User contributions for 172.250.237.36

20 May 2024

• 11:2411:24, 20 May 2024 diff hist +173‎ Draft:First Nation of Ojibwe California ‎ Added a missing citation and removed 'citation needed' flag. current
• 11:0611:06, 20 May 2024 diff hist +193‎ Billy Claiborne ‎ →‎On film: Rewrote several sentences. The science fiction episode of the television show, 'Star Trek', did not portray the crew members as actors playing roles. Thus the character of Chekov did not 'play' Billy Claiborne. current

7 May 2024

• 12:0112:01, 7 May 2024 diff hist +524‎ The One That Got Away (1957 film) ‎ Rewrote, adding links, for succintness. current

3 May 2024

• 12:0512:05, 3 May 2024 diff hist +90‎ Great blue turaco ‎ →‎External links: Adding categories.
• 11:5111:51, 3 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Benty Grange helmet ‎ →‎Excavation: Minor, tense (past).
• 11:4011:40, 3 May 2024 diff hist +3‎ Christiane Amanpour ‎ Minor; grammatical (gender).

30 April 2024

• 12:3912:39, 30 April 2024 diff hist +166‎ N Draft talk:First Nation of Ojibwe California ‎ Adding WikiProject tags (assisted)

26 April 2024

• 15:2415:24, 26 April 2024 diff hist +52‎ Anniversary ‎ →‎Numerical: Added "sextennial," also shortened a few sentences without altering meaning.

25 April 2024

• 16:3916:39, 25 April 2024 diff hist +314‎ Avraham Mordechai Alter ‎ Rewrote several paragraphs, retaining general meaning. Replaced 'Alter' with 'Rebbe Alter' - have respect, editors. Redid a few names, these had their own wiki-pages, with wiki-links, expanded a few sentences. More work to be done here. current

24 April 2024

• 12:2412:24, 24 April 2024 diff hist +64‎ LaDoris Cordell ‎ wording.→‎Education: Wording, Converted some to links. current

18 April 2024

• 09:3909:39, 18 April 2024 diff hist +569‎ Eddie Glaude ‎ Added news item regarding Professor Glaude relinquishing chairmanship, added newest book to bibliography. current
• 09:0609:06, 18 April 2024 diff hist +690‎ Eddie Glaude ‎ Removed ambiguous reference, rewrote several sentences without altering meaning, added new reference from Princeton University website, regarding the history of African American studies department. The Center for African American Studies evolved into a full department. There is no longer a 'center' there - it is now the 'department' of African American Studies, and credit is given to Professor Glaude for helping to create it, according to the web page.

14 April 2024

• 13:0113:01, 14 April 2024 diff hist +4‎ List of Perry Mason episodes ‎ →‎Season 9 (1965–66): Minor edit without changing meaning. Added wikilink, this actor does have a page on Wikipedia. current

11 April 2024

• 00:5800:58, 11 April 2024 diff hist +2‎ Vapor lock ‎ It's not gas - it's vapor. The difference is that vapor can condense, while a substance that is in gaseous state (a gas) cannot condense. Gas is in a different state, it is not the same as vapor; heat & energy are required to convert a liquid into gas, while only enough warmth or simple agitation can cause a liquid to evaporate into a vapor (to vaporize or aerosolize). current

10 April 2024

• 20:3120:31, 10 April 2024 diff hist +283‎ KTM ‎ Correction of mistake that confuses Kronreif (a man's name) with Kraftfahrzeug (meaning powered vehicle). Added clarification with rough translation of KTM to leading sentence. Explaining what KTM stands for should be first. Tag: Reverted
• 18:0618:06, 10 April 2024 diff hist +353‎ Draft:First Nation of Ojibwe California ‎ Adding reference from 500nations.com website, regarding geographical location of the tribal headquarters. Added several categories.

