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18 November 2012

• 13:4513:45, 18 November 2012 diff hist −56‎ Fallacy ‎ →‎Straw man
• 13:4513:45, 18 November 2012 diff hist +56‎ Fallacy ‎ →‎Straw man

17 November 2012

• 08:1808:18, 17 November 2012 diff hist +8‎ Enteric nervous system ‎ →‎Complexity

15 November 2012

• 05:5105:51, 15 November 2012 diff hist −8‎ Cappuccino ‎No edit summary
• 05:5105:51, 15 November 2012 diff hist −235‎ Cappuccino ‎ The etymology was addressed twice in the opening paragraph.
• 05:4905:49, 15 November 2012 diff hist +97‎ Cappuccino ‎No edit summary

14 November 2012

• 07:0607:06, 14 November 2012 diff hist −72‎ Patience Worth ‎ →‎The Appearance of Patience Worth: The style was overly expansive.

13 November 2012

• 22:4622:46, 13 November 2012 diff hist −523‎ Passé composé ‎No edit summary
• 11:2211:22, 13 November 2012 diff hist +241‎ B vitamins ‎ →‎B vitamin sources: While done in a spirit of munificent divulgence, the shotgunning of anti-energy drink statements disrupts the content, flow, and spirit of the article.
• 11:1711:17, 13 November 2012 diff hist −292‎ B vitamins ‎ →‎B vitamin sources
• 11:1211:12, 13 November 2012 diff hist −42‎ B vitamins ‎ This sentence was extremely colloquial.

31 October 2012

• 17:1217:12, 31 October 2012 diff hist −8‎ Thomas Babington Macaulay ‎ →‎Early life: Moved by Homer's poetry while reading the Aeneid? The way this sentence was constructed it would have imparted to the ignorant that Homer wrote the Aeneid.

28 October 2012

• 05:2105:21, 28 October 2012 diff hist +9‎ In hoc signo vinces ‎No edit summary

27 October 2012

• 21:1921:19, 27 October 2012 diff hist +27‎ New Formalism ‎ →‎Current activity
• 21:1621:16, 27 October 2012 diff hist 0‎ New Formalism ‎ →‎Current activity: The colon was used incorrectly.
• 21:1621:16, 27 October 2012 diff hist +9‎ New Formalism ‎ →‎Current activity: "e.g." was used incorrectly.

26 October 2012

• 17:2417:24, 26 October 2012 diff hist −2‎ Auto-da-Fé (novel) ‎ →‎Plot and themes: the use of 'pyrrhic,' though distantly applicable, was overly obscure. editorial comments on the translation are unencyclopedic. "hilarious debunking," likewise, does not belong in the text of the article.
• 01:0901:09, 26 October 2012 diff hist −12‎ Claustrum ‎ →‎Function: Questioning this sentence, which has been removed, as it seems incompatible with the history of studies in human anatomy: "Also, until recently, there has not been much of a reason to study the claustrum."

21 October 2012

• 10:4810:48, 21 October 2012 diff hist −13‎ Macron (diacritic) ‎ →‎Syllable weight: Characterizing the "best" dictionaries based on their practices is editorial, prescriptive and unencyclopedic. The word has been removed.
• 07:0407:04, 21 October 2012 diff hist +186‎ Piano Sonata No. 11 (Mozart) ‎ A note on Mozart's personal intitulation of this piece.

19 October 2012

• 02:2602:26, 19 October 2012 diff hist −4‎ Piano Concerto No. 14 (Mozart) ‎ →‎Allegro vivace: Replacing this terrible, redundant writing: "unusual for the opening movement of a piano concerto - of Mozart's piano concertos"

18 October 2012

• 05:2205:22, 18 October 2012 diff hist +763‎ Talk:Ad hominem ‎ →‎Always Negative?: new section

12 October 2012

• 02:2702:27, 12 October 2012 diff hist +8‎ Theanine ‎ →‎Effects on the brain

17 September 2012

• 05:0005:00, 17 September 2012 diff hist −259‎ Somerset ‎ Removed obvious vandalism.

