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26 January 2014

• 12:5112:51, 26 January 2014 diff hist +6‎ Low fantasy ‎ →‎Critical interpretations

25 January 2014

• 09:5309:53, 25 January 2014 diff hist −458‎ Information access ‎ Actually, its rather POV to link this subject at all with the free software movement - and by implication against proprietary software - without any attribution. Seems at the moment this section is just a plug for that movement, so I'm removing it. Tag: section blanking
• 09:5009:50, 25 January 2014 diff hist −157‎ Information access ‎ →‎Links to free software: "freedom based" quite a weasely and loaded term to state as if a fact. Implies traditional software development is in opposition to "freedom"!
• 09:4609:46, 25 January 2014 diff hist −933‎ Information access ‎ Removed a number of unsourced and rather blatantly POV statements. Also grammar.
• 08:5108:51, 25 January 2014 diff hist +14‎ Emergence ‎ Why just free-market theories? Even theories which put an emphasis on collective decision making or a mixed market with a substantial public sector still trace back to the psychology of the members of the collective or public official for example.

23 January 2014

• 02:2802:28, 23 January 2014 diff hist −26‎ Conformity ‎ This aside is unnecessary since never is the claim made that any of this is definitively "proven" and the lede already mentions the possible negative consequences of conformity. Seems to just be an attempt to sow more doubt about the positive side.
• 02:2202:22, 23 January 2014 diff hist +281‎ Corruption ‎ →‎Legal corruption
• 02:1702:17, 23 January 2014 diff hist −476‎ Corruption ‎ This polemical original research has no place here unless there are reliable sources that have voiced these concerns (then we can quote and cite the sources). I am removing them, one has been tagged with cite needed since 2012 but none has been provided.
• 02:0102:01, 23 January 2014 diff hist −4‎ Corruption ‎ →‎Corruption in different sectors: See last last edit, decided capitalization wasn't quite right. Also removed link to "Judicial corruption" since there is no such article.
• 01:5801:58, 23 January 2014 diff hist −1‎ Corruption ‎ →‎Judiciary Corruption: See last edit description.
• 01:5701:57, 23 January 2014 diff hist −14‎ Corruption ‎ Changed misleading headings. Political corruption is not just legislative: for example if an elected Mayor embezzled public funds that would be political but not legislative. And Police corruption is not the only part of the executive that can be corrupt.
• 00:5200:52, 23 January 2014 diff hist −616‎ Transparency International ‎ One of these is completely OR, and the other is supported by a dead link (and might be OR anyway - what reliable source has made this allegation?). Tag: section blanking

22 January 2014

• 20:2920:29, 22 January 2014 diff hist −29‎ You Can't Read this Book ‎ Removing this template, since my previous edits I have removed the verbatim copying from reviews that used to comprise most of this article which these tone concerns were probably about.
• 20:2620:26, 22 January 2014 diff hist −624‎ You Can't Read this Book ‎ See previous edit.
• 20:2420:24, 22 January 2014 diff hist +882‎ Talk:You Can't Read this Book ‎No edit summary
• 20:2220:22, 22 January 2014 diff hist −9,210‎ You Can't Read this Book ‎ See talk, basically much of this is copied verbatim from reviews with only partial attribution, as well as tone and POV concerns. Most is not an NPOV overview of what reviewers said but rather a highly POV review in its own right, so I'm removing lots.
• 09:0809:08, 22 January 2014 diff hist −138‎ Court of Cassation (France) ‎ →‎Judges and divisions: Aside from being basically irrelevant (and OR), the "oxymoron" snark in this comment is silly. "senior puisne judge" need not be an oxymoron at all, it can be interpreted to mean "among the puisne judges, the senior of them".
• 03:2303:23, 22 January 2014 diff hist +474‎ Talk:Science ‎ →‎Hierarchy of Science image: Law and Economics subdivisions of Sociology?
• 03:0303:03, 22 January 2014 diff hist +399‎ Talk:You Can't Read this Book ‎No edit summary

21 January 2014

• 23:3823:38, 21 January 2014 diff hist −5‎ Talk:Science ‎ →‎Hierarchy of Science image: Law and Economics subdivisions of Sociology?
• 23:3323:33, 21 January 2014 diff hist +26‎ Talk:Science ‎ →‎Hierarchy of Science image: Law and Economics subdivisions of Sociology?
• 23:2023:20, 21 January 2014 diff hist +154‎ Talk:Science ‎ →‎Hierarchy of Science image: Law and Economics subdivisions of Sociology?
• 23:1723:17, 21 January 2014 diff hist +30‎ Talk:Science ‎ →‎Hierarchy of Science image: Law and Economics subdivisions of Sociology?
• 23:1623:16, 21 January 2014 diff hist +2,725‎ Talk:Science ‎No edit summary
• 21:0421:04, 21 January 2014 diff hist +6‎ Feminist sociology ‎No edit summary

16 January 2014

• 06:1806:18, 16 January 2014 diff hist −436‎ Racialism ‎ I've removed these for being POV due to presuming a definitive definition for what a "racialist" is. The article in the lede acknowledge the fact the term is used differently by different people and it is POV to use it in only one way later in the article

14 January 2014

• 23:3623:36, 14 January 2014 diff hist +17‎ Ludonarrative dissonance ‎ NPOV - others have disagreed with this interpretation of Bioshock.

2 January 2014

• 22:3822:38, 2 January 2014 diff hist −4‎ Presidency of the International Criminal Court ‎ Grammar.

1 January 2014

• 21:5021:50, 1 January 2014 diff hist +866‎ Talk:World War I ‎No edit summary
• 21:3421:34, 1 January 2014 diff hist +431‎ Talk:Neocolonialism ‎No edit summary

31 December 2013

• 16:0516:05, 31 December 2013 diff hist +43‎ Hans-Jürgen Papier ‎ This is the title used elsewhere.
• 15:2015:20, 31 December 2013 diff hist −121‎ Unenumerated rights ‎ This seems nonsensical: I see the words "consideration", "extrapolated" but nothing in this phrase being considered or extrapolated. It has no citation to check. If there actually is something being said here someone can reinstate it in clearer English.
• 14:5714:57, 31 December 2013 diff hist −515‎ Unenumerated rights ‎ This is not an "alternative" example to the description given in the first paragraph of the lede: "declaring that they shall not be abridged, or that the former shall not be extended" is the codified form from which the rights are inferred.
• 14:2514:25, 31 December 2013 diff hist +8‎ Associate justice ‎No edit summary

30 December 2013

• 17:3317:33, 30 December 2013 diff hist +7‎ Talk:Loaded language ‎ →‎Lots of Original Research
• 17:3017:30, 30 December 2013 diff hist −57‎ Loaded language ‎ →‎Examples: It appears it is no longer a publication of the YCSG, now being a publication of the MacMillan Center. To avoid confusion I've removed this statement. Additionally, perhaps because of this move, the link used for the citation is dead.
• 17:2417:24, 30 December 2013 diff hist +46‎ Loaded language ‎ →‎Examples: Strictly it was this publication of the Center that published the article.
• 17:1217:12, 30 December 2013 diff hist −677‎ Loaded language ‎ See talk.
• 17:1017:10, 30 December 2013 diff hist +859‎ Talk:Loaded language ‎No edit summary

28 December 2013

• 00:1400:14, 28 December 2013 diff hist −108‎ The Purge (2013 film) ‎ As well as being not really relevant for the lede, this is clearly original research. Indeed, the article on Krypteia points out that actual historians still debate what it actually was, so it should not be compared to the theme of a movie here.

27 December 2013

• 18:5618:56, 27 December 2013 diff hist +702‎ Talk:Neoliberalism ‎ →‎5.4 Corrupted Neoliberalism
• 15:1115:11, 27 December 2013 diff hist 0‎ President of Germany ‎ Grammar.

22 December 2013

• 03:3703:37, 22 December 2013 diff hist +1,793‎ Talk:Parliamentary sovereignty ‎ →‎Finland to be struck from this list of countries

20 December 2013

• 13:2113:21, 20 December 2013 diff hist −116‎ Pen computing ‎ Removed unencyclopedic sentence noting how "surprising" it is to people, an encyclopedia doesn't speculate on how surprised its readers are! Also modified reference to Telautograph - this wasn't really a "tablet".

19 December 2013

• 15:2415:24, 19 December 2013 diff hist −620‎ History of tablet computers ‎ →‎History: See previous edit.
• 15:2315:23, 19 December 2013 diff hist −846‎ History of tablet computers ‎ Removed unencyclopedic sentence noting how "surprising" it is to people, an encyclopedia doesn't speculate on how surprised its readers are! Also removed reference to Telautograph - this wasn't a "tablet".

18 December 2013

• 15:1715:17, 18 December 2013 diff hist −82‎ Charter ‎ This is a specific example contained in the general definition immediately preceding it. The charter of a colony granted rights from the monarch, while the monarch retained ultimate sovereignty.
• 14:4114:41, 18 December 2013 diff hist +680‎ Talk:Feminization of poverty ‎ →‎New Content
• 02:2602:26, 18 December 2013 diff hist +21‎ Talk:Parliamentary sovereignty ‎ →‎Finland to be struck from this list of countries
• 02:2502:25, 18 December 2013 diff hist +297‎ Talk:Parliamentary sovereignty ‎ →‎Finland to be struck from this list of countries