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14 September 2015
- 13:4013:40, 14 September 2015 diff hist −86 HeLa rm MOS violations, misuse of brackets, and lifting of text from source
- 13:3613:36, 14 September 2015 diff hist −152 Sabine Lisicki →2009: Breakthrough year: citations go after facts, and a link to her twitter feed is not sufficient here
- 13:3413:34, 14 September 2015 diff hist −490 Llanfairpwllgwyngyll →In popular culture: rm spam, cruft and hyperbole
- 13:3313:33, 14 September 2015 diff hist −102 Instinctive drowning response copying and pasting text from sources is not acceptable. we use our own words.
- 13:3113:31, 14 September 2015 diff hist −2 Lift (force) →False explanation based on equal transit-time: the fact that it is incorrect is not an inconsequential aside, so what possible reason could there be for putting it in brackets?
- 13:2713:27, 14 September 2015 diff hist −5 Dog anatomy →Touch: this is not the 1920s. we do not pretend that women don't exist.
- 13:2513:25, 14 September 2015 diff hist −5 Dog anatomy →Smell: we write our own words. copying and pasting from a source in this way is never acceptable. also corrected grammar
- 13:2413:24, 14 September 2015 diff hist −3 2006 Wimbledon Championships →Streaker incident: better writing
- 13:2213:22, 14 September 2015 diff hist −96 2006 Wimbledon Championships disappointing for americans, maybe.
- 13:1913:19, 14 September 2015 diff hist −16 Tap water one way of saying things is better than two
- 13:1913:19, 14 September 2015 diff hist −24 Richard Parks incorrect capitalisation and bolding
- 13:1713:17, 14 September 2015 diff hist −25 John Roll link clarity
- 13:1613:16, 14 September 2015 diff hist −43 Richard Parks →737 Challenge and other Expeditions: everest is not a pole, and a reference was in the wrong place. they go after facts, not in the middle of them or before them.
- 13:1413:14, 14 September 2015 diff hist 0 Harriet Harman →Loyalty: basic error. you're not citing the fact that the sunday times reported something. you're citing what it was that they reported. interrupting a sentence to put a citation in the wrong place is very bad writing