9 April 2024

• 10:1010:10, 9 April 2024 diff hist +1,819‎ Claudine Gay ‎ →‎Early life and education: Rewrote early life/education. Added birthdate, specific place of birth, with references. Added more information from Harvard Crimson and Inaugural Address regarding her family life, names of brother and parents, places of residence. Added several other references, also simplified the syntax. Tag: Visual edit: Switched

7 April 2024

• 12:3112:31, 7 April 2024 diff hist +116‎ The Anderson Tapes ‎ →‎Plot: Correction; 'Jimmy' was not the paraplegic boy (Jimmy was an adult police officer, a member of the police ascent squad led by Sergeant Everson who was portrayed by Garrett Morris). 'Jerry' Bingham was played by Scott Jacoby, who was the paraplegic youth with the ham radio. Entire summary is full of errors, rest of the page also should be re-written. Added link to IMDB and Wikipedia references regarding cast member (playing Jerry Bingham).
• 11:4011:40, 7 April 2024 diff hist +239‎ Draft:First Nation of Ojibwe California ‎ Submitting using AfC-submit-wizard
• 11:2511:25, 7 April 2024 diff hist +2,595‎ N Draft:First Nation of Ojibwe California ‎ -- Draft creation using the WP:Article wizard --Created page to activate the WP:REDLINK that exists on the Ojibwe page, under Ojibwe#Bands heading. Only a stub at this point, based on information mostly from the FNOC Tribe itself, from their website. Tag: Disambiguation links added

29 February 2024

• 19:2919:29, 29 February 2024 diff hist +33‎ Paul Stamets (Star Trek) ‎ Clarified naming of fictional character, the character was named after the actual person & mycologist, Paul Stamets. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 January 2024

• 07:2007:20, 28 January 2024 diff hist +602‎ Illustrated song ‎ Added information regarding 'flip cards' to the description of nickelodeons. Tag: Disambiguation links added

17 January 2024

• 14:2214:22, 17 January 2024 diff hist −1,460‎ Fanny Brice ‎ Cleared up several glaring problems; 1) Later Years given own listing - no longer combined with Television Appearance; 2) Added her only television appearance with reference (it was omitted); 3) Radio show was listed as a television appearance, removed and relocated to the 'Radio' heading; 4) Removed summarizations relating the content of radio broadcasts. Editors, please don't plagiarize. Simply cutting and pasting information from other places is a form of plagiarism.

15 January 2024

• 15:2315:23, 15 January 2024 diff hist +537‎ Fanny Brice ‎ →‎Death: Added place(s) of interment. Her remains were moved in 1999.
• 14:2114:21, 15 January 2024 diff hist +34‎ Fanny Brice ‎ →‎Brice portrayals: Minor change without altering meaning. Adding missing sentence fragment.
• 13:4113:41, 15 January 2024 diff hist +3‎ Kirk Douglas ‎ →‎Style and philosophy of acting: Minor chance without altering meaning. Grammar, context. Providing missing preposition to sentence, replacing unnecessary conjunction.

7 January 2024

• 17:5417:54, 7 January 2024 diff hist +19‎ Sabbatai Zevi ‎ He is best known for his claims to be a messiah, and listed as such in the category in Wikipedia under false messiah. Tag: Visual edit: Switched

3 January 2024

• 10:3910:39, 3 January 2024 diff hist +8‎ Carol M. Swain ‎No edit summary

28 December 2023

• 22:1722:17, 28 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Joseph Mendelssohn ‎ Grammar. Very minor change without altering meaning. 'Eldest' vs 'oldest'. current

12 November 2023

• 21:2721:27, 12 November 2023 diff hist +529‎ Talk:Gary Seitz ‎ →‎Obituary Link?: new section Tag: New topic

30 October 2023

• 14:4714:47, 30 October 2023 diff hist +879‎ Talk:Orange County Cousins Club ‎ →‎This Club Appears to be Defunct: new section current Tag: New topic

29 October 2023

• 16:4116:41, 29 October 2023 diff hist +119‎ Escape Clause ‎ →‎Plot: Added a few wikilinks, changed a few sentences regarding insurance fraud and settlement claims. Edited several points, rewrote several sentences without altering general meaning. Grammar; added elipses and missing period.
• 15:4015:40, 29 October 2023 diff hist +36‎ Taft Union High School ‎ Removed dangling (also dead-end) reference link; added note regarding Dr. Leon Goldman's relationship to Senator Dianne Feinstein (obm), with existing reference. Clarified re-ordering of list of notable students.
• 15:0515:05, 29 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ Taft Union High School ‎ →‎Notable people: Chronology; without changing content.

