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19 June 2024
- 03:5503:55, 19 June 2024 diff hist +264 User talk:ReadItAlready →iPad Pro article: Reply Tag: Reply
- 03:5403:54, 19 June 2024 diff hist +362 User talk:ReadItAlready →iPad Pro article: Reply Tag: Reply
- 03:5303:53, 19 June 2024 diff hist +262 User talk:ReadItAlready →iPad Pro article: Reply Tag: Reply
- 03:5103:51, 19 June 2024 diff hist −65 IPad Pro Various grammatical fixes, changed chip to processor to maintain consistency everywhere, removed any ambiguous language I could find. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4203:42, 19 June 2024 diff hist +71 IPad Pro Cleaned up some grammar, fixed some cut off generational references, and removed comma splices. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3403:34, 19 June 2024 diff hist +355 User talk:ReadItAlready →iPad Pro article: new section Tag: New topic
- 03:3103:31, 19 June 2024 diff hist +157 User talk:174.95.92.108 →Welcome!: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 03:3003:30, 19 June 2024 diff hist +78 Linux Possibly controversial change, but we should start off stating Linux is a open-source unix like kernel that also happens to have its name used as a generic catch all for all Linux based Unix like operating systems. If we call it a family of operating systems before anything else, there’s a chance readers could become confused. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2303:23, 19 June 2024 diff hist +193 IPad Pro Added details about the seventh generation iPad Pro’s display and cleared up some confusing language. No idea how to add a reference, but this is the one I have if anyone could help me add it: https://www.apple.com/ipad-pro/ Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1303:13, 19 June 2024 diff hist −8 IPad Pro (6th generation) At -> of, little readability issues and simplified the language used. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0903:09, 19 June 2024 diff hist −92 IPad Pro (6th generation) I missed the part where it says that it describes itself as the 4th generation of 13” iPad Pros. It calls its self the 6th generation. It may be the fourth 13” model but it’s the sixth generation. Saying it refers to itself as the 4th generation will only cause confusion. Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0703:07, 19 June 2024 diff hist −373 IPad Pro (6th generation) Cleared up some ambitious language and added some missing details in regards to what makes this iPad “greener”. Also removed an irrelevant remark about the Magic Keyboard from “Reception”. The Magic Keyboard isn’t part of the iPad. Tags: references removed Visual edit