:0114:01, 13 December 2021 diff hist +1,806 The Unforgivable Editorial notes, pointers and addendums to plot section Tag: Reverted
12 December 2021
- 10:0210:02, 12 December 2021 diff hist +1,161 The Unforgivable Expanded plot Tags: Reverted Visual edit
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