27 October 2023

• 18:3418:34, 27 October 2023 diff hist +14‎ Operation Mad Ball ‎ →‎Sound Track: Missing period at end of sentence (son of Sammy Davis) with name Jr.. This only appears as a "redundant" period. Even so, added nomenclature of the full word "junior." This avoids confusion.
• 18:1818:18, 27 October 2023 diff hist +1,227‎ Harold Arlen ‎ →‎Marriage and death: Rewrote several portions of this section. Added clarification as to the name of Mr. Samuel Arlen (not 'Arluck') and linked reference to biographical information of this individual. Added new reference to previously un-referenced note regarding adoption (happening before Julius Arlen's demise) while the natural father still lived).

24 October 2023

• 04:0904:09, 24 October 2023 diff hist +264‎ The Beverly Hillbillies ‎ →‎Premise: Added sentence regarding the greed of the urbanized characters contrasted with the innocent lack of guile of the country folk. Tags: Reverted Visual edit: Switched

11 September 2023

• 03:4803:48, 11 September 2023 diff hist +3‎ Good Morning, Vietnam ‎ →‎Soundtrack: Minor; was not an original release, since the recording had been released several times before.

8 September 2023

• 03:0003:00, 8 September 2023 diff hist +3‎ Fairy with Turquoise Hair ‎ Minor edit without changing meaning, grammar.

7 September 2023

• 18:2718:27, 7 September 2023 diff hist +35‎ The Nearness of You ‎ →‎Other versions: Added wikilink to title of song 'Mad Ball', minor change without altering text.

3 September 2023

• 21:2321:23, 3 September 2023 diff hist +1,632‎ Talking Cricket ‎ Added section regarding the Florentine folklore surrounding crickets; also traditional lore throughout Europe, especially during the 19th century - regarding the novella by Dickens, called 'Cricket on the Hearth'.

1 September 2023

• 10:4510:45, 1 September 2023 diff hist +221‎ Talk:Ketchup ‎ →‎Terminology citation does not support statement: Reply Tag: Reply
• 10:4310:43, 1 September 2023 diff hist +359‎ Talk:Ketchup ‎ →‎Terminology citation does not support statement: Reply Tag: Reply

31 August 2023

• 20:0220:02, 31 August 2023 diff hist +258‎ The Nearness of You ‎ →‎Other versions: Updated dead link to Internet Archive version; added another relevant link (perhaps more reliable).
• 19:3919:39, 31 August 2023 diff hist +1,833‎ Operation Mad Ball ‎ Added section on the sound track, information on the title song, information on the sound track L.P., added given name to Captain Paul Lock. Corrected name of Capt. Lock (misspelled as 'Locke') as there seems to have been no 'e' at the end of the name. NOTE: Summary is full of errors & not accurate..
• 15:3315:33, 31 August 2023 diff hist +252‎ Operation Mad Ball ‎ →‎Plot: Added links and details regarding the fluoroscopic image and duodenal ulcer, and Army Nurse Corps.

27 August 2023

• 16:0016:00, 27 August 2023 diff hist +723‎ Candace Owens ‎ Added another credit, from 2018 - referring to founding of 'Blexit'; added three references, describing Brandon Tatum as the co-founder of Blexit.
• 15:4015:40, 27 August 2023 diff hist +120‎ Brandon Tatum ‎ →‎Blexit: Added another reference, more specific link to page describing Brandon Tatum as the co-founder of Blexit; edited title of original reference to 'Blexit Foundation'.

22 August 2023

• 17:4117:41, 22 August 2023 diff hist −7‎ Ferguson unrest ‎ →‎August 2014: Separated two hyperlinks - per format protocol; also removed added text. Representative Chappelle-Nadal was at the time not a US Senator but a member of the Missouri State Senate, in the interest of clarification. The text with the title 'State Senator' inserts confusion. Perhaps 'Missouri State Senator Chapelle-Nadal' would be clearer, but the two links still would have not been separated.
• 16:5716:57, 22 August 2023 diff hist +1,128‎ Talk:Killing of Michael Brown ‎ →‎Ferguson Public Library - Was in Danger of Closing: new section Tag: New topic