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28 January 2022

• 23:0523:05, 28 January 2022 diff hist +51 The Last Remake of Beau Geste Tidy
• 22:5822:58, 28 January 2022 diff hist +57 The Last Remake of Beau Geste Currently? FAIL WP:RELTIME. Not current. Update.
• 22:5522:55, 28 January 2022 diff hist −6 The Last Remake of Beau Geste Not clear that this film actually is British-American. Even if it was WP:FILMLEAD says "If the nationality is not singular, cover the different national interests later." Undid revision 1048481587 by 185.241.224.242 (talk)
• 22:5322:53, 28 January 2022 diff hist −23 The Outcasts (2017 film) Currently? FAIL WP:RELTIME. Remove WP:ELDUP
• 22:5022:50, 28 January 2022 diff hist −14 Six Minutes to Midnight The source should be detailed in the reference not the article text Also copyedit.
• 22:3722:37, 28 January 2022 diff hist −89 Six Minutes to Midnight →Plot: WP:STREAMLINE "The story begins" they usually do, redundant to point it out though. Copyedit.
• 22:3222:32, 28 January 2022 diff hist −22 Six Minutes to Midnight WP:ELDUP already included as references. No need to repeat in External links section.
• 22:3222:32, 28 January 2022 diff hist −12 Six Minutes to Midnight mixed and average reviews? synonyms. just say mixed.
• 22:3122:31, 28 January 2022 diff hist +43 Six Minutes to Midnight No edit summary
• 22:3022:30, 28 January 2022 diff hist +129 In Full Bloom (film) Tidy
• 22:2522:25, 28 January 2022 diff hist −21 While at War WP:STREAMLINE "The film end" redundant. Copyedit.
• 22:2422:24, 28 January 2022 diff hist +1,091 While at War Reviews from the trades Tag: Disambiguation links added
• 22:2022:20, 28 January 2022 diff hist +11 While at War WP:MOSFILM Accolades.
• 22:1822:18, 28 January 2022 diff hist +71 Wet Season (film) WP:ALT image description. Describe the style and contents of the poster
• 22:1622:16, 28 January 2022 diff hist +100 Burden of Dreams Rotten Tomatoes 94%
• 22:1422:14, 28 January 2022 diff hist −82 Burden of Dreams Tidy.
• 22:0922:09, 28 January 2022 diff hist +10 The Cleaning Lady Tidy lists. See Help:List
• 21:4721:47, 28 January 2022 diff hist +33 Along Came a Spider (film) Bot is wrong. Link is still quite dead. Undid revision 1019463084 by InternetArchiveBot (talk) Tag: Undo
• 21:3621:36, 28 January 2022 diff hist +8 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Gross "over"
• 21:3521:35, 28 January 2022 diff hist +242 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Gross "over": Consistency.
• 21:3221:32, 28 January 2022 diff hist +1,150 Talk:Ghostbusters: Afterlife →Plot skips around?
• 21:1521:15, 28 January 2022 diff hist +375 Talk:Ghostbusters: Afterlife →Gross in the lead: Different box office gross figures round differently.
• 21:1221:12, 28 January 2022 diff hist −3 Ghostbusters: Afterlife Box office gross use the same number consistently in all three places.
• 21:1221:12, 28 January 2022 diff hist +1,276 Talk:Ghostbusters: Afterlife Rounding amount trivial compared to the gross and the break even point. We cannot claim the film was any kind of financial success.
• 21:1121:11, 28 January 2022 diff hist −12 Ghostbusters: Afterlife Mixed to positive? Don't equivocate and don't WP:PUFF. RT 62% and MC 45% can reasonably be described as mixed. See also https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Film/Archive_48#Mixed_to_positive_/_Mixed_to_negative
• 20:5520:55, 28 January 2022 diff hist +1,286 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Gross "over"
• 20:4220:42, 28 January 2022 diff hist +207 Nightmare Alley (2021 film) WP:ALT image description. Describe the style and contents of the poster. First attempt, and I'm it could be more descriptive but it is better than nothing.
• 20:3620:36, 28 January 2022 diff hist +1,120 Talk:Nightmare Alley (2021 film) →Critical response section should include film critics: new section
• 20:2020:20, 28 January 2022 diff hist +4,726 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Critical Response: Wikipedia is you. Fix the article, or at least propose specific fixes to the guidelines.
• 20:1920:19, 28 January 2022 diff hist +14 Nightmare Alley (2021 film) Long plot. WP:FILMPLOT recommends 400-700 words. Plot is over 900 words.
• 19:3519:35, 28 January 2022 diff hist −6 Nightmare Alley (2021 film) WP:MOSFILM Accolades. Column names for the table are typically Award, Category, Recipients, and Result. Also MOS:AMP Avoid unnecessary ampersands
• 19:0619:06, 28 January 2022 diff hist +61 Template talk:Rotten Tomatoes prose →MOS:SLASH out of 10
• 19:0519:05, 28 January 2022 diff hist +364 Template talk:Rotten Tomatoes prose →MOS:SLASH out of 10: new section
• 19:0019:00, 28 January 2022 diff hist −23 The Suicide Squad (film) Rotten Tomatoes specifically writes "average rating 7.5 out of 10" so if you want to avoid repetition how about referring to the first one as a "score" instead of "approval rating". See also MOS:SLASH and "use out of 10" instead of /10.
• 18:5418:54, 28 January 2022 diff hist −16 The Suicide Squad (film) WP:FILMGENRE better to just stick to primary genre. Undid revision 1068494818 by N1kkNammz (talk) Tag: Undo
• 18:5218:52, 28 January 2022 diff hist −91 Jodorowsky's Dune WP:ELDUP already included as references. No need to repeat in External links section.
• 18:4918:49, 28 January 2022 diff hist −81 Jodorowsky's Dune Ancient warning comment not needed.
• 18:4918:49, 28 January 2022 diff hist −13 Jodorowsky's Dune WP:MOSFILM Accolades. Column names for the table are typically Award, Category, Recipients, and Result. (It is redundant anyway, Award nominees are Recipients of nominations.)
• 08:4308:43, 28 January 2022 diff hist −9 The Legend of Vox Machina Copyedit
• 07:5307:53, 28 January 2022 diff hist +15 God Said Ha! Currently? FAIL WP:RELTIME
• 07:4807:48, 28 January 2022 diff hist +346 Talk:Dave Chappelle: Live in Real Life Positive review despite his negative view of The Closer
• 07:4407:44, 28 January 2022 diff hist −306 Dave Chappelle: Live in Real Life Merge duplicate ref Tag: Reverted
• 07:4307:43, 28 January 2022 diff hist +501 Dave Chappelle: Live in Real Life Copyedit. It is horribly redundant to repeat the directors names like that. The reviewer thought this was better than the The Closer and I think it is important to mention that. Tag: Reverted
• 07:1807:18, 28 January 2022 diff hist +19 Talk to Her WP:RELTIME avoid "now", be specific and say when or leave it out.
• 07:1607:16, 28 January 2022 diff hist −2 Talk to Her Box office gross $51,001,550 rounded to $51 million. Figures according to Box office mojo. Tag: references removed
• 07:1407:14, 28 January 2022 diff hist −2 Talk to Her Revert unexplained change of Box office gross. The Infobox and the article should match. Undid revision 995952490 by 2001:44C8:444B:6072:19CF:C31C:C9E0:6AB6 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 07:1007:10, 28 January 2022 diff hist +2 Jane Got a Gun Marketing is part of the Release process.
• 07:0907:09, 28 January 2022 diff hist +14 Jane Got a Gun Revert unexplained nowiki tag and minor plot changes. Please follow the simple rules and explain your changes. This page is marked as using American so you should discuss on the talk page before making any further changes such as "neighbor" to "neighbour" Undid revision 1065732142 by 2A00:23C4:2A05:5601:2DD3:E474:DCCD:2E81 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 07:0607:06, 28 January 2022 diff hist −186 Escape Plan: The Extractors WP:FILMPLOT Mid- and post-credit scenes should generally not be included in the plot summary.
• 06:5706:57, 28 January 2022 diff hist −119 How to Train Your Dragon (2010 film) Tidy reference.