7 September 2012

• 11:1111:11, 7 September 2012 diff hist 0‎ The History of Rome (Mommsen) ‎No edit summary
• 01:1501:15, 7 September 2012 diff hist +531‎ The History of Rome (Mommsen) ‎ This is to clarify that the Nobel Prize for Literature is, using a simple tally, awarded more than 90% of the time a lifetime's body of work, not for a single work in particular. I have included an extract from the citation to make this clear.

1 September 2012

• 23:1023:10, 1 September 2012 diff hist +8‎ Gut microbiota ‎ I see this claim about intestinal flora providing the host with vitamin K in various respectable-looking publications, so it shouldn't be too hard to find solid sources to support this information.

19 August 2012

• 20:3120:31, 19 August 2012 diff hist −1‎ Digestion ‎ →‎Stomach: 'through' ending a sentence looks like a preposition in search of an object

13 August 2012

• 12:0312:03, 13 August 2012 diff hist +10‎ Ezra Pound ‎ →‎Arrest for treason: writing HQ for "headquarters

1 August 2012

• 18:1718:17, 1 August 2012 diff hist +1‎ Live from Golgotha: The Gospel According to Gore Vidal ‎ Improperly punctuated.
• 17:2717:27, 1 August 2012 diff hist +4‎ Polydorus of Troy ‎ →‎In Hecuba and Metamorphoses: "summarized in essence" was redundant; however ovid doesn't "summarize" things in his poem either. amended to "[forms] an episode"

17 July 2012

• 22:1522:15, 17 July 2012 diff hist −2‎ Steve Doocy ‎ →‎Career

14 July 2012

• 22:1422:14, 14 July 2012 diff hist −8‎ August Strindberg ‎ AMended statement that Strindberg's carrer lasted "74" decades, to "four"," in accordance with the information present in thearticle.
• 20:4820:48, 14 July 2012 diff hist +8‎ Frederic Remington ‎ →‎Style and influence: This incredibly broad claim requires reliable citations.
• 13:3713:37, 14 July 2012 diff hist +8‎ Ergosterol ‎ →‎Vitamin D2 precursor
• 13:3613:36, 14 July 2012 diff hist +89‎ Ergosterol ‎ →‎Vitamin D2 precursor

12 July 2012

• 06:3106:31, 12 July 2012 diff hist +557‎ Talk:MF Global ‎ →‎Created Missing Funds Subsection

2 July 2012

• 04:2304:23, 2 July 2012 diff hist −5‎ Internet of things ‎ Removing the last use of "your," i.e., the second person.
• 04:2204:22, 2 July 2012 diff hist +70‎ Internet of things ‎ I have edited the second the paragraph in accordance with numerous points made on the talk page, which highlight the missionary zeal of the lead paragraph. It is now balanced and encyclopedic.

30 June 2012

• 06:3706:37, 30 June 2012 diff hist +12‎ Leonardo Maugeri ‎No edit summary

29 April 2012

• 07:2607:26, 29 April 2012 diff hist +8‎ Biotin ‎ →‎General overview

26 April 2012

• 02:0502:05, 26 April 2012 diff hist +283‎ MF Global ‎ →‎Disappearance of customer funds and investigation
• 01:5601:56, 26 April 2012 diff hist +22‎ MF Global ‎ →‎Disappearance of customer funds and investigation
• 01:5401:54, 26 April 2012 diff hist +3‎ MF Global ‎ →‎Disappearance of customer funds and investigation
• 01:5301:53, 26 April 2012 diff hist +454‎ MF Global ‎ →‎Disappearance of customer funds and investigation

25 April 2012

• 09:5609:56, 25 April 2012 diff hist −1‎ MF Global ‎ →‎Disappearance of customer funds and investigation
• 09:5509:55, 25 April 2012 diff hist −1‎ MF Global ‎ →‎Disappearance of customer funds and investigation
• 09:5409:54, 25 April 2012 diff hist +47‎ MF Global ‎ →‎Disappearance of customer funds and investigation
• 09:2409:24, 25 April 2012 diff hist −2‎ MF Global ‎ →‎History
• 09:0209:02, 25 April 2012 diff hist −9‎ MF Global ‎ →‎History: History section had too many stand-alone paragraphs that could be grouped to improve coherence and flow.