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11 May 2024
- 01:3801:38, 11 May 2024 diff hist +1 Efrim Menuck fixed convoluted language, removed weasel word current
- 00:1700:17, 11 May 2024 diff hist −6 Efrim Menuck fixed punctuation
- 00:1000:10, 11 May 2024 diff hist −10 The Mothman Prophecies (film) removed wordiness current
9 May 2024
- 04:3904:39, 9 May 2024 diff hist +5 Energy–maneuverability theory fixed syntax current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 May 2024
- 03:0503:05, 2 May 2024 diff hist −9 Ron Mark fixed grammar, syntax current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 April 2024
- 04:3704:37, 16 April 2024 diff hist −3 Endorheic basin "allow" is an odd word to use for a lake. they have no concept of permission, being inanimate
13 April 2024
- 02:3502:35, 13 April 2024 diff hist +2 Civil War (film) woke is a weasel word, it requires quote marks
- 02:2402:24, 13 April 2024 diff hist +1 Civil War (film) fixed grammar
- 02:2102:21, 13 April 2024 diff hist −3 Civil War (film) removed weasel word "extremist". ideology is qualitative, not quantitative
- 00:1500:15, 13 April 2024 diff hist −44 Apple Desktop Bus simplified, removed excessive wordiness and clunkiness Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:1300:13, 13 April 2024 diff hist 0 Apple Desktop Bus fixed syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 April 2024
- 03:4303:43, 10 April 2024 diff hist +16 Joaquin Phoenix fixed syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:4003:40, 10 April 2024 diff hist −30 Joaquin Phoenix removed redundancy, fixed clunkiness Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:3603:36, 10 April 2024 diff hist +1 The Village (2004 film) fixed syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:2603:26, 10 April 2024 diff hist −5 Dick, Kerr Ladies F.C. removed redundancy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 April 2024
- 00:3900:39, 9 April 2024 diff hist −1 Jaquie Brown smoothened syntax, removed clunkiness
25 March 2024
- 01:2201:22, 25 March 2024 diff hist −25 Adam Curtis fixed punctuation, removed weasel word
24 March 2024
- 23:3223:32, 24 March 2024 diff hist −6 Advanced Audio Coding "content" is not a neutral word, it implies particular economic frameworks; replaced with "audio"
- 21:3021:30, 24 March 2024 diff hist +2 Anodizing replaced odd use of "grow"
22 March 2024
- 23:2723:27, 22 March 2024 diff hist −17 John Peel replaced odd/excessive use of "begin"
- 23:2423:24, 22 March 2024 diff hist +29 John Peel fixed syntax
- 03:5603:56, 22 March 2024 diff hist +3 National Accident Day (Finland) fixed syntax current
- 02:5002:50, 22 March 2024 diff hist +6 Out Spaced "rarities" is a weasel word. it either exists or it doesn't. it's infinitely copyable