User contributions for 109.76.241.235

26 November 2018

• 02:4702:47, 26 November 2018 diff hist +626‎ Marisa Miller ‎ There's no good reason to remove the infobox from an article. Also it I'm not convinced you've got proper licensing to use those images (I don't believe you are the photographer, none of those images uploaded include Camera metadata). Undid revision 870634432 by GTheFinder (talk) Tag: Undo
• 01:1301:13, 26 November 2018 diff hist +418‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Advertisement: fix. done for today, might do more later.
• 01:0201:02, 26 November 2018 diff hist +943‎ User talk:Mbinebri ‎ →‎Marisa Miller
• 00:4200:42, 26 November 2018 diff hist +2‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ quotemarks
• 00:4200:42, 26 November 2018 diff hist +2,220‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Advertisement
• 00:4000:40, 26 November 2018 diff hist +427‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Reference RIPD interview where she discusses the famous iPod photo, because more than one source better shows it really was famous. Fix another dead link.
• 00:0400:04, 26 November 2018 diff hist +6‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Doh. close ref.

25 November 2018

• 23:3123:31, 25 November 2018 diff hist +350‎ Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Beyond modeling: can't fix dead link but I can add another source which seems to be exactly the same press release. Miller also posted about the campaign.
• 23:1023:10, 25 November 2018 diff hist −105‎ Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Beyond modeling: hopefully this is rephrasing is a better expression of what the Forbes article was trying to say and her career move. Vans shoes "first step" awful pun, rephrase that too.
• 22:4922:49, 25 November 2018 diff hist +267‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Template:Cite press release. another archive-url
• 21:5821:58, 25 November 2018 diff hist +206‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Fix another dead url.
• 21:4721:47, 25 November 2018 diff hist +12‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Text was a direct quote inside a reference. Reason for moving it outside reference wasn't explained. Move it back inside the reference. Undid revision 823931871 by Catasprone (talk) Tag: Undo
• 19:3919:39, 25 November 2018 diff hist −278‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Rephrase. No need to emphasize that Mario Testino is a famous photographer, or the details of how they were introduced.
• 19:2119:21, 25 November 2018 diff hist +17‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Advertisement: formatting
• 19:2019:20, 25 November 2018 diff hist +2,336‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ Work needed
• 18:3518:35, 25 November 2018 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Advertisement: fix indentation.
• 18:3418:34, 25 November 2018 diff hist +1‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Replace Archive IS with Web Archive because much of the necessary information comes from page 2 of the article which was not stored at Archive IS.
• 18:1818:18, 25 November 2018 diff hist +25‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Ref improve. Template:Cite press release. also overlink.
• 18:1518:15, 25 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Rephrase. instead of "Angel status" it is better to simply say she moved on to other projects.
• 18:0618:06, 25 November 2018 diff hist +298‎ Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Personal life: Rephrase slightly to better explain what the campaign was about and add source that isn't directly PETA
• 17:5717:57, 25 November 2018 diff hist −78‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Remove odd detail about her (hippy surfer) parents living out of a truck for six months when they first got married. Was only added April 6, 2018‎ by Special:Contributions/2601:647:101:D030:A848:E39E:FDC8:5C21
• 17:5517:55, 25 November 2018 diff hist +1,184‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Advertisement
• 17:5117:51, 25 November 2018 diff hist +196‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Dead url. Minor grammar fix and also that her parents "lived out of truck" seems more than a little weird out of context, in the article they are described as hippies and surfers. Rephrase probably needed.
• 17:4317:43, 25 November 2018 diff hist +850‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Not clear why anyone would object to adding an archive-url. Please follow the simple rules and explain your edits with an edit summary. Undid revision 870562480 Tag: Undo
• 17:4017:40, 25 November 2018 diff hist +43‎ Marisa Miller ‎ I'm slightly concerned about the copyright status of that image and not convinced it is properly Creactive Commons licensed but I can at least clarify that SAMCOM stands for Sales and Marketing Communication Meeting and is an event run by Anheuser-Busch InBev (AB InBev) aka Budweiser.
• 17:1517:15, 25 November 2018 diff hist +267‎ Marisa Miller ‎ minor consistency fixes.
• 17:1017:10, 25 November 2018 diff hist +156‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Ref improve. As best I can remember the point of was contrasting her early life with her career. Other can probably sources found and the text rephrased but this was an attempt to capture a recurring theme in her interviews. (Similarly her sisters being nurses was part of a theme to show she doesn't take her career choice too seriously.)
• 16:2416:24, 25 November 2018 diff hist +427‎ Marisa Miller ‎ source was an old attempt to fix a dead lifox only to support the small quote and the relevant quoted text came from an interview, albeit celebrity news from fox Tag: Undo
• 15:4115:41, 25 November 2018 diff hist +810‎ User talk:Mbinebri ‎ →‎Marisa Miller: new section
• 15:3115:31, 25 November 2018 diff hist +390‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Revert delete of properly sourced content. Her modest self opinion and self professed shyness provides contrast to her profile as a supermodel. Undid revision 860399968 by Trillfendi (talk) Tag: Undo
• 15:0715:07, 25 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ Marisa Miller ‎ User:InternetArchiveBot was responsible for ugly and inconsistent changes to the indentation. Manually fix.
• 14:5414:54, 25 November 2018 diff hist −261‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Revert edits by Special:Contributions/125.168.46.16 which added a 42 minute YouTube video of the 2007 Victoria Secret show presented by Heidi Klum. No timestamp provided for comments by Miller but more importantly no reason to suggest any of this is WP:NOTABLE
• 14:4014:40, 25 November 2018 diff hist −14‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Reflist remove colwidth=30em as this is done automatically now.
• 14:4014:40, 25 November 2018 diff hist −57‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Update ref. access-date requires URL. episode no longer has a Wikipedia page.
• 14:3714:37, 25 November 2018 diff hist +11‎ Marisa Miller ‎ What is a SAMCOM? This acronym is never explained, and is not linked to anything. How is a reader supposed to know what it means?
• 14:3514:35, 25 November 2018 diff hist +709‎ Talk:Marisa Miller ‎ →‎Advertisement: new section
• 14:2914:29, 25 November 2018 diff hist −475‎ Marisa Miller ‎ Revert. No explanation given for removing Infobox from article. Excessive number of